by MancUK
Fantastic! Glad to see you’ve stuck with the boys. They’re obviously a subject you know well. There’s a moment in each of your stories when the boy kisses the man, on their own, when it’s not necessary for the sex. It’s so hot, it makes the sex seem so more! You make me ache for the young things. Can’t wait to find out how things go with Matty. Is there a spit roast in the offing?!
Brilliant! I enjoyed the fun flirty side of Olly as he rediscover’s himself!
Great story.
Loved this very good story with very hot sex. Will definitely look forward to part 2.
your writing is phenomenal. all your stories are well written and scratch the itch i have for lean teenage boys seduced into the fucking of a lifetime. the build up is always delicious and i love seeing how they submit so sweetly. please keep writing
Your story is one of the best I have read. You write very well, you have a great handling of situations and you are very detailed in the important things. I love your characters and I hope there are more than just two parts.
Your stories are completely captivating. Each character is described beautifully and the reader has a sense of their personality. I particularly liked the pace of this story. I suspect we were all as hard as Olly just reading your story. Can’t wait for more!
Got story so far. Wonder how Matty is going to feel when he finds out Olly - the object of his blatant and lust-filled desire - has fucked his roommate Jake? When Matty is sick and recovering at home. He might be completely pissed off and lose all interest in Olly or he might want to join in the fun for a hit threesome! Please write more!
Loved the part by not using the condors while riding Jake. Nothing better than shooting deep while being barebacked. Love to feel the hot flood and give a hot flood. Part two please
Hot! I really enjoyed the slow build up, hearing about Ollie's attraction to the young guys and especially the flirting between him and Jake. His hesitancy to go too fast is very real, but so pleased that they both got what they wanted in the end! More please.
So fucking hot. I can’t wait until you write of Him fucking Marty and maybe Liam also. Well written story.
I thought this was another amazing story, well penned!
I really like all of your stories.
Can I see part 2 please!
Plase don't wait too long b4 part 4... I need to see how their lives go from here.
Liam is so sweet he's gorgeous but Matty well how will he react to what happened.
Again a really great story. Xxx
Wow, to be on the verge of fucking Matty and wind up fucking his roommate Jake instead! And after Ollie and Jake's seismic fuck, how can they not do it again?