by rockycoveboy
The slow build up to having Georgina was incredibly erotic with those tittilating little hints of her stocking tops and breasts. Older women can certainly be much more exciting than young bimbos!
Georgina and Paul make a great couple..Her age shouldn't matter. She wants his cock and he wants her cunt
I like this story hope there is a part 2
I would love to see this continue and see what Georgina does as his slave!
Loved how you built it up, and hopefully you will consider writing at least another chapter to show how it develops.
Rgds Al
But the sentences are way too long. If you need so many commas to break ideas within a sentence then use a full stop and present the information over 2 or 3 sentences. As it stands your writing seems to ramble on and on. Becomes extremely difficult to stay on track and awake.
Loved the story sort of reminds of of a very sexy mature married mother of 4 that I use to have a very sexual and loving affair with. She intrigued me with her beauty and I gave her everything sexualy that she was deprived of from her own husband. It was and still is the best times I have had with any woman.
Great story and excellent delivery. Love the buildup and would like to hear more with Geogina as your slave.
Loved the British descriptions of her body and legs and the love making. There were a number of Milfs I would have loved to have loved in this way!
Agree about the length of the sentences, & a quotation issue. I didn't read after the first Page.
While the language was a little thick, And she was somewhat repetitive with what she was telling him, I was glad at the end that he decided to stay with her and not run off after he had had that first time. Yes, older lovers can be very appreciative, which is why I spent a lot of my late 20’s/early 30’s having and fucking them.