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Click here"It does." She whispered in my ear, "Now I'll ask again, you get this hard just watching this woman or were you thinking of your mom?"
She had stopped stroking and I blurted out, "I was thinking of you mom, I'm always thinking about you!"
"I like that!" Mom rewarded me by once again jerking my cock while gently rubbing my balls. "I like that you think of me like that."
"You do?"
"I do. I like thinking of me that way to, I like thinking of me being my son's naughty little mommy, just like in these movies."
"And I think of being your good son, taking care of his horny mom."
"Damn I wished I knew that before." She surprised me when her tongue flicked out across my ear, "Think of all the fun we could have been having!"
"We...we can have fun now." I nodded my head like an idiot.
"Then why the hell are we still watching this movie?" Mom asked, and startled me by grabbing the arm of my chair and spinning me around in it.
She stepped around so she was in front of me and grabbing the tie to her robe pulled it open, "And why the hell am I still dressed?"
"Holy shit." I whispered as I took in my mother's naked body.
Her perky tits were as perfect as I remembered them, her pink nipples hard and pointing right at her appreciative son. As good as her tits looked, my eyes sought out the treasure between her thighs and I licked my lips at the sight of her smooth pink pussy peeking out below a small patch of blonde fuzz.
"Good reaction," Mom cupped her tits and ran her purple nails over her nipples. "Sorry, your mommy's tits aren't as big as the women in the movies."
"They're perfect," I stared longingly at her body, "Just like the rest of you."
"Hmm, smooth talker." Mom purred, "Well you know what they say about flattery," She sank to her knees between my legs, "It will get you a blow job from your mother."
She pulled my boxers down over my knees and to the floor, then grabbing my cock kissed the dripping tip.
"You...you're going to...?"
"Honey, that woman stroking that big cock on the video looked damn hot, but why settle for a hand job, when all your mother wants to do is have her son in her mouth?"
I cried out in surprise and pleasure as mom opened wide and took my cock deep into her mouth. She moaned, her blue eyes rolling back as her pink lips slid down my shaft until they reached the bottom of. I groaned and squirmed in my chair as mom held my cock buried in her mouth while swirling her tongue around my shaft.
She slowly worked her lips up to the tip of my cock and keeping her tongue pressed to the sensitive underside of it shook her head back and forth.
"Oh, fuck." I put my hands on her shoulders and fought to keep my hips still as mom teased my cock with her lips and tongue.
She removed it from her mouth, then ran her lips up and down my shaft and I lost the battle and thrust my hips. Mom looked up at me and rubbing my cock along her cheek asked,
"How's you dick look in your mother's face, Joey?"
"Fucking incredible." I breathed.
"Good answer, but." She winked, "I was hoping for it would look better in your mouth."
"I...oh, god that works too." I gasped as she ran her tongue along my shaft then sucked me back into her hot mouth.
This time mom bobbed her head taking me about half way each time. I relaxed back in my chair and over wondering about the how and the why of all this simply took in the amazing sight of my mother sucking my cock.
Mom sighed and ran her fingers lightly along my shaft, trailing her lips as she blew me. I reached down between us and cupping her tits, stroked her nipples with my thumbs. Mom moaned her appreciation and rewarded me by bobbing her head faster.
I was breathing hard and my thighs were trembling. I'd been playing with myself before mom came in and she'd stroked me as well. Now sitting here feeling the taboo pleasure of my mother's mouth as well as just the sight of my cock in her face had me close to coming already.
Mom slipped me from her mouth and I whimpered when she lowered her head and sucked my balls, while still running her fingers along the length of my cock. I saw her lips stick smeared on my cock and shook my head as if I still thought I was dreaming as she made a show of bathing my balls with her soft pink tongue.
I continued to fondle her firm tits and looking down the smooth tan skin of my mother's back admired her ass as she knelt there on the floor. Mom took me back into her mouth and as she resumed sucking me I saw her hips moving back and forth and she was moaning around my cock as loudly as I was.
It excited me even more to know that sucking my cock was turning her on. A little too much it seemed as my cock twitched in her mouth and my balls tightened.
