All Comments on 'Mature Couple's Submission'

This is my first time writing a stiory, This is just the introduction to a much longer story. I wanted to understand how to post, formatting, how it would look and such. There is nothing much hardcore in this short intro but more to come. Any suggestions for grammar, formatting and such is welcome.

Omg! Need part 2 when she gets it😍

It’s a good introduction with what I assume will be more to come. I am excited to see where the story goes. I always enjoy reading the woman’s perspective on things

Then husband tell his Darkest Fantasies. I always wanted you to put my cock in to a very small, (like flat) chastity cage, and make me a cuckold slave. That you use for all of you creampie clean ups before you will me have the sloppy seconds. I know Lets Combine both, our Fantasies for the rest of our lives in retirement..

I just submitted chapters 2 thru 5. It will probably get posted tomorrow. Any feedback on the characters is greatly appreciated. I was not quite sure where to go with the male cuckold character. After chapter5 I will get to Amanda in much more detail. Chapter 2 thru 5 does have another female character and some development of Richard. Thanks for the feedback.

Great start. I am looking forward to what comes next.

I hope the moderators publish the next chapters soon.

Mmm kinky & fun.

Great start, and thank you for your comment. Do take the time to develop the main characters so we can know more about their thoughts and feelings as they embark on their kinky journey.

I’ve always loved situations like this. Love the thought of a Blackman befriending my wife and I only find out when I come home one evening and he’s here. I try and act normal but he pretty much ignores me, visiting with her. After a bit they are both in the kitchen and when I start to go in I see he has her pinned against the counter kissing her a he holds her head by grabbing a handful of hair.

I was so shocked I didn’t say anything. I was so confused because I felt embarrassed to interrupt him, IN MY OWN HOUSE! She was trying to get away but I could see her weakening. It made me feel like a child who wasn’t supposed to see “ grownups “ doing grownup things. I backed up into the living room with my face burning from embarrassment trying to stay as quiet as I could. It seemed like 10 minutes before they came out and she walked him to the door making plans for him to visit on Friday.

She told me how nice he was and that she was going to go for a bike ride with him this weekend.