by bjmichaels
You are one of the best writers on here and always love your hot stories.
The first three pages had me hard and sitting on the edge of my seat for what would happen next. Page four was a disappointment, for me. I would have loved for you and Dustin to be together as a couple, if not married. Just my opinion though.
I loved the first part. Until the corporate take-over. I think that was a needless way to move towards the ending. But I really shouted at my monitor when you moved the story to San Francisco.
Another great read. Could have done without the too happy of an ending though.