by ChivalrousCuck
I appreciate the attempt at an ending, but the idea of this happening to a 82-year-old man is very… blech. A dude in their 80s would be lucky to not die from a heart attack at half the stuff going on here. Dominant or not, I cannot imagine anyone wanting to see an 80+ man in a speedo, get spanked, etc. It’s honestly more humiliating for the guys and girls doing the spanking. When a man beats an old horse for failing to pull a heavy load, it’s a statement on the man’s failings, not the horse’s.
Yeah I agree with the other commenter that at some point most of the characters in the story just come off as kind of sick weirdos. I did find the story interesting, and obviously you have to suspend your disbelief in a fantasy.
However, I did skip massive portions of the story and felt like I didn't miss anything. The main character basically offers up no resistance to what happens to him and just kind of goes along with it. EVERY SINGLE other character reacts to the situation in the exact same manner.
Nobody thinks beating up an old man is weird? Nobody has any sympathy? How did this guy rise to where he was in life if every single person in his life hates him?
Does Lauren ever get tired about her Husband is more interested in her old ex husband than he is in her?
I feel like this could have been more interesting with a bit of nuance. The whole thing is kind of repetitive. The main character seems kind of nonchalant about the whole ordeal and every supporting character reacts to the situation in the exact same way.