"Oh, fuck, Mom." I groaned, "I...I'm going to come for you, I'm going to...Oh!"
I released a loud moan as no longer to hold back, I stopped trying to fight it and relaxed as my cock erupted into my mother's mouth. Mom gurgled around my cock, but continued to suck as my hips thrust and I filled her mouth with my hot load.
Mom closed her eyes and there was a look of pure bliss on her face as her son emptied his balls into her talented mouth.
"Oh...oh...okay, okay!" I begged when my spent cock jerked in her mouth as she was now sucking just the over sensitive tip.
Mom smiled around my cock as my hips bucked and I continued to beg her to stop. She eased my cock from her mouth and stuck her tongue out; showing me it was covered in cum. She made a show of swallowing, then opened wide for me, showing me she had taken it all.
"Damn." I gasped, "That was..."
My words were cut off when mom stood up, leaned into me and shoved her tit into my mouth. I eagerly opened wide, sucking her hard nipple and a good portion of her soft breast between my lips. Mom moaned and putting her knees on my legs, sat up on my lap.
I switched to her other tit and grabbing my wrist, mom guided my hand between her legs. I moaned around her nipple when my fingers slid through her soft lips, God she was wet.
"Yes, baby!" Mom groaned as she wrapped her hand in my hair and arched her back, pushing her tit deeper into my mouth.
I worked my fingers up and down the length of her slick slit and when they found her swollen clit, mom yelped in pleasure. Keeping my thumb on her clit I worked my fingers back and plunged them into her hot, wet and damn tight pussy. I worked my thumb in circles as I worked my mouth back and forth, servicing both her nipples as best as I could.
Mom bucked her hips into my hand, then moaned, "Feels so good, baby, but like I said to you...why settle for a hand?"
Mom stood up and sweeping all the papers and junk off the side of my desk, sat down on it. She lifted her legs and placing her soft feet on my shoulders, spread her pink pussy open for me, tapping her clit with her purple fingernail.
"Come on, Joey, give your mother a kiss!"
I rolled the chair a little closer, leaned in between my mother's legs and buried my face into her hot flesh.
"Fuck yeah!" Mom cried out when I plunged my tongue inside her.
I pressed my lips to her pussy and swirling my tongue inside her inhaled deeply, taking in the intoxicating scent of my mother's pussy. I sucked hard and mom squealed as I received a mouthful of her sticky juices.
Placing my hands on her soft thighs I eased my tongue from inside her, sucking up the trail of sweet pre cum that came with it. I swirled my tongue around between her pink lips, working my way towards her clit.
Mom moaned and squirmed, grinding her pussy into my face and trying to get her clit onto my tongue. The thought of how badly she wanted me to lick her had my cock as hard as it had been before I came. As I placed my tongue against her clit it dawned on me that I was minutes away from fucking my mother.
"Oh, right there." Mom moaned as my tongue traced a slow circle around her clit.
Her toes tightened into my shoulders and she pushed against me as I continued to move my tongue slowly around her swollen nub.
"Take your time later, baby; right now mommy needs to come!"
Later? It hadn't occurred to me that this wouldn't just be a onetime thing. As I moved my tongue as fast as I could, I eased two fingers into her sopping slit and let my mind run wild. Every one of those movies flashed before me, we could do everything! I envisioned fucking my mother in her bed, my bed, the shower, the kitchen table!
Watching porn together, her playing with my cock and me fingering her as we watched actors pretend to be doing what we really were! Sleeping together and waking up in the middle of the night to my mother's hot mouth around my cock!
My hips were moving as I sucked her clit as hard as I dared, striving to get my mother to come in her son's face so he could fuck her.
"Just like that, baby!" Mom whimpered, "Yes, yes...Oh, Joey!"
The way mom cried out my name sent a shiver through me as did the long loud squeal she released. Mom's pussy contracted around my fingers and her feet pushed hard against my shoulders as she arched her back, pushing her pussy into my fingers and tongue.
