All Comments on 'Kisser’s Homecoming Impact'
by EgmontGrigor2020
- 5 Comments
I really like the witty dialogue, BUT the story really really really need an overhaul of spelling and grammar!
A really good story, but a difficult read because of the spelling and grammar issues. A four star that could have been a 5*.
detroitdave
Thanks for you useless comment, 'Anonynmous'. Oh, are you one of those pathetic trolls I've heard about that lurk the shadows of Literotica published stories? EgmontGrigor2020
Your comment to whomever will put off readers.
The two anon comments were quite succinct advising ways to improve.
Your comment stopped me from bothering to read.
Wow! You guys! A pirate story wouldn't be effective without a few "arggh's," and a Egmont Grigor story just wouldn't be effective with "proper" spelling and grammar! 😉