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Light of Dawn Ch. 03

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Dawn collapsed against the concrete wall, gasping for stubborn breaths. "Liza, she...she might tell." The words came out as whispers.

"Don't worry about Liza," he said, "the girl may be kinky, but she's also my friend."

Was he legitimately unconcerned or was he being the quarterback who never worried about anything? "What ifsomeone tells?" Dawn asked. "Oh my God, what if Daddy finds out?"

Jeff scowled. "Who cares what that dinosaur thinks?"

"He's our Dad."

"He's a petty, selfish old man. The sooner he's out of your life, the better. What he did to Mom..." Jeff went suddenly silent. He seized an enormous mayonnaise jar from the pyramid of concessions and hurled it against the concrete wall where it exploded into a million pieces.

"One game, Dawn, he couldn't put his Goddamned pride aside for one game!"

She had never seen him so upset. His cool and confident veneer had dissolved; the results frightened her. "Please, don't be so angry." He tipped over a rack of hot dog buns; bread and plastic and metal crashed to the floor. He would hurt himself if he didn't stop. She touched his forearm. His tan skin was slick. What little muscle he had flexed involuntarily at the contact.

Dawn offered an innocent smile to go with the innocent touch. Last night she had behaved anyway but innocent. She had let another girl go down on her, not just any girl but Liza Jennings, the beautiful blond cheerleader Jeff had chased for years. At Liza's behest, Dawn had almost had sex with her own brother. She was drunk, but Dawn was still coherent enough to grasp what was happening. He had almost taken her innocence. She would have let him.

"Dawn," he took her freckled cheeks in his hands. He was rough and gentle at the same time. Was this the way he touched his slutty girlfriends? She wondered. "No matter what you think, I would never hurt you." Faking compassion was quite a feat; for a moment she almost believed him.

His eyes were keyed on her own. She couldn't stand his gaze. Wrenching her cheeks from his fingers, she tried to get away. "Sunshine, don't." He took her hands and squeezed firmly.

Like a fool, she went to him, pressing close to his body, letting his arms curl around her slim waist. Easing her further into the service tunnel, he led her further into darkness.

He caressed Dawn's bare arm. Her skin was icy in some places, smoldering in others. She wanted this but at the same time she was so unfathomably scared. "The team is probably looking for you," she said. He didn't reply. He was far too busy raising goosebumps amongst the freckles on her arm. "And all those reporters---" The words were cut off by Jeff's lips.

This is what Hell tastes like, she thought,like Jeff's sweet, wet lips. Dawn broke free from the kiss and protested a moment. Her breath was ragged and her voice strained. She fell silent when he pulled her closer. The more they kissed the less she struggled. A whine escaped her nose when his tongue forced it's way past her lips. She accepted him into her mouth, shyly touching his tongue with her own. His fingers raced along her body. It was as if his left and right hand were competing Jules Verne-style to see who would be first to traverse her curves.

He reached beneath the tartan skirt emblazoned with the school logo and squeezed her panty clad butt. She moaned as his fingers moved southward and touched the spot between her legs.

She pulled away from the kiss. "Jeff, we can't---" He tried to kiss away her protest but she stepped away and slapped his face, hard. "Jeff, I'm sorry," she said. She touched his cheek. "I didn't mean to---"

He kissed her with force, invading her mouth with his tongue. She was sure he could taste the mint of her toothpaste. He turned Dawn around, pressing her against the painted cement wall. He flipped up the back of her skirt and tugged down the yellow panties. He caressed the naked cheeks of her butt with one hand while he worked down the waistband of his warm-up sweats with the other. She struggled between his body and the wall, trying to squirm free. She was not unwilling (on the contrary, she wanted him so bad it hurt) but this wasn't the right place, wasn't the right time.

She could hear the plodding hulks doing their warm-ups outside of the tunnel. She also heard the clicking and whirring of cameras. "Please Jeff, stop." She repeated those words a few times. They must have sounded foreign to his ears. Women never told Jeff Kramer to stop.

"Come on Sunshine; you know you want to." He leaned down, parting crimson hair to kiss the back of her neck. Jeff bunched the top under her arms. He traced the sparse covering of freckles that dotted the alabaster skin of her back. "You can have what all of your little girlfriends dream about, whatyou dream about," he whispered.