Mom was yelping and squealing, her hips bucking as she writhed on my desk. I continued sucking her clit as her body squirmed in the throes of her orgasm. Mom, moaned softly and letting her feet fall to the floor sighed, "Oh, honey, I came so hard for you!"
I stood up from the chair, showing her how hard I was for her and her blue eyes wide, mom whispered, "That's right, Joey, you being that big dick right over here and shove it in your mother, because baby, she needs that cock!"
Who was I to disobey my mother? Wrapping my legs around her thighs, I lifted her legs and drove my cock into her forbidden heat.
"Fuck yeah!" Mom called out, "Damn that's a nice cock!"
I remained inside her for a moment, reveling in the fact I was inside my mother. Her pussy was still quivering from her orgasm and I swear if I hadn't just come, I wouldn't last more than two minutes.
I moved my hips, slowly pumping her and enjoying every the feeling of her tight lips sucking at my cock as I withdrew it. Mom sighed as I moved within her, then with a nasty smile, she said,
"Come on, Joey, is this what you thought about? Slow and easy?"
"No." I returned her smile. "I think about fucking you long and hard."
"Then fuck me!" She exclaimed, thrusting her hips and burying me inside her.
I didn't need to be told twice and drawing back slammed my cock into her then proceeded to fuck her like she was one of those bad actresses in the porn apparently both enjoyed.
"That's it, baby! Fuck mommy's pussy! Give it to me good, Joey! Oh, God how I need a good fuck!"
Mom sat up on the desk and wrapping her legs around my waist leaned forward and kissed me. I gasped as her tongue plunged into my mouth then moaned as it danced across mine. I put my arms around her waist, holding her up as I fucked her and mom broke the kiss and rested her head on my shoulder.
She was yelping in my ear with every hard thrust and that hot little sound caused me to strive to fuck her harder. Mom put her arms around my neck and pressed herself to me, her hard nipples pushing into my chest. I glanced over to the side and my eyes widened at the sight of the two of us in the mirror.
I couldn't believe what I was seeing; me butt naked standing in front of my desk and fucking my equally naked mother as she sat on it, Christ I wasn't even fucking her in a bed, just right here on a piece of furniture like she was some slut.
"Oh, yeah, Joey!" Mom moaned in my ear, "Look at you fucking your mother, shoving your big dick in my tight little pussy! Oh, honey, we are going to have so much fucking fun!"
Damn straight we were I thought as I hammered away at her amazing pussy. Mom put her hands on my chest and pushing against me, whispered, "Stop."
I reluctantly stopped moving, then smiled when mom let her legs down, stood up in front of me and with a wink turned around and bent over the desk. I took a moment to admire the sight of her firm little ass and her pussy peeking out from between her thighs.
Mom looked at me over her shoulder, "Hey, it's not nice to keep your mother waiting!"
With a smile I grabbed her hips and buried myself balls deep in her hot little box.
"Fuck that's deep!" Mom moaned, "Now fuck me, baby! Fuck me the way you always wanted to!"
I squeezed her hips hard and proceeded to pound my mother's pussy as hard as I could. Mom was still looking over her shoulder and her blue eyes were bulging and wild with lust as her son relentlessly assaulted her pussy.
"Yes, yes!" She screamed, "Baby, you are fucking me so good! Oh, honey you are going to be in trouble after this!"
"I...I am?" I slowed my thrusting.
"Yeah you will be! Honey, you are giving it to me so good I'm going to need it all the time! I'm going to make you fuck me until you can't get it up anymore then I'll just suck you hard again!"
"Oh, fuck!" I moaned, my cock twitching as my hard fucking was getting me closer to blowing a load.
"Fuck is right! All we're going to do is fuck! God, I am going to be so addicted to my son's cock!"
Her words sent me over the edge and I gave her several savage pumps that caused the desk to shake as I drove towards my climax.
"Whip it out when you're ready!" Mom moaned.
I slammed her several more times, then slipping out of her squeezed my cock at the base like they did in the movies. Mom turned around and dropping to her knees held her tits up for me. With a loud cry I let my cock go and watched a long thick stream of cum splatter onto her chest and onto her tits.
