All Comments on 'Making a Hotwife Pt. 01'

FANTASTIC.MORE PLEASE,MAYBE A MUCH YOUNGER BULL TOO

I love this one. The wife living in denial for so long, sensibly settling for the "nice guy", long dismissing her dark cravings for a real man, a man who could break her, and make her feel like a real woman. About the only thing which could have made it any hotter for me would have been to hear the wife actually repeating Ike's words, being able to read her repeating them to her husband, rather than just the husband's narration telling the reader that she said them. I'm looking forward to chapter two. Thanks.

Great story. Let's hope it gets better and better

Great story! Time for a chastity cage for Alan and Franny to lose those birth control pills. Hope to see more great stories about these two. Great set up👍

So fucking hot

Amazing! Loved it

Fran the fuck doll need to be shared with other alpha male.

Thanks for all the votes and feedback! Just a reminder I'm deleting comments by anyone who hasn't read or has disregarded the disclaimer. Criticizing a story for failing to hit the target it's aiming at is one thing. Criticizing it for not aiming at some other target that you would have preferred is just dumb. Also, guy who keeps calling me Jackie (??), you just seem confused, and I will continue to delete your comments unread.

Decent story but the only part I feel could have been changed is having the husband have such a short dick. If Ike is really 10 inches the husband could have the average 6 to 7 inches and I felt that would have been better. Still not a bad story just hope there is a risk of pregnancy in the next chapter.

Awesome story. You write very well, it was much better that their emotions evolved slowly instead of diving in the deep end

lick them where they come together.

You took it right up to the point when the fear starts to built in the husband. I love her admonishing her husband that she tried to be good and maybe she could have but he wanted to see the real her.

The picture you paint is so accurate that it evokes the same queasiness that seeing it happen gives you. The realization that possibly she might not really even like him but he can do whatever he wants to her now.