All Comments on 'It all Works Out in he End'

Hot bi action, well written!

THanks for the feedback :)

Truth? I waited for a comment to be posted before I said what was in my mind. So … this is good. Really good. The bi action isn’t my thing but I can’t deny great storytelling. Creative, so very well written, just plain hot. Five Stars and Following you. Big fan, Dan

Great story with great action. You could definitely use a good proofreader though