All Comments on 'Jimmy Gets a Girl'

What a disgusting, male chauvinist fantasy! I loved it.

It perhaps belongs in fetish rather than BDSM unless you have a coming twist. I just think a lot of readers may shy away from BDSM, I usually do.

I'm really looking forward to seeing more of Jim's world.

Unfortunately it was not my idea for the story to be in BDSM, its where it got put :(

to enjoy the written porn of a 'hard-drinking, whore-hopping degenerate' when they write quite well, create interesting characters, can spell and know how to paragraph and punctuate for pacing and tension. Any time you're ready to write -- I'm ready to read. Well done...take care -- hcl

I love the casual exhibitionism and submission of the women. Can't wait to read more. Really hot world you're building.

Not real big on the blatant public sex for everyone to see but it definitely makes me wonder how different my life would have turned out had I been given a girl on my 18th birthday instead of being almost 29 and still never having had a girlfriend or sex.

Strange but interesting