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Well done story. Yeah, I'm also wondering what the parents will think? Who knows besides that author, as stranger things have happened in the fictional world of Erotica. Had to chuckle when Erica was telling Steve that "Your words can lie, but your lips can't". Didn't seem to work that good when she married Eddie, just saying. It's nice that little brother can take care of his big sister. Even better when he can make her scream Yessss! YESSSS, YESSSSS!
So many things in this story resonated with me, particularly the expressions about opening yourself up to the possibility of being hurt for the potential of finding love and true happiness. I guess that's the risk you take. Goddamn I hate cheaters. Especially ones that abandon their wife during one of the most painful things a woman can go through. Fuck Eddie. Hope he gets his comeuppance.
Hopefully things work out for the loving B/S pair. After the shit she's endured and also his suffering to a lesser extent, they deserve a happy ending.
As she is single,working a lot,is she on the pill?.If not welcome to motherhood.
It's always great to read a story where it's not just the sex, but the love that is being shown. Great story - about to start the second chapter!
No dust up of her first "Staker"? Hugs has to retake her maiden name then they will match, and everyone will assume their married. buy some cheap rings, just take them off before Mom and Dad come to visit.
I absolutely love this one and think it is one of your best. I've read both parts few times and always enjoy it.
Great story, looking forward to reading the next chapter. Well Done 5 stars
I also had an incestuous relationship with my first cousin. It lasted nearly four years, ending when we were caught. Started at 13 and continued until we were 17 in 1971. The ructions were horrific, those were different times in Australia, understanding was zero..
Her family shifted away out West, and we were forbidden contact on the pain of ostracism.
But the forced split did enough. She never spoke to me again until her mother’s funeral and then only curtly. It saddens me that we ended that way, That’s families I suppose. My wife and her husband do not know and no one has told them to this day the reasons why there is a schism in the families.
Loved your story. I come here to read incest tales to remind me of those wonderful days.
Great story, well worth the 5/5 I scored with.
Will read more of your tales.
I have commented several times to different Authors incest stories. I had an incestuous relationship with one of my Aunts while growing up. My moms very young sister. She was 10 yrs older than me and I would love to tell the story on Lit. but the underage thing would not let me publish it. We carried on for 9 yrs. I was in Viet Nam and was wounded and when Sadie received the news she was brokenhearted and went to town and got drunk. When she left the bar she was hit on the street by another drunk in a car and died 2 days later. I was still in the hospital myself overseas at the time. When I got home I had mom take me to Aunt Sadie's grave. I wept and wept. God I loved that woman SOOOO much. To this day 52 yrs. later I still go to her grave at least 2 times a yr. even though it is 350 miles from me. I talk to her(yeah I know crazy huh). I did find a woman that I married and we had 44 yrs together before the big "C" took her from me. I loved my wife dearly but never ever forgot my love for my Aunt. I never told my wife my story but she knew something was different when we would go to the grave. But other family members were also buried at the grave site so maybe she just took it as a family visit. I do believe that my mom knew of our love though, she hinted something to that effect once. When she took me to the grave the first time and saw me break down she knew at that moment I believe. Yes my Aunt Sadie was my first love but also the strongest love I have ever felt towards any woman. I still think of her almost daily. I am 72 now and still get it up thinking of her. She taught me how to treat a woman, how to love a woman and how to make love to a woman. My parents taught the same values of how to treat a woman but Sadie took the values and put them to real life lessons for me. Thank you for a wonderful Brother/Sister love story and I can't wait for ch. 2 I truly believe incest love IS the strongest love of all.
I've made no secret as I have commented on other incest stories that this category is MY fetish. But not just any incest story will do. It must be well written, include some physical descriptions, some play-by-play of the sex is helpful, appropriate emotion for the build-up and history/background to set the plot. Oh, and actual romance is pretty much a must. This along with common day-to-day interaction creates realism imo. If a story meets these criteria, it can't help but be loving, sexy, hot, erotic, beautiful, etc imo. And this story has it ALL!! I have read other incest stories on LIT that just blew me away but this one i believe topped the charts. Sorry I can't give more than 5*. -dave
What a hot story. I can’t wait to read the next chapter. Thanks for sharing it with us.
i like your writing style. pulled me in right away and kept me entertained...keep up the good work.
She has opened herself to pain, it's time for her to be able receive the love.
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I've enjoyed your stories a lot. I just finished with another author who writes a new chapter every four months, and after sixteen chapters it is to be continued....... Are any of your stories still in the process of not ending yet. If so I will put them on the back burner for later. Keith.
