by oggyoggy
That cleared some things up. Though there are still some mysteries. IMO, the best chapter so far. I'd bet he has a lot more family to plow through though, (figuratively, in more ways than one), and some more secrets to discover. For example, Joyce liked it too much? I can just see his reaction to how many women ended up face down between his mother's thighs. She probably was a bisexual seduction phenom. And he thought she was strait laced. Ha! What other secrets and treasures will he discover? I cant wait to find out. Solid five from me.
Jedd
Well that was fun till you decided to include nonconsential rape. If alcohol acts like a date rape drug on the woman, then him knowingly fucking her in this state is tantamount to rape. Not my thing. Next time include this in the rosa-blanca.ru so reader doesn't waste time.
Shame because it was a fun story, fairly well written.
Another go chapter but I also thought the alcohol induce inhibition was wrong but this part overall was still hot.