"Oh, look at that!" Mom grabbed my cock and I let it go as she pumped me in her fist.
I moaned continuously as mom jacked me off all over tits. Moving my cock side to side she went about painting bother her perky tits with her son's thick white cum. I whimpered when the last few drops trickled out, then gasped when she took me into her mouth and sucked hard enough to milk another squirt from my spent balls.
"Goddamn." I sighed falling back into my chair.
"Goddamn is right." Mom grinned and grabbing her robe used it to wipe the cum from her tits. "Baby, you fucked your mother damn hard."
"You told me too." I reminded her.
"Hmm, you always did do what you were told." She smiled, "And I'll make sure to reward my good boy whenever he listens."
"Sounds damn good." I told her.
"Know what sounds good, right now?" She asked, "A nice hot shower, we'll get each other all soapy and horny, and we'll fuck in the shower."
"Like in that video they put out last week." I laughed, "Mom gets dirty while her son gets clean."
"Oh, that was a good one!" She nodded, "I love how he got on his knees and she put her foot on his shoulder and he ate her pussy."
"I think we can act that one out." I told her.
"Baby, we can act them all out." She sighed, "Then after the shower we'll go into my room and lay on the bed and cuddle and touch and just relax and enjoy." She snapped her fingers.
"It will be like when you were young and would crawl into my bed and we would watch TV together."
"Yeah." I agreed, then smiled, "Hey, mom?"
"What?"
"Can we watch Loving Mothers instead of TV?"
"Sure," she said, "But I have to say I'm not sure if I'll enjoy them anymore."
"Why not?"
Grabbing my cock she kissed my cheek and whispered, "Because reality is better than fantasy."
*****
Author's note: Well I hope you enjoyed my little foray into incest the 'one handed read' style. I am currently working on another mother/son that will be back to my former style, but one never knows if people liked this I have a couple of other 'quick and dirty' ideas. I always welcome feedback and your votes and comments are appreciated. LC68
- COMMENTS
You always deliver a great story, short or long. I love your writing style and your story-telling is second to none.
Yes! Short and sweet! This had a short buildup, and the sex was just right. You don’t have to write a novel to be hot and effective. Wish you would find someone to proofread your work however.
Loved this story. Wish you would continue it with. Beautiful mom, with a great little body
Sucking, swallowing her sons cum and then fucking him was great.
Keep up the good work.
Nice and hot and a shorter one this time created some variety. Love your work Laura.
Hard to follow with you going back and forth between first person and third person. But not bad.
My mom liked porn and knew that I watched it and didn't care. She was a major exhibitionist herself, always walking around in wife-beater see-thru T's, her b-cups always braless and on display. She was pretty, she was skinny, she had great legs, and knew it. She danced for many years which should give you the best idea of her disposition. She drank too much, smoked too much, was a lousy housekeeper, and an even lousier cook. Divorced, it was just her, I, and my little sister for many years. Mom didn't take care of herself all that well, either, except she was a vegetarian, and she was naturally skinny. Perhaps because of her diet of cigarettes and mountain dew. When she'd come home drunk she'd sometimes come into my room, undress, and climb into bed nude with me. We never talked about it, probably because she wouldn't remember anything the next morning. She'd blackout. Once when I was age capable she came in drunk one night and fellated me to orgasm. I was terrified the next morn but nothing, nothing was said by her..., and my sister said nothing, sis thought mom had fallen asleep drunk and nude..., again. So what. After the third time of mom fella, she had come home drunk, fellated me... to orgasm, mom catching most of my cum and swallowing, but not all. Some cum would be dried on her face or in her hair when she awoke. I was, by now, used to not being anxious about these episodes of hers because..., well..., I was getting... blown! (at kinda an early age, too!) I remember she had awoken this one morning in my bed and ignoring her clothes on the floor she pulled on one of my oversized tank tops which bared her breasts from the side completely. Pulling on a pair of cotton sweats I followed her out to the patio where she was smoking already and drinking her first of many mountain dews for the day. I grabbed a coffee and the aspirin and went out to sit next to her. She smiled and said thanks for the aspirin. We sat in