Jeff pulled his jock down, freeing his erection. She took a deep breath as his fingers cupped her mound. He rubbed his palm over the silky orange curls of her bush. She didn't shave down there, sometimes she trimmed it when she expected to wear a bathing suit but that never happened in the fall.Does he like them shaved? He hadn't complained the previous night.

Rubbing her nether lips, he savored the dew as it leaked onto his hand. "You're wet," he hissed. "Your sexy little body wants it."

He trailed kisses across her neck and both shoulders. "I could make you feel so good, little angel. Tell me that you want it. Show me."

She grunted and spread her legs. She grabbed his wrist and forced his large hand to rub her pussy harder. She submitted, if not in words than in actions.

He curled a finger and dipped it inside her warm tunnel, sinking to the first knuckle. She was tight; she knew she was. Like any normal young woman she masturbated, but any experimental penetrations had been limited to her own slender fingers. His free hand went beneath her top to squeeze a dangling breast. Soft, pliable flesh overflowed his palm.

She flinched when the hardness of his dick brushed against her butt. The topside of his shaft settled between her butt cheeks; as it sawed through the soft furrow Jeff's back stiffened and he moaned. For a moment she thought he would shoot his load right there. After a few seconds pause he resumed motions. The head of his dick worked lower. It rubbed against her pussy, sending bolts of electricity throughout her body. The lips of her vagina slathered his penis with wet, oily kisses, eventually parting enough for him to enter her body.

He rocked his hips forward. Sharp cries poured from her mouth as he slid his dick into her virgin tunnel, burrowing, ravaging, until he reached the fleshy membrane that testified to her chastity. "Please, Jeff stop." Her words were half whispered, half mumbled. He pretended not to hear her and nudged her virginity. She gasped. "You're hurting me, Jeff. Take it out."

"Dude, what's going on in here?" A loud voice echoed in the tunnel. The siblings froze. Someone had discovered them.

Sammie Jones, one of Jeff's teammates, stood at the entrance to the tunnel. He took a few steps inside, avoiding the broken glass and splattered mayonnaise. He squinted into the dimness. "Oh hell, Jeff! I didn't know you were in here."

Dawn buried her head with her arms.

"What's up Sammie." Jeff's voice was perfectly calm.

"A little pre-game activity?" Sammie asked.

"Let's say it's a new way to warm up." If anyone was capable of remaining cool under any circumstances, even after getting caught with his dick up his own sister's pussy, it was Jeff Kramer. Sammie took another step towards the rutting couple. Jeff hunched over, smothering her small body with his own. He was, no doubt, far more interested in protecting her identity than protecting her modesty.

"All right QB, don't take too long because Coach is going crazy trying to find you. He thinks one of the pro scouts already grabbed your touchdown passing ass." Sammie left the tunnel with a very large grin on his face.

Jeff remained frozen, his penis still nestled in the outer extremities of Dawn's warm furrow. It felt so good in there, so undeniably good. A spasm contracted her tunnel, then another and another. Her pussy walls clenched and sucked on the spongy head of his dick. Breathy little whines escaped her mouth as the orgasm hijacked her body.

The ministrations of her internal muscles pushed Jeff over the edge as well. He pulled out of her warm pussy and nestled his dick between her butt cheeks. The underside of his shaft stroked the pale mounds of flesh a few times before his seed erupted. String after pearly string of cum settled across the skin of her lower back; the last few drips oozed into the crack of her butt.

Their orgasms passed. She stopped squirming and went quiet. A breeze whistled through the tunnel. Goosebumps formed all over her body.

Jeff touched the greasy, white mess he had made on his kid sister's skin and stumbled backwards. He stuffed his penis back in his sweatpants while Dawn covered her butt with the plaid skirt. Wet spots, his rapidly cooling seed, soaked through the pleated fabric.

Salty droplets rolled out of her jade eyes, splashing on the dusty floor of the tunnel. Without a word Jeff vanished. Dawn collapsed to the hard ground and sobbed savagely into her palms. Once alone the hiccups were impossible to stop; they seized control of her body.

She pulled her panties beneath her skirt, feeling sick as Jeff's sperm stuck to the cotton. Resting her head against the wall, she tried to rationalize what had happened. She had orgasmed on her own brother's penis. She felt base and worthless, like a common whore.

