All Comments on 'Head Games at School Ch. 02'
by stephen55
- 3 Comments
...title about says it all...great story. can't lay any criticism on this one, keep them coming. hot sex, intense hockey (and I don't even know much about it...hockey, that is), can't beat it
Great story,
Love where it's going, the sex is hot and the actual storytelling is great.
Only slightly
unclear thing at the moment is Kris' character..
We're in Ken's head, so he's easiest to understand, and Trish has verbalized her motivations to a degree, but Kris kinda feels like she's just..there.
She was introduced as fairly innocent, and now hints at thoughts and a history that suggest otherwise - which is great - but I feel like her motivations could be explored a little more..
Really not that big of a deal though, story is awesome and hot as hell, keep the chapters coming! :]