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Click hereJohn and I went home and just relaxed knowing George would never be heard from again. Mark on the other hand, only received twelve years. I was dumbstruck by that
sentence but he had a good lawyer and the judge was very pro-men. The other three men plead guilty and got six years. I wasn't worried about them. They were beaten, men.
I spent a lot of time at home, only going out on the occasional outing with Michelle, Susan, and John. My two best friends had decided to take a break and raise their children, now that the fathers were in prison. I didn't have any children, yet, although I did want some. In twelve years I would see what happens with Mark. Will he go away or stick around and try to make trouble. John told me not to worry. He would always be there for me, to protect me from the likes of George and Mark and the rest. Life goes on. I love John, Michelle, and even Susan. Carol and Jimmy are over often too. I will live my life without fear, because I know I am loved.
The End
Way too many loose ends. A lot not fleshed out. Julie became Judy at least once. Everyone needs a good editor. Could have been 5 stars. I can give it 4 by being generous.
Without ever finding out the motivation for the original kidnapping and rape this chapter ends up not making much sense.
I get that George and Mark were mad at getting arrested for their part in the first assault and that John & Julie fucked both of their wives but, why did all this start in the first place?
All we were ever told was whose idea it was. Even when the trials and prison sentences were briefly mentioned we never found out why this all started.
Just found this one, and enjoyed it a lot...
...no surprise there !
A 5 of course.
Good story, lots of drama, too bad Julie got raped so many times. But in the end the rapists got what was coming to them and John and Julie survived to live another day. Well done 5 stars.
You're basically saying the judge was pro rape and assault. Really?
1. Kids, oops, you caught me...she had two...he didn't.
2. Wilcox...it makes no difference to the story...but if I had written a scene with Dr. Carol and Wilcox he would have been fired.
Glad you liked the story.
In the previous chapter they had two young kids. If you recall, they were staying at the grandparent’s house the weekend of the first rape. Admittedly this flaw in logic doesn’t destroy the story, but it is an inconsistency, and the error is made more prominent since its the main focus of the last two paragraphs.
And what ever happened to Wilcox?
A rare story that follows through with some bad guys going to jail. Thank you!