All Comments on 'Just One Kiss Pt. 03'

That was a remarkable scene you just produced. The forbidden swimming pool image of a 'straight' girl giving herself willingly to her gay friend. It is a story that many have tried to write, but few have captured it as well as you have.

I remember my own first encounter with an older lover and how they knew my body better than I did. Just as you have written the encounter here, I am certain there will be many a 'straight' girl/woman wanting to be in Keri's position.

5 stars. I'd give you more if they allowed it.

I think it is about time that Keri accepted her new found sexuality and gave Chris the old heave-ho. I would like to think that in the next installment we will be treated to a full on bedroom scene where Carmen complets her seduction and Keri fully embraces her new lesbian urges. Very well written and the sex was very hot and very satisfying (blush). Five well deserved stars.

That scene so tumescent, so sensually charged. Love what you’re doing with your characters. Wow.

Honestly, I never really believed that you could ever top Thoughts, but this one just might. There is so much to like here. The way that Keri's inner struggle is dealt with is just exquiste. The scene of her masturbating, the "throes of what the hell just happened (beautiful turn of phrase!), and having a losing argument with her body...OMFG. This is amazing.

And when it comes to slow burn and buildup, you have few peers and no equals. Thank you for this

🥱 - same old same old

I love your story lines, great description of the build up at pool side. Will be looking for the next chapter in this story. You have a great insight to the art of seduction in your stories. Thank you

Speechless! So erotic, christa! I may never write again. You are gifted. Hope there is another chapter. 5 stars...again!

Wow! loved it! more please!

Oh I loved this Christa - you write so well, and there is always something highly-charged in a straight girl's first time with another woman xxxxx

Fantastic moment of sexual realization! So hot!

Part 4!!!!

We need a part 4! Amazing story

Part 4 is on the way, I submitted it over a week ago and it got rejected but I resubmitted it.

Where's part 4?

We're so spoiled of your stories and your releasing schedule that any longer than a lil over a week sends us into acute withdrawal,_, hope they approve your resubmission soon cuz I cannot wait how it unfolds!

Believe me, I am as surprised as you are, my next effort will be to put the unedited story and only change grammar and spelling only.

Content? - 🤨

Good, very good!

Great series where Keri keeps struggling to find clarity between her ingrained image of a "nice guy with a nice relationship leading to a nice marriage yada yada" and Carmen's open offer for genuine and compassionate Sapphic eroticism. On that point, the ending with

'Did I really just get into an invisible argument with my body? I am losing my fucking mind . . . "

was great.