I plan to spend the next while adding to some existing storylines, which will be welcome news to those who have been asking for new chapters. I plan an eighth and final chapter for Becca and her young man (Telemarketing Turnabout), another for Miranda and Michael (Ms. Walker's Class), and also for Grace and Brian (Goodness Gracious). Christie and John (Love me, Love my Dogs) will also continue, as will Didi and Ken (Exposure Compensation Factor). I would like to wrap things up for Ro and David (When in Rome). I feel like Monica, Karly and Dave (She Hates Me? Not!) has at least one more story to tell. Kelly and Todd (Oh Baby! What a Sitter!) have just begun. Jane, Gary... and Helen (No Accounting for Taste) will return. And of course, Samantha and Alex (On the Train), and Karen and Dan (Just Being Neighbourly) are both just getting started.
Really a good story, with a slow progress of the plot and a really hot ending, but with feelings of love, not just lust. If they were not siblings, they might be in the romance section.
I really hope there is a continuation of this story.
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English (yet), is not my native language.
A well written story is hard to beat and yours is certainly one of the better ones listed on this site. Grammar and spelling are important in story telling, for improper usage tends to take away from the storyline. Thanks you for your efforts and I look forward to reading more of your stories.
In Here Comes The Bride...great story, nice buildup and lots of action at the end but I'd like to see what comes up after "the problem" becomes a problem. Please continue this story with family visits, home visits and surprises that may pop up along the way. Don't leave your fans hanging.
I love how you write, I can picture everything! Please continue this! Thank you!
This is a very hot and well-written story, with a good buildup, and some hot, sexy action. Personally, I was looking forward to reading about her red pubes contrasting with her fair skin but it was your story, and you can write it any way you want, so if shaved is your thing then so be it. Well done, my friend, and I look forward to reading more of your work.
We so enjoyed it together. We just love reading good hot stories. Still another chapter to go and we'll finish what we've started. Those that have read my comments know my Nephew and I read them while he's inside me. I thought he was gonna cum with me a few times but has managed to hold off. Wonderfully done. Keep writing.
TBC
I particularly like the comment below where they said something about do some more ,my same sentiments you haven't finished yet have you??? ,so engaging love it thanks..(".oh I'm a girl fabulous").
please I hope there is much more to this story to cum.
I really enjoyed this story....you are getting better at character development.
You must continue with more çhapters including what mom dad and there siblings have 2 say
You have got to be joking, there is no way anyone would not want this to go on as long as you can.
w hith ALL thestories u r writing when do u sleep and how do u keep from getting them mixed up im lucky if i can walk and chew gum at the same time. great story which one of all the others r u going to finnish
you have to expand on this story, please. what a fantastic story..... well written and amazing. thank you
Would like to see this story unfold a little more maybe another ch or 2
And still has a lot of potential.
Please add this to the list of stories needing more episodes.
Ramjet
Now that you've done most of the follow-ups to the stories you mentioned I hope you'll look towards this story as well for another chapter. I really liked the build-up and I would really love to see more of these two. Maybe some clever revenge on the asshole ex too? Maybe Steve and him get in a fight or Steve ends up in a hospital after protecting Erica and he finds out he has like a different bloodtype than his family and that he's adopted or something and they can officially be together? Since you already established (I think, IIRC) that only the girls are redheads, and I don't think you ever mentioned that Steve and Erica looked alike.
Either way - absolutely loved this story and hope to see another chapter soon.
I hope the sister will wise up and enrol herself into university. Working as a waitress when your tits become saggy is just undignified.
I loved this story. Please make a sequel or add more chapters.
Definition: Relative Humidity; The sweat that runs down the crack of your ass when you are fucking your relative (s).
Great story,I give it a 4 on the Budweiser scale. Hope to read more about these two.!!!
This is a story that needs to be continued, begs for the problems to arise, and any if possible good solutions, or bad. Sometimes these things turn on their own.
Awesome story. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the great work. You have a new fan in me. ^__^
Okay... I'm not exactly sure why againstyourskin felt the need to write a book here related to how much exposition you should put in your story. Since he/she has not posted any samples of their own writing, you just have to take it as one person's opinion. Now as to rightbank, I tend to agree that the title did not quite match to the content as closely as on most of your other stories that I have read. Over all, though, I felt that the story had an appropriate amount of exposition and was interesting in its own right. I just hope that you continue to write and post here for our entertainment.
Thank you for taking the time to write a readable story and posting it where we get to see it ! ! ! ! ! ! !