All Comments on 'Mark & Tracy'

i like the first chapter cant wait to see what happens next

A very nice story, just a few spelling errors and some paragraphs were a little long. The sex scenes were done well but the explicit descriptions of their bodies are better left to the reader's imagination. All in all; as a first story; you did well.

It would have made no difference at all to the rest of the plot if you had both characters unattached. Instead, you make them into cheaters, at which point I lost interest in the characters and the story.

This is directed at everyone. First, thanks to the many emails that I've recieved and the many kind words that you've had :-) I really do appreciate your comments and critizism. It helps me with future work. However, I wanted to make a comment to a response on my first story. You may feel that it made no difference if the characters were attached or not. I didn't set out to make them cheaters, that was just an unfortunate circumstance of the situation. Both people are very much in love with one another, and that's all that can be said about that. However, it's not going to change the way I write. This is a forum of many genres. If it happens that there is cheating or affairs transpiring in the course of the stories, it's always your perogative to find a different one. Just my two cents. Again, thanks to all. ;-) RED

some minor editing details to work out, but this is very recommendable to anyone!

Impressive - just as I figured it would be when you told me you were writing on here! Looking forward to reading the next chapters!