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- Lisa and Mac Ch. 01
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All Comments on 'Lisa and Mac Ch. 01'
by paulb85
- 11 Comments
Excellent portrayal of a newbie wife domination by a master introduced by the husband inadvertently!! Please continue the series
Fabulous. I really hope that the training of Lisa will continue and you will escalate the story slowly but relentlessly. Very hot indeed.
Lisa didn't go to McDonald's, but it's obvious that she enjoyed her Big Mac. It will be interesting to see how she will be trained, how it will affect her, and how both Paul and Lisa react to the training. Will Mac cuck Paul? How will Paul react to that?
In my book, this story is a tour de force! Needless to say I LOVED it! Gave it a
5.0 = 100% (☆☆☆☆☆).
The storyline was imaginatively conceived and masterfully crafted.
I eagerly look forward to reading Ch. 2.
SPOILER ALERT! An excerpt from Ch. 1 follows.
Quote:
"You know his cock was hard," she told me. "From the time I went over his lap until he finished he was really hard. I felt it pushing up against my tummy."
End quote.
I eagerly look forward to reading Ch. 2. Something tells me the best is yet to come.
There are 3 characters in this story. I identified with Lisa's husband. Other people may identify with Lisa or Mac.
My wife and I both loved this story. Early on we realized that we both had a submissive side, more so her than me and just like Paul, I could not bring myself to treat her roughly which she admitted she would like. A few years later we finally met an older gentleman who we got friendly with and my wife found herself attracted to his confident personality and confessed to me that while in his presence, she couldn’t help thinking what it would be like to ordered to undress in front of him and do what ever he demanded. The more we discussed her feelings, I couldn’t hide the fact that I was very aroused by the thoughts of it happening. Gradually, we opened up to him about our little fetish and he was very willing to help us make it a reality. It has completely changed our lives for the better.
You're a very good writer, great description and lead in, you didn't jump ahead too fast and I like that... As a contributor here myself, I like telling the whole story, makes them a little long but I remember reading Bee-Line novels as a teen and loved having chapter after chapter of these saucy-sex storys to read while hiding under the covers at night... Cheers, look forward to the rest... 5 stars👍😉