All Comments on 'Josh and Georgia'

Nice story, about thrusting love and pleasure.

I really like reading what the woman is thinking and feeling. Much better than so many stories that are "he inserted tab A into slot B" etc. Keep up the good work.

This is an outstanding story in every respect, although one might have liked to learn more about the fight the two lovers had back at the beginning, as it would only heighten the contrast later when the two make it up. The quality of the writing here is exceptional, especially for a first submission, and the marvelously descriptive (albeit too short) love scene it written with great feeling. It is rare to find a first submission of such excellence by any author. Five stars.

Hey, thanks for the high opinion and constructive criticism! This is actually part of a much, much larger and ongoing story that I'm working on, and I wasn't sure if non-erotica was posted to this website. I'm definitely new to the scene, so I'm unsure of the rules and categories. But this is good information to have! Thanks for your comment, I appreciate it!