To be continued...

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

You have amazing stories so im going to trust you and continue . I am wondering how in the world this will turn out to be a romance.

ScottishTexanScottishTexanover 2 years ago

- Seriously? You don't think that Jeff is a douchebag? Jeff is a totally narcissistic sociopath. There's nothing redeeming about him whatsoever. The only reason I have come back here to struggle through this crap is because I started reading the sequel and curiosity drove me to find out what I missed between here and the sequel. I had walked away from this garbage and totally forgotten about it entirely because it was so horrible.

mrdata9770mrdata9770over 2 years ago

(4/1/2022) This is turning into quite an enjoyable read. The first chapter wasn’t very exciting but was a great setup. I’ve read the comments here, “Rape”, “douchebag”, and uninteresting? The characters are complex they are neither bad nor good. They are human beings with faults. She told Jeff she wanted him and actually spread her legs for him. This was nonconsent/reluctance not rape, IMO. Little sis is sweet but is she really innocent? What makes Jeff such a douchebag? What did their dad do to their mother? Is Liza the lesbian with a heart of gold? This is well-written drama. Hate the characters, like the characters, or love the characters. Five stars.

ScottishTexanScottishTexanabout 3 years ago

'Incest Romance' tag? Seriously? There's absolutely nothing romantic about how Jeff just raped Dawn. I hated it and I'm done. I'm not going to bother reading this garbage to find out, but I suspect that Jeff is juicing and that's where his rage and temper come from.

WargamerWargameralmost 4 years ago

He is still an ass and she suddenly became stupid.

tiercenpttiercenptover 4 years ago

I mean at some point you have to make the characters "interesting".

Until now..it's dawn somewhat sweet.

And Jeff total asshole and douchebag. Not one character trait or action of him is of a positive side as of now.

Hell he even just raped his sister...

Then put this story in "Non-consent/reluctance" And not in incest/taboo with a "romance" tag.

Characters are not interesting enough to keep reading.

How at this point you want to redeem Jeff to be at some point good? as I said you didn't give him one thing positive about him so that we can eventually say "yea he built on that to be a better brother or guy" So that "romance" Tag could make any sense?

PrinceLukePrinceLukealmost 5 years ago
Stopping!!!

I cant keep reading this series, i just cant. The reason i read Incest stories is because the love between the siblings is so strong and so real. This story is lust driven, there is basically no love in it, Jeff just wants to fuck a tight, virgin pussy. He doesnt care about Dawn at all or what she wants. I gave you a five star because your writing quality is good, the story thou i just cant get behind. I have to stop this series.

goducks1goducks1about 6 years ago
5 stars

is there a bigger dick than Jeff? not after this chapter. it will be interesting to see if there is a "conversion" that happens later. I love this story - talk about a character you love, and one you hate!!! great story!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
hot

Do you know I read this in a daily basis?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
IN LOVE

i realy love this story it not like any i have read before i like how its kind of like little steps till it gets to the main part of them to you are a great writer

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

The guy is a genuine dickhead... totally undeserving of such a fine pussy.

All my life I've seen guys like him get their cocks into dumb cunts who eventually figure out that they've just been used for a cum dump. That's when they'd come whining to me, (the dumb fucking friend guy who they knew wanted them but who'd always showed them respect) looking for sympathy. Then, instead of fucking me, they cry it all out and then go do it all over again... with another asshole. After a few years, I figured it out. Women are just stupid animals.

I wasn't tall.. five feet eight inches... but looking back at photos from my youth, I was a damned good looking guy. (though I honest to God didn't realize it at the time) I was fast as greased lightning, strong and tough as nails. Everyone knew that I used to literally beat the shit out of the big tough guys, who mistakenly thought they could push me around because they were bigger. I didn't start shit but I didn't back down or take shit from anyone... no matter how big they were.

What was wrong with those stupid cunts? They taught me to have contempt for women and to disrespect them. Once that contempt and disrespect was fully developed, it gave me a powerful advantage over them where I'd automatically become emotionally detached and force myself to be physically desensitized when I fucked women... like I was an outside observer watching their reactions as I fucked their cunts and fucked simpleton brains out. I have terrific stamina so I lasted for however long it took to destroy them and leave them totally fucked out before I pulled their limp, moaning bodies up to mine and pumped my cum into their sopping wet, still twitching cunts.

