All Comments on 'Katie 01: Katie's All Grown Up'
by PrincessKatie69
- 15 Comments
From the author to the commenters who seem to just... want a different story than what I'm writing: you know you can just, like, read something else, right? This is the nonsense fictional erotica that I want to write. It's pointedly not real, if it were real, it would be disgusting. That's why my characters behave like cartoonish clueless stereotypes or depraved and manipulative creeps... cause it's what I find hot in *fiction*.
Katie is not acting like a child, she's acting like the unrealistic, utterly over the top, unbelievably clueless woman that exists in my mind. I don't want people who act like mature and functional adults in love or lust but are related, I want nasty, seductive trash that is horrifying in every place except fiction. You don't have to read it if it's not for you, but commenting with what I should be doing according to your particular tastes isn't going to get you anywhere. I'm a grown, educated and well-adjusted woman who's writing what is basically fantasy to get myself off. It's for me more than it is for you.
For those of you who love it... Thanks, you're getting lots more. Britney and her (bio) daddy are just as unrealistic and they're coming soon.
xoxo
Katie
YES. LETS GO. This is EXACTLY the kind of stories I’ve wanted to read. Utterly depraved and somewhat clueless daughters being personal cocksleeves for their family! You’re such a good girl! I cannot WAIT to read Britney’s stories. And I’ve already started to crush on Katie. I wish she was my daughter (in my fantasies!)
Princess Katie, I think your story is funny and over the top silly. That's ok, I didn't come for a lecture on "how things should be done." Maybe we all have secret fantasies that are silly in the light of day.
You left out the part where "Katie" was skipping home after sunset and went into dark alley, and a big man jumped out and took all her clothes off her, but she just laughed and laughed because she knew there was no way those little clothes would fit him...
This is a great start. The dynamic you have going between Roger and Katie is delightfully naughty and really makes you excited for what they'll do next. Excited for the next part.
Katie's vernacular makes her sound like she's a 5 year old - And as for Roger her dad, he sounds like a 12 year old trying to talk his way into getting his first feel . . . . 👎👎