by regularguy13
Chris, why did you wrote the second page like that? Why the odd dialogue?? Why are they going so much into detail about fucking fate, and the universe? 😭😭😭 Nobody talks like that
"Nobody talks like that"? Are you serious? Admittedly, there are a lot of people who wouldn't talk like that, but some do, and that number goes up -- significantly -- when people start getting high.
Great story. I had to go to Wikipedia to find out the 18 year old's name. Juturna would be a tough one to grow up with but cool for the tale. My bet is that there are a lot of children created in hot tubs whose parents have enjoyed this story. Thanks!