silence for a few minutes before I made her aware, as I stared at her bare breast, that her face and hair had gobs of dried cum in it. Another minute or two passed before mom asked me if she had come home like that? I let her question hang for a minute in silence before she turned to me and said, "Or... did... I...?" I answered with my silence. Mom said then, almost too matter-of-factly, "You know I don't remember..., I..." And her voice trailed off. I said I know, but I assured her no one else knew, "Not even Sher (my sis) knows." Mom turned to me looking at me said, "Sher knows..." I was shocked! "How...?" I muttered. Mom said, "Sher watches you masturbate..." Mom was smiling at me gauging my reaction. She returned to serious quickly, "She's seen me..., you know..., go into your room..., strip..., and then..., blow you..., you know..., suck your cock... So..., she knows..." Holyshit! My jaw dropped. I was awestruck. Mom turned to me and in a quieter tone said, "She says you have a big cock..." "How does she know?" I asked. Mom took a few seconds before she answered, "She used to blow your friend Frankie Valente out here on the porch every night, like for two weeks, but he tried to go further and she wouldn't let him do more than finger fuck her..." Silence. Nothing unusual here, Mom always talked like a sailor with us, and apparently, there were no secrets between mother-daughter. One. Two. Three... "Oh..." I said, "So that's why Frankie doesn't come around anymore..." Some friend. And that's how we sat in silence until we went inside. Mom and I started fucking two weeks later and have not stopped... eight years later. I'm pretty sure Sher knows...
Everyone loves porn even those who don't admit it. It can work well for people who love each other.
Great story, you just have to be careful with the details (Benny became Jimmy at one point).
5-stars.
So sucking fucking hot, outrageously fucking hot, more and more like this and soon, I am gagging got some hot mummy cunt. Cunt crazed fucker Lanc’s U.K.
hey can you write an story of mom who abused by son pleasee. by the way your storys are very goood
I thought it was great. You write hot, hot stories that are easy to follow and simply delightful. I will be back for more.
A pretty unconvincing premise. Even porn stars do not fuck in private the way they do in front of the cameras. It's much for fulfilling to act on impulses, impulses triggered by sensations, emotions, feelings. And what about coitus interrupts more often then not? If you are really getting off on the sexual, erotic, not even to speak of loving aspects of the act of sex*, you will mostly go through with what you are doing when climax nears. Try it once, just close your eyes and enjoy the intensity of the rush instead of pulling out. Don't get me wrong, I'm not opposed to read about difference ways to conduct the act and finish it. But the omnipresence of blow by blow descriptions of mainstream porn movies, ticking off the usual boxes so to speak, in almost all and every story takes away from otherwise convincing erotica you have posted here. Alas, the same goes for most of the other authors whose stories I like to read.
*as opposed to someone who get's most of his thrills from exerting power and dominance (or the opposite) during sex, or those who simply have such pliable minds as to have their "sexual proceedings" completely controlled by porn, consuming it unreflective instead of using it as a crutch.
Overall, the story was exciting, but your mixed use of possessive pronouns was distracting, as when mother said the son's cock would look better in "your" mouth. Also, was the name of the boy in the movie Bennie or Jimmy? A little judicious editing would make a good story even better.
This was so fucking hot! Just incredible. I'll be checking out your other work. I hope very much there are some mother, daughter stories. Thank you so much for sharing.
Your stories alphabetically. This is by far the best one yet. I was going to stop reading them, until I got to this one. I might read a few more now.
I've read this several times and will do several times more. You have a way of presenting mother/son incest in such a way as to make it not only acceptable but most desirable. Keep it up, in so doing you help so many of us that read your offerings to keep IT up.
Good story, fine one, dear LC, but...to short, to easy. I really like you describing the sex, but i also like when they hunt each other...Sealed with a kiss, marked by love, "contract signed" in bed-at least 3 stamples & signature each-but, please, don't forghet the hunting seazon, lol. Make them toghether step by step, under your wings wich will spread over also as like always, my angel.
Yours,
G.M.
