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Love in a Month Ch. 04

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Some people are just meant to be together no matter what.
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Part 4 of the 4 part series

Updated 06/07/2023
Created 03/05/2016
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Author's note: Hey everybody, I am really sorry for taking this long to update my new chapter. I wanted to complete it real bad but I had my pre med school entrance exams going on. Thank you for all your support. I really appreciate it so much. :)

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The next few days were uneventful. He called and texted several times, but I did not response. Yes, I was ignoring him. He was out of town for some kind of a business tour and that made me feel a bit relieved. I didn't have to be afraid of anyone pouncing on me, whenever they wanted, for a while. I wanted to relax and make the most out of this time.

New semesters had just started and I wanted to concentrate more on my studies. After all this is what I came here for. College was going great except for there is this guy, Arthur. He is that popular guy in the college, whom, everyone wants to date but he kind of wanted to date me. I used to be bullied constantly back in my high school and was the one, girls decided to be mean towards but now I was getting the kind of attention, I, could have never imagined of before. Everything was right except for the situation I was in. The dark secret, that, nobody knew of. Neil. I hated him to the core but also there were moments when I had flashbacks of the time we spent together and I can't lie to myself, but it did make me moist down there. I felt like I missed him. There we go again, I am being delusional about things I am never going to get. I constantly kept myself reminding that once he gets married, my ordeal is going to be over. I will be a free bird and I never have to see his face ever again. Deep down, I knew that every word he said to me back in the cottage, about him having certain feelings towards me, was all a lie. He just probably wants to enjoy his last months of being a bachelor.

*********

"Hey" Arthur said, handing over an envelope to me.

"Oh, hi Arthur. What's this?"

"Open it."

It was an invitation. He is going to turn 19 this upcoming Sunday and wants to throw a party at some fancy place.

"Be there at seven. I will be waiting for you" he said with a smile and lots of expectations.

"Umm...I am not sure if I can make it."

"Why the hell not?" he asked surprised.

"I don't like to go to parties much. Besides there's, also loads of assignments to complete."

"You are kidding me right? You have to come, Lillian. It means a lot to me."

Arthur always looked like he genuinely liked me and maybe I like him too and if Neil did not decide to fuck with my life like this, I maybe would have started dating him too. What could go wrong if I went to this party anyways? I need a break. I need people in my life so that I can take a break from the other half, the dark side of my existence.

"Sure I will be there."

"Cool."

He gave me a quick hug and left for his classes.

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It was Saturday already and I need to buy something for him and also select a dress to wear. Shall I wear the dress that Neil gave me? No way. I would rather burn it. I am going to throw on something from what I already have. What can I gift him? I decided to order a watch for him, on Amazon. I received it in a day, just like they promised.

********

Sunday evening I decided to wear a little black dress, leave my hair lose and throw on a pair of sneakers for the party. I looked okay. Not that I cared. I reached the venue and Arthur greeted me. I wished him and then handed the gift bag to him.

"Wow. Thank you so much for this but honestly this wasn't required."

"Typical social conventions, you see" I said with a vague smile.

"You showed up. I already got the best gift I could wish for, on my birthday."

Yes, it was a cheesy line but undeniably very cute and polite. I guess I kind of blushed and smiled awkwardly. We went inside and the place was jumping with loud music, dance and booze. I looked too decent compared to the girls there. I did not know most of them. The birthday cake was cut, greetings were engaged and the music turned up louder.

"Wanna have a dance with me?" Arthur asked.

"I can't really dance."

"Don't worry."

We hit the dance floor together and I kind of awkwardly started moving my feet and hands. I knew I looked dumb. Arthur tried to say something but I could not make it because of the music. He held my hand and pulled me out. We both went outside.

"I want to ask you something."

"What?"

"I kind of have a feeling that you might not be interested in me and all but I at least want you to know me as a person. We can hang out together sometimes you know."

"Yeah sure"

"That's it? Lillian, do you have any idea how much I like you?"

"I am sorry."

"Is there someone else in your life?"

"Not really, no."

He then came real close to me and looked into my eyes.

"You know there are times when you feel, that you need to do something and if you don't, you might regret it for the rest of your life?"

"Yes."

"I feel like that now."

As soon as he completed his sentence, he planted a kiss on my lips. He looked back into my eyes for approval and getting the hint, he kissed me again. It was starting to become really passionate when suddenly he got pulled away from behind, breaking the kiss.

It was Neil. Where the hell did he come from?

"How dare you touch what's mine?" he yelled raging with anger.

Arthur was about to say something but he got punched right on his face. That's it. He crossed all his limits. I stood in front of Arthur before Neil could smack him once again.

"Stop this shit, right away."

"Lillian, don't make me hurt you."

"You have already hurt me in more ways than you can think of."

"Get out of my way."

"Arthur. Run."

"No fucking way. I am not leaving you alone with this psychotic creep."

"You fucker. I am going to finish you off."

"Arthur you need to leave right away. Please. I can handle him" I said concerned.

"No, I won't."

"Please. Leave. Now." I yelled to emphasize the fact.

Neil was starting to follow Arthur, but I stopped him.

"What the hell are you doing here? And how dare you hurt him like that?" I said pissed.

He did not answer me and caught hold of my hand and kind of dragged me to his car.

"Let go of my hand Neil. It's hurting."

No answer again.

"Get inside. Now."

I did not want any more trouble. I obeyed and got inside his car. He started driving right away. I could not understand where he was taking me. After driving for quite a while, we were far from the main city now. He then parked in front of some cheap motel and went inside, while I waited outside in his car. What the hell was he up to now? After a few minutes, he came out and asked me to follow him. I did. As I entered inside the room, he closed the door behind me with a loud thud and that gave me goose bumps in a scary way.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Please finish

I know life happens, but you seriously need to finish this story. It has an interesting story line.

bloodandsandbloodandsandover 5 years ago
update and finish the story please

update

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
please continue

ah please finish the story

MissedLifeMissedLifeover 6 years ago
So bummed!

Good story but once again I end up liking a story that does not get finished. Since it has been over a year I guess it will remain that way which is too bad. Really looked forward to seeing what direction you were going to take the characters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Please update great story!!

It's such a great story I'm hooked please update it ahh😂

marvel121marvel121over 7 years agoAuthor
thank you so much for your love and support everybody

New chapter coming soon. Stay tuned. <3

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Please Finish

Will Arthur Save her. Will Neil leave his fiancé. Stay tuned lol.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Can you include Neil's perspective ?

As a reader , i am quite eager to know what Neil feels for Lillian. Loving it so far

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Hope exams went well...

But please finish the story!! Lol

I like so far - I like the "reluctant at first but then love in the end" stories.

You have a pretty good plot start here. Plenty of conflict but extend the conflict to getting him out of that blackmail wedding (that is the least "believable" part of the story), he should eventually (maybe with Lillian's help) turn the tables on the blackmailer - if each chapter is conflict between Lillian and Neil, the story won't ever progress, if that is your goal.

But before the "tables turn" as I mentioned above, Lilian has to "see" more of his true self to sympathize with, because her "path" (in my mind) is to fall in love with him.

As to the next chapter, damn, ease off just a bit on the anger...don't make him a total prison worthy nut job. Readers want their main characters to (eventually) be "likable"

Keep the "you're mine" attitude, that's hot in this fictional world. Make Lillian see how much he loves her, not how many people he will beat the shit out of to have her.

My 2 cents for free. I normally don't spend time on comments... But I do appreciate an actual story :)

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