All Comments on 'Larry's Sexual Journey Ch. 14'
by purfecthost
- 6 Comments
Thank you. There's another chapter to come. Hope you'll enjoy it too.
It's been a while since the previous chapter but it was worth the wait. Looking forward to the next one. Very clever and erotic scenario you've been spinning.
I hate to be that guy but this might need editing. He penetrates Jenn even though she's wearing underwear? Seems like this was rushed and you meant the accidental penetration to happen on the second pass when she's not wearing underwear. Meanwhile, the chapter disrupts the pattern of Larry getting at least some relief whether accidental or otherwise. Having Margo suddenly decide she's fine with him ejaculating in her ruins the tension. It's a more interesting dynamic if she's using him to orgasm but doesn't want him to get off. And then there's the pregnancy risk option that's gone unused. And why end the sessions next week, better to keep it going, it's boring if they just cave to their desires in one go. And of course there's a million positions left to pose in.
Really enjoyed the story! Yes there are area's that could use improvement and editing, but the story is such a turn to me that I'm willing to let it all go. Sometimes it's just more fun to go with the flow. I do hope that there is more to come.
It's been quite awhile, having trouble figuring the storyline?