All Comments on 'Just Like Riding A Bike'
by patricia51
- 18 Comments
Sounds like she really loves her trusting husband - not a real bone in your body
Actually, my wife had a similar experience and it totally changed our lives together. She has become more passionate, more attentive, and more demonstrative. I welcome her bisexuality, not to mention the fact that it really turned me on when she told me about it. Magnificent.
absolutely loved it!
the story flowed very smoothly and realistically ... no extra fluff. just right, thanks.
Your story was somewhat shorter than usaul Pat, but still very erotic and loving. I wish I could write like you. Hell I wish I could write 1/2 as well as you. Anyway, the only thing I didn't like about the story was the fact that her husband was overseas. He was most likely protecting our country and his wife was cheating on him. Male or female cheating is cheating. Now don't get me wrong, many of my own stories have cheating in them, some much more so that your one time. But to cheat on a serviceman just breaks my heart. I guess because it happened to me when I was in the Navy. Bad memories! Still a great story and like I said I wish I could write 1/2 as well as you. Thanks. V
twisting the circumstances so that they did not violate a trust given to another. It is cheating.
Let's try something else; 10 years from this same time, she opens the door and finds a Korean woman and a child. The Korean woman tells her that the child is her husbands from a one night stand he had all those years ago. Would she consider it a wonderful time for him to connect with someone after months of loneliness or would she consider it a betrayal of her love and consider him a cheating scum? Somehow, I don't think she would choose the former.
I LOVED THE STORY LINE IT WAS FANTASTIC KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
Was a great story. Thanks. Did not need the tongue in the butt.
...yes I agree a highly erotic tale without that extra detail. Rimming can be a very specific fetish which is best left for times of high intimacy when hygeine is guaranteed. This was not the time or place for a rimming, unless e-coli was the aim...lol...Great eroticism - but butt out of butts..No if or buts on that one!! Sofixxx
Nice tempo. Good characters. Don't worry about the complainers, it is your story, write it your way.
i thought the pace and content of your story were great! i'm rather unsure as to why people are taking it so far, and attacking your character's morals, however. this is a fantasy, people, a STORY. there are so many cheating stories in these forums, and i've never seen anyone complain that the characters were immoral.
as for the ass-to-mouth business, it's not my thing, but i don't mind it at all. as another commenter said, don't worry about what these people say.
As well as greatly enjoying the eroticism of your story, Patricia, I really enjoy your flowing, natural prose. I'll read more of your work.
Cheers
You write the most exciting of all the lesbian stories I have seen on this site. It truly amuses me that some persons are so " moral " they are put off by some features of the story like " cheating. " I have found stories here ( not yours ) that repel me because of their cruelty ( I do not read the bdsm crap ) so I just stop. I am male, so I may not be qualified to comment but your work makes me almost envy lesbians.
A married woman to have sex with a woman isn't cheating, right? Because sex between women isn't as REAL as between a men and women.
Typical.
The ending suggests that her husband would be okay or find it amusing that she had sex with a woman. This perpetuates the idea that Lesbians exist to fulfill men's sexual fantasies.
Keep in mind that thousands of these stories lead to Life imitating Art - eventually creating false memories.