P.S: Of course 5 stars it's for any of your story, you know that, always be, so..i will not repeat...now and forever, my favourite author. Only other two authors here can look you in yor eyes, angel, maybe one time, you can work toghether at onestory...kisses, angel.
Was a good read but did not give reasons why father left
And seemed to spoil the plot 6839
One of the best mom and son stories i've read. I wish me and my mom had a relationship like that, the thought of her wanting me to fuck her keeps me up all night. Again, amazing story, definitely will be reading it many, many more times.
Would love to watch porn with my sons, or even better watch tapes my hub made of me with them. Getting very close to trying, hub wants me to. I have been fucking to boys and thinking about my sons
Many young men are having day dreams about their mothers (wet dreams too, OK?) but only one in a thousand or 1 in 500 is lucky enough to make love to his mother. [I don't have real statistical data, i am just guessing.]
THIS STORY IS A FINE MOTHER-SON INCEST STORY full of sexual attraction and true love.
Five stars: * * * * *
Nothing gets two people horny better than a good porn flick, even if you're related. If you're both into taboo type films, then it should be easy. Lust will take over, and mutual need will lead to some good hard fucking!!!
While I am not a writer and have not submitted anything to this site, I do read a lot on here and have a few comments/suggestions for you. Many of the mother/son incest stories sound the same; son watches mom, mom notices son, mom makes a move on son, they have sex. To grab an incest readers attention, you have to have more to the chase and be more graphic with the actual intercourse. This can be accomplished and still hold to the 'short story' theme.
One thing I wanted to comment on was the poor grammar used. There were missing words in sentences and sentences where extra words didn't fit. Have someone read and offer editing advice on your literary pieces. When I am trying to figure out what word should have been in the sentence or noticing that the incorrect pronoun was used, it takes away from what I am reading.
With that being said, I did enjoy your venture into incest writing. The basis for the story was good and you had the scenes set to where they could have been explosive. Hopefully, understanding this was only a little constructive criticism, your next writing will be that much better.
Keep writing and I will keep reading. Best of luck to you...Keith
My mom found me jerking off with a magazine that had guys shooting their cum on their face. She must have been standing there for awhile and heard me say, that's it mom I'm gonna cum all over your face. When I saw her standing there I covered myself with my blanket. She came over to my bed and took the magazine and started going through it and she came to a picture of a guy sucking another guys cock. She said I was perverted and was still looking through the magazine, I got a little bold and uncovered myself and started rubbing my cock. I have a 11 inch cock and I saw mom was looking at the men sucking cock. I said,ahhh I can do myself. She said no you can't and she said if I could she would show me how perverted and kinky she was. I got myself into position and put my cock in my mouth and started sucking up and down on my cock as mom was playing with her beautiful pussy, when I was going to cum the first shot went in my mouth and then I shot the rest of my cum all over mom's face.
Since I haven't read any of your other work I have no basis for comparison, but this story punched a lot of my buttons. Access to porn was none existent when I was your protagonists' age. We had to live with only our imaginations for directions on how to approach and develop such delightful occurrences, but we managed. We also discovered that Oedipus was alive and well in middle class America.
Thank you for not having so many frustrating grammatical errors. They get in the way of enjoying an excellent story!
If you can find the time, please write some more in this style.
I liked it, and it got me real hard, reality is much better than fantasy!
There should be an internal struggle and shame to overcome. To pretend otherwise means they are either flat, cardboard cut out characters or complete fantasy. Neither of these is as exciting as realistic struggle of lust vs societal norms.
I think that it lacked realism. It was a good premise but the progression quickly became unbelievable. You have a good writing style. Try to keep your stories more on the believable side.
I wondered if anyone would catch it, but yes, the 'fuck me like you always wanted to' was a little shout out to the best author of mother/son tales to ever grace literotica. Not that AWT would have penned a story this silly, but the sentiment is there.
AWT pulled his stories because of failing health and I hope for the best for him.
Good catch, my friend.
I just have to ask, the mom's line "fuck me the way you always wanted to!" Was it a tribute to the retired writer alwayswantedto?
