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Intervention

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"Hi, sugar, you miss me?" she said as she swung into the empty seat on the other side of the booth.

"Did you go somewhere?" Dean said, his face dispassionate as he looked up from his books. "Oh yeah, that's right, your mother said that you went up to Concord for the weekend. Did you have a good time?"

Melanie found herself taken aback for a moment, unaware that Dean had known about her weekend excursion. A light of caution flashed in her mind as she considered her next responses carefully.

"It was okay," she said indifferently, as it had been nothing out of the ordinary.

"Anyone else go with you," Dean asked, "I know you don't really like to drive on long trips and Concord is, what, three or four hours away?"

"Oh, just the girls, you know, the usual bunch," Melanie said, trying to make it sound like just another one of those impromptu trips that they sometimes made.

She didn't give him a chance to ask any other questions about the trip as she quickly changed the subject from the weekend past to the one coming up, telling him in a burst of exuberance that she was looking forward to the concert down in Philadelphia.

Dean waited a very long moment before reacting. So long that a look of concern began to appear on Melanie's face.

"I thought we were supposed to be spending some time apart, isn't that what you said?" Dean finally replied. "To see if we really belonged together as a couple."

"Where did you ever get a silly idea like that?" Melanie said, acting like it was the first she was hearing of it. "Of course we belong together."

"That's not what you said Friday afternoon," Dean reminded her.

"Oh, don't pay any attention to that. I was just upset about those silly earrings," Melanie said, appearing to relent.

Again, Dean took his time in answering, prompting Melanie to raise the ante.

"You know, I was thinking, maybe we could stay overnight in Philadelphia after the concert and see what happens," she said.

"And what do you think might happen?" Dean asked.

"Oh, you know," Melanie continued.

"No, actually, I don't," Dean countered. "Why don't you tell me?"

"Here, in front of all these people?" Melanie replied.

"You could whisper it in my ear," Dean suggested.

"I'd rather it be a surprise," Melanie finally said.

"Well, I guess it really doesn't matter, because I don't have the tickets anymore, I sold them Saturday afternoon and used the money to finally get that computer I wanted. Picked it up yesterday."

"You spent my concert tickets on some stupid computer?" Melanie said, her flash of anger causing her to momentarily forget herself. "I mean, why would you do that?"

"Oh, let's just say I had an awakening," Dean offered.

"I don't understand," Melanie said, not used to having things not go her way. "What does that mean?"

"For one thing, I guess it means that you won't be going to the concert," Dean said, barely managing to suppress a smile.

"But I really wanted to go," Melanie insisted, not seeming to grasp yet that she had lost a lot more than the concert tickets.

"Well, here's a thought; why don't you ask Matt to take you?" Dean suggested, his smile now clear. "I hear he loves to take weekend road trips."

With that, he turned his attention back to the textbooks spread out in front of him, the smile on his face now impossible to get rid of.

Melanie sat there for a few long seconds before finally lifting herself out of the seat and quickly heading for the door. The expression on her face was one she really didn't want anyone else to see as it finally sunk in that she had just lost the best thing she had going for herself.

Watching her exit, Shirley also couldn't help but smile. Like the star of one of her favorite television shows, she loved it when a plan came together.

END

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Hiram325Hiram3257 months ago

I always enjoy an Ann Douglas story. Well done, 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Fantastic - I have just found you Ann and I am loving discovering your characters. This was he best! Well told and couldn't help but smile at the end.

DarkChocolate9DarkChocolate9about 3 years ago

Every man has a "first time" but this story, artfully told from a woman's perspective, shows what most men miss by not paying close enough attention to a woman's power of communication. Ms Douglas' superior talent as a writer had me wishing that "Shirley" had been my first, and my first was pretty good. Ann Douglas is a gift to the world.

CanadianMCanadianMover 3 years ago

Great older/younger story. I liked the realism in his inexperience and how she guides him to the pleasures.

RichardDastardRichardDastardover 3 years ago
Bravo !!!!

Such a fabulous story that took me back forty years to when I lost my virginity to an older woman. Having someone so willing to pass on their experiences is a priceless gift that many fail to see or appreciate !!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Every young man's Dream

Madame Douglas wonderful story telling as usual.

Merci

Englishman in Paris

Ann DouglasAnn Douglasover 3 years agoAuthor

Once more I just want to thank all those kind enough to leave a comment about the story - both on here and directly via email. They were all greatly appreciated.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
You never disappoint.

As soon as I saw a new story from you Ann I knew I was going to enjoy a well written tale. I was right. You always portray easily believable characters and your story lines unfold well. Never rushed or choppy. And the intimate scenes are intensely erotic more than simply pornographic. Nicely done!

Ravey19Ravey19over 3 years ago
First Of Yours I've Read

And definitely an enjoyable one and not going to be the last either. Maybe a tad predictable but I thought the writing was good and the final dialogue between Dean and Melanie was excellent.

Personally, I like a little longer stories since the characters can be fleshed out more thoroughly and various incidents can be brought in.

