by asianbirdwatcher
I liked the first chapter, the discovery of it, the mom liking being watched, the teasing of will they cross the line? It did have hints of cuckold and race play (neither really my thing) but didn't quite go there. Curious on her back story that she so quickly jumped into this life.
I was hoping chapter 2 would move towards actual incest, the whole family love pushing people past societies restrictions. But instead it went hard towards cuck, the asian son having an average dick while the mom had a thing for white customers with big dicks. The son is doing more house work (aka becoming house servant to be used and looked down on) while the mom does less and less, he has to clean and wash her clothes covered in strangers cum, relegated to watching and masturbating. Will he really go back to college and become self sufficient or just his mom's servant with no back bone or self worth?
I will see how chapter 3 goes but if it continues like this it is less incest and more "loving wives" or fetish. At this point the son could easily have been written as the inexperienced neighbor kid or something with no family ties.
The first chapter was good but the way with the son becoming a cuck'd out servant was not so good. It is moving away from the incest mother and son which most of the readers were reading and looking for.
There's a lot more roads to go down. You introduced another woman earlier so maybe the son can play with her. You can also do some back dating with other aspects.
This was incredible! You have great ideas, and you're bringing the to fruition very well! Trust your instincts and keep going!
You're doing great! Please add more time to the mother-son relationship, while they alone with each other. How he helps her, how he worships her and how she gradually becomes more dominant and perverted.
Why is this garbage in Incest/taboo section when there is literally no incest going on? Just put in fetish section.
Ok story. Wrong category. If son is to be a cuckold, should be in fetish. Mom knows son wants her. If she is to be a whore, she should be his whore, but she seems to like big cock too much for that. 3🌟