by GeorgieH
Georgie, as good as "In the Queue". Great evocation of the Underground, and a hot story. Good work.
I love public sex and zipless fuck stories and yours is no exception. very believable which made it even hotter. well done.
Your generosity in providing pleasure extends to your perfectly conceived and executed writing. The story, itself, brings back fond memories of similar moments on the crowded subway cars of Manhattan and one utterly outrageous episode at a crowded bar. Thanks for the story and the memories.
You bring to life so vividly a fantasy I have had on the Tube so many times, I have read your story over and over. Thank you for such an erotic story xxx
I'm not sure if it's the British thing, but reading this made me feel very turned on, and warm, and mushy in a... smart way. This is a stark contrast compared to the quality of the other stories here. Perhaps some parts seemed a little forced, but I honestly couldn't tell. For me, I just loved how cute and polite and geeky the whole scenario was, much like the guy in the story.
great writing. you wrote so well felt i was there in the train behind you.