by steelring
The first time with the policemen were a mistake...The second time wasn't...I would have taken the child to the policeman to take care...If he was married he should take responsability...
And the wife is no better. I feel sorry for the child not knowing whom her dad is and being saddled with these two losers for parents.
Not my kink, but if hubby was good with two or three fucking her, and she really liked it, she has license to screw anyone.
But it works for them . It would have been better had there been more interaction with others, older woman warning her, young males harassing her feeling her up, but short of rape.
It would add excitement and realism. As written it was bit bland.
The kid(s) were obviously conceived on that trip. Are they sure they're his?
Such a fantastic tale.
Ignore the naysayers... keep on writing
There's so much mediocrity (and crap) on this site. Your writing is fresh air. Keep writing!
Unless I misread, I think this story ended with the wife as a cheating slut who got knocked up by someone other than the hubby. That sucks.
have Plan B pills in France. Surely, they are not so stupid as not to have taken the pill the day after she was filled by French cops twice.
Their health (think aids), their marriage (think pregnancy by another man) and their respect (who wants a slut for a wife). Not very clever and lacking any decent or likeable characters it just wasn't fun or entertaining to read.
both of these seem very immature and irrational. She risk her health and his and neither bothered to even refrain from fucking until medical test were done. Very stupid in this day and time.
Another nice tale. Being a modest person, I am impressed when someone can parade around like that. The fact that she was wet afterwards meant she knew she was vulnerable and prone to what happened. I am surprised she didn't keep this up in later years. Still, be on the pill if you are going to doing that, for goodness sake!
So you let your wife exposure herself, get knocked up by strange cops and life is grand. Wow, your life must really be awful, if this is the good stuff.
You have a way with words, especially how you describe a woman's body and how she reacts to sexual stimulus. What else is amazing is the number of dimwits your stories, or this genre, attracts. Dumbfounded to hear so many comment as if these people and their stories are real. It's fiction folks. No children were conceived by cops or anyone else during the writing of this FICTIONAL story! This is supposed to be entertainment. I'm not a fan of Okra, but millions in the south love it. I don't disparage them for their taste. Why do you care that going naked is a turn on for wife & husband? He was turned on by her actions and some, maybe more than you think, like to fantasize about our wives doing the same thing. How boring life would be if we all loved each other the same way! Please keep writing. Very exciting!
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It was great until the pregnancy. Children's lives are not toys. The story would've been fun if it just ended with the adults having a wild memory, but bringing a child into the world that way is not sexy. When would you tell and how would the parents not totally lose respect of the child?
A lark of walking nude in a public place…maybe but what we have here is a slut in waiting and a Cuck moving from spirit to reality…. Letting your wife go around naked which in turn leads to her ducking police is not my idea of a good relationship…
Well I guess that’s an experience you’ll never forget times two. I didn’t realize the French and English were so close so to speak.
"This is serious fiction." Very good descriptions of Sophia walking naked in a variety of locations, and of their loving makings and her visceral reactions. As usual extremely well written.