Please tell me that there's more to come in this story?
I love when the build up comes from conflict!A son who caught his mother cheating, his best friend doing his mother... the confusion between arousal and rage...you can definitely do better. (PHVM)
I think you proved you can write a short, arousing erotic tale as expertly as you can write a much more detailed story. You are not tied into one writing style. Although I prefer your lengthier writings, I found it hard to complain about this one. I favor stories where the female is in control.
II found the story OK to above average, compared to other writers on his site, but certainly not up to the normal standards of LC68 but I was forewarned in your initial paragraph, so read it anyway and gave it 4 stars
"...tapping her clit with her purple fingernail.
'Come on, Joey, give your mother a kiss!'"
This was funny and arousing at the same time. Awesome!! I honestly wished I thought of this. GREAT writing.
Folks, there is nothing wrong when an artist diverts from the standard. Maybe he or she needs a break from the usual and wants to try something different. It satisfies all the fans who wished for a change, and if/when the artist returns their usual fare, then it's the glorious "return to their roots" cheer from the non-changers.
An erotic story is just like a good fuck--sometimes the longer ones are better; sometimes the quickies are better. The times I took my time licking my lady's thighs, delaying getting to her pussy were great. And so were the times we were late for work because she wanted to feed me her Breakfast of Champions or I bent her over the sink while she was doing her make-up.
;)
First time i've ever given you threes stars. I don't find a quick story like this a different style. It seems to me it's just a mediocre stroke story. I disagree with everyone whom said this was any different from any other stroke story and honestly I think of you as a better writer than this. I've been reading your stories for year and honestly this kind of disappointment me. You're one of the few authors with any sense of realism and one of the few I have favorited.
From a long time fan.
When I read this story the first time I thought your writing ability had escaped and went hiding out in Chicago. I have been keeping up with the comments though and happened to see your reply to one commentor. Damn! I had missed the whole point! An absurd movie leads to an equally absurd situation which resulted in an absurd story. I had failed to see the characteristic Lovecraft twist, so it was my reading ability that suddenly went missing and not your writing ability. I am leaving town tomorrow to go look for it.
I appreciate your response and explanation. I especially appreciate that, unlike some writers, attack me for not haven written my own stories, as if that is a prerequisite for critiquing a story, a movie or any other form of entertainment or information.
Thank you lovecraft you have many many fans in Germany we love your work
It's fantastic of you to try different things. If you do continue to write stroke stories, might I suggest double adjectives and more descriptors inside the sex scenes.
Thank you for your comment, I appreciate all feedback. I agree with your points about predictability, but want to add it was I was going for.
In fact although I would not say this story is a parody, I did write it very tongue in cheek and that was why I had Joey making fun of the lame movie, yet he ended up caught in an equally 'lame' scenario.
So I took this story lightly and figured that is what most people who favor this type of porn absurdity do, just go for the ride.
I have more ideas like this, but no worries, I have plenty of my 'usual' style in the works as well.
Thank you everyone for your comments both good and bad.
A quickie is okay....LOL! I enjoy both styles of writing and you did great with this one. Thanks for sharing. If you have other ideas for mother son quickies bring them on.
You could have written this one in your sleep. The son says how awful the actors dialogue in the firm is, but the mother's is just as predictable and uninspiring. It amazes me how so many people flip out for mediocrity. I know that you can write much better than this. Maybe a quickie story isn't right for your abilities?
I hate to be so harsh, but that's the way I see this.
Have always enjoyed your stories, you write well, you write what I want to read. So when you say your going to write a simple to the point hot short incest story. Well that's great, but damn you. lol. With all the authors I enjoy, I dont want it to end.
I would give it 7 stars if I could. That was incredible, hot, well written as usual. Thanks for taking the time to write.
for a short and sweaty it was fine, but I prefer your tales that let us get to know the characters.
my only critique is the name of the 'son' in the movie, was it Benny or Jimmy?
Great story, well paced with good descriptions. Loved it!!!
