All Comments on 'He Was My Birthday Present'
by sexygirl76
- 9 Comments
but minus the incest. Hot, unique idea - I was into it! Good job!
After reading this, you are now my new favourite author! Keep up the good work!
Loved every single word. I hope you planned on making another story ivolving these two characters...
This story was great, and for all those non believers i was an 18 year old with 42DD's so deal with that! PLEASE write another story with these two I NEED to know what happens!
I LOVED this story, especially how Derek was sweet and even loving with her... But that in the end he decided to return and be with her, all because he had come to truly care about her...
I would LOVE to read what happens when he DOES come back, and how things are between them...
That was AMAZING!!! PLEASE write another one! It's sexy AND sweet, a perfect combo. Incredable.
I love to go back and re-read the stories I love most over and over again, and this is deffinatly one of them...
It's both mortifying that her parent's would do something like this, but then romantic and sweet the way he is with her, and finally with the thought of more to come...
I do hope that your planning on writing a sequel... I would SO love to read and find out what if he come's back again for her * without being paid *, and see if something should becomes between the two of them... Maybe he even "quitting" because of her...
PLEASE add a Part 2...
Please, please, please write Part 2... I would love to see what they'd be like together when he's not getting paid... Especially if he stop's being a prostitute so he can be with her...