The affair with Shirley was a single occurrence with no hint as to whether it's a one-off or more to come. He definitely would need more experience so is Shirley destined for a comeback until he moves away to college. Yes please. 5 from me.

monster99monster99over 3 years ago

you always have characters that we can all at least partly recognize, either in ourselves or people we know...and this is no exception...we have all known Melanies in our day...nice to see her get what she deserves!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Always Wonderful

I enjoy reading your stories because you have a very good gift at expressing feelings/thoughts in your words. You have a great ability to make a reader eager to see what come next as well as stirring thoughts along with feelings as one reads your stories. Please keep writing and sharing such a great gift that you have in making things come to life :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
THANK YOU!!!

Thanks for another great story. I look forward to seeing your posts, and wish you’d write more. You’re the best!

BTW, there’s a typo near the bottom of page three where the word “potion” is used instead of “position”.

SirBleuSmokeSirBleuSmokeover 3 years ago
Great Read

A great story as always. Enjoyed the way you developed the storyline and carried us to the perfect finish.

Happy2pervHappy2pervover 3 years ago
Always a good read

Exactly what anonymous said - thank you!

TSreaderTSreaderover 3 years ago
A lovely story!

Ann, as always, your stories are wonderful. And this coming of age story is another wonderfully written story. Thank you so much for sharing this with us!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Always a Good Read

It makes me happy when I see one of your stories posted. They are always a nice slice of life with an interesting story that is erotic rather than porn. Please keep them coming. Thank you.

ElectricOutcast2XElectricOutcast2Xover 3 years ago
Confession time

When I first saw the name D"'Angelo's", I thought the name was in reference to your more older work "Delayed Gratification", but I read that story and realized that the particular diner's name was Tony's. It's a very good story that actually has similarities to Delayed Gratification, a good story as well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Interesting story

Thank you. I thought it was interesting and it held my attention, even though it's quite long by the standards of these stories. What I like about it most is that the characters aren't stereotypes - e.g. it's shy Dean who initiates fucking with experienced Shirley and not the other way around.

luedonluedonover 3 years ago

Nicely done, Anne

Young men like Dean need instruction from experienced older ladies. Some nice young lady(ies) will eventually gain the benefit of the things he has been taught. But not Melanie. All that Melanie has now is an oaf like Cody,

Lue

chytownchytownover 3 years ago
I Just Love Your Writings*****

Very entertaining storylines and so well written. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great story

I enjoyed the character development & your concise writing style. Thanks Rob

steppinontoessteppinontoesover 3 years ago
Exceptional

I really wish I had such a fortuitous education, had to settle for back seat of a Nash Rambler. You certainly have a way with words, I have enjoyed all of your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great story

Great storyline... I remember lusting after a few of the women around me when I was younger. The whole story line was very well done and enjoyable

DVant10denCDVant10denCover 3 years ago

Phenominal, this was the first of your stories I have read. I don't know if there was something almost wholesome about it, but while a bit predictable it didn't go exactly the way I expected. I liked how Melanie got her comeuppance at the end. Offered a bit of closure to the whole thing. I for one greatly appreciate it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Disappointing end, I've added another 8 words for you.

Watching her exit, Shirley also couldn't help but smile. Like the star of one of her favorite television shows, she loved it when a plan came together...

And the diners gave a round of applause.

5* given

jkthekatjkthekatover 3 years ago
wonderful!

I wish I had a female mentor like that!! A story- a lesson - great sex, and a young man grows up!! Great!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
An awakening

The kind of awakening from which most young men could benefit. You have finely tuned the plot with believable dialog. What's not to love?

CumminginsiderherCumminginsiderherover 3 years ago
Nice A-Team tie in at the end

Good story and you get extra points for the A-Team pop culture reference. I don't remember the exact years but a good, "Where's the Beef" and "Help I've fallen and I can't get up" reference would have played well also lol.

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefover 3 years ago
Well done!

God love the Shirleys of the world. Kind of wish I had a Shirly when I was just starting out. It's hell when you have to learn by trial and error when it could be so much better if you could learn from a teacher with experience and patience. Not saying I didn't have fun learning, but thinking of all the wasting time and effort when it could be so much better with a little knowledge.

Great story, as usual.

Eugenia4allEugenia4allover 3 years ago

Lovely story. I am happy it turned out the way it did. Intervention is the perfect name! 5*s

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyover 3 years ago

Delightful story! Everyone got what they deserved.

5

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Well done.

We’d all have loved to have had a mentor guide us. One small mistake where George refers to Roy as Jim at the start, else, well done indeed. You tell a good story. Ties together well from scene to scene.

FriskyMindFriskyMindover 3 years ago

I started the story expecting a lesbian theme, and while the sex portion wasn’t my cup of tea, the story drew me in and kept me reading. We all knew a Melanie eh? Nice to see the good guy win! And Shirley is beautiful:).

Cracker270Cracker270over 3 years ago

I really like it when the good guys win. And you word painted a beautiful character.

mekometermekometerover 3 years ago

Great writing and story as always Anne,more please.

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