Too many writers try to write a story that goes from 0 to 60. They create a situation where there's never been any sexual tension, but suddenly a son makes a pass at his mom (or vice-versa) and they're off and running. This may be "only" erotica, but you managed to create a scenario where Mommy has been going out of her way to get her son to act on his impulses. Even though they'd never done the "first base, second base, etc" thing, the tension had been building, simmering, right below the surface. You prefaced this story by saying you prefer the slow build, but in this case, you succeeded in your effort to encapsulate all of that into a brief, two-page story. Great job. The only critique I had was the reference to "why Dad left Mom". You could have either followed up on that reference with an explanation, or simply left that reference out entirely. And if that's the only complaint I have, that should demonstrate how little there is to complain about. Again, great job!
An excellent contribution. Personally, I like the change of pace, long story, short story. I love the comment from the anon who wrote "great story." Lots of hot ideas on son into mom sex. It's true. Once a loving couple has dismissed the old tired taboo as the stupid shit it is, there's no holding them back. The kid'll be fucking his mother every damn chance he gets. He'll bend mom over the kitchen counter, push her up against the wall, climb on top of her in her bed, and fuck her. He'll fuck her in the back of the car, in the bathroom at the mall, on the lawn at night, in the little john on the plane on the way to visit grandma--everywhere and anywhere, the boy'll have his fat young cock up between his mother's legs up to his balls. He just will not be able to stay away from his own mother's cunt. That hairy hole between his mommy's thighs is where the kid came out of. Lots and lots of sons, it seems more all the time, have the urge to get back up inside it with something they've got that's big and hard. It's a son's own damn birth canal, the warm wet hole where his life-story began, the supreme twat of all his boyish dreams. Face it--a boy's penis and his mother's vagina are made for each other.
Naw, it was way hotter than hot. Sizzling describes it better. To those to whom it is too short, well who knows perhaps you'll add another chapter.
Thanks Don
Now you've truly done it mom and son enjoying the same fantasy and then they bring the fantasy to life. I had no choice but to give it five stars
A great story about a loving mother and son that have now achieved the best orgasms of their lives. Nothing more sexy than looking into the mirror to see the beautiful act of a mother stripped naked bring bent over the desk as her loving son is busy thrusting his unprotected manhood into her fertile womb. These two are now hooked on incest sex and will be constantly searching for their own orgasm. Mother's Day and birthday presents will change as this loving son fills his mothers lingere drawer with lots of clothing designed to make mommy even more sexy. Mom will dress solely to make her son hard so he can service her horney pussy. As they act out each movie I hope there is a mother impregnation movie to replicate. Having to finish yourself off and blow your load onto mommy' face or breasts is best done once the son has blown his load into mommy and given her a fat belly and caused her breasts to swell with milk. Please continue part two and let me read as mommy begs her son for a baby or lovingly fondles her pregnant belly while taking her from behind.
You've written a "she's hot, why not?" story. Hope that's out of your system now.
I loved this! 5 stars! As for the long stories vs short stories, you can't say one is ALWAYS better than the other.. Sometimes you want a delicious 7 course feast and sometimes you want a slice of pizza. This was a fantastic fucking slice of pizza!
Maybe a little on the short side but i liked it just the same. Keep posting your stories for us to read
Too short! I agree with the other posters - you're longer stuff is the best.
Hot! Awesome story. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the great work! ^__^
I love the way you weave in and out of the positions you have him in keep on trucking tenbears43 love your stories
I had to look twice when I saw this was only two pages. An LC68 story that's two pages? I haven't seen a story this short from you since the earliest chapters of SWB. You described this as quick and dirty and you were right on.
It was a fun story with a simple premise and I have seen many movies like the one described here and are always turned on by them in spite of the silly premise. This story was the written equivalent. I did enjoy it as a dirty little treat and voted a 5, but don't make a habit of it! :)
As with all your stories LC68, I loved this one. However, I prefer that you stick to your normal 6 to 8 page style stories. More is always better when it comes to an LC68 story. Make sure that the mom's tits are big as well, like in ""Mom loves to suck". That way she can easily tit fuck her son.
You ae one of the best writers on Literotica, by far.