In time, I developed a pretty strong reputation as a powerful 'lover' (which I really was <lover>) and it got me some good referrals, too. I sometimes had beautiful women that I didn't even know sidle up to me and say, in a soft sexy voice, "Hey, so and so says you're pretty damned good." Of course they got what they 'came' for and I got their wildest pussy because they wanted to prove that they were the best or better than who'd referred them. I wasn't about to let any woman walk away with even a tiny possibility of feeling as if she'd bested me. A few of them, after a few days of recovering, came back for more. For me, a breathless and sincerely spoken "Thank You" is the ultimate compliment.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Gah...

Jeff sure isn't a very sympathetic character at all. I find myself hoping Dawn doesn't have relations with him. And I feel really sorry for Dawn. The only person that was halfway nice to her thus far (Liza) pretty much date raped her. It's sad.

SecretFantasy69SecretFantasy69about 15 years ago
Wow...enraptured...

Your writing is quite beautiful, and you capture emotions very well.

aysa69aysa69about 17 years ago
Wow

What a twist. These characters are really messed up but it makes the story so intriguing. I want to know more about each of them. I want to see what happened that made them go so down hill. I am trully enjoying this one. Please keep writing. I'm hoping this is a long one. Great job.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
LOVED IT!!!

WHAT HAPPENS NEXT??? WHEN???

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
One More Paean of Praise to the Pile

This story taps into some very murky emotional currents.

Stephen King does that. It's what gives his yarns the kick they have. In your case, it's the whole set of choices before the characters. The dad soldiers on being the paterfamilias and getting no credit. (I haven't looked into the other chapters as to whether he ever tried moving on from sports). Still, his life seems a mausoleum to his one shining moment. Dawn has a hopeless crush on her brother the QB, that she satisfies at a horrible emotional cost. Jeff wants his dad to notice him as something more than a chip off the old block, as a success in his own right.

Lots of pain circulating in this story, but that's life itself, which as any artist worth their salt helps us see

whether incest is involved or not. Bravo. This story's not even close to being finished, so please keep the chapters coming so to speak!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Different but perhaps better

I agree with the previous poster who wrote that the characters in this story are not as "likeable" but I don't see that as a criticism. In fact, the story is more interesting because they (Dawn, Jeff and the father) are struggling with internal problems, flawed personalities, and are less than likeable. It gives the characters room to grow and also gives the plot something more than just, "I screwed my brother/sister and now I'm in love with him/her and what do I do? Oh noes!!" angle. There is more than just that angle to the plot and that is what I think will make this story stand out from the pack.

Like most people, I usually come here to read a good porn story and then click out. But every now and again, I run across a story that is a good, solid story that just happens to have a graphic sexual element to it and the story (plot, characterization, interaction of characters, etc) that is the main draw with the sex scenes as the bonus. This is one of those stories.

I hope you update soon. This chapter-once-every-10-days is too long a wait!

thepaleeyesthepaleeyesabout 17 years ago
well, well.. what to say..

firstly, a lot different from ur generally loving, affectionate characters... ur previous characters were basically romantic, good-hearted and likeable...

but, here, those are absent.. well, if u tried to break out of your type, then, u certainly managed it.. jeff is the typical snobbish jock... the college scene is also pretty accurate.. but, there are actually more sensitive guys and girls out there than u portrayed.. however, not all girls also are into jocks... even when they are as studly as jeff... u made him sound like some Adonis.. In which u were part successful, but a bit lacking in the whole sex-god portrayal..

however, it is easily seen that Dawn is depicted as a Julie or Rachel kind of girl, which she isn't... and, she just can't seem to accept the fact that she is like all the other girls who wanna fuck the QB... well, the last line was good.. she has to come to terms with her physical desires, whore or not...

a shift in storytelling.. not for the better, to me.. but, i will withhold any final comments

waiting for the refill of Nightshade, The Family Room.. and maybe, maybe, a glimpse into Worth it... the family of Connors

sarabeansarabeanabout 17 years ago
HOT

this is the longest tease i have had yet on this site!!! Keep it up cause it is so hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Brilliant

I just wish that the chapters were longer, or that you would release them sooner :(

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