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- My Mother's Best Friend
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All Comments on 'My Mother's Best Friend'
by UltimateSin
- 14 Comments
Exactly what I expected from this author. In other words, perfect. I have enjoyed many of his stories and rated them all highly. So, to Ultimatesin, thank you.
Very nicely done. I really like the dialogue on this one, especially between mother and son...
Lovely, excellent in almost every way....
ZERO dramatic tension. Practically the most conflict was when our hero said, "Don't mention my mother while I am in you..." Almost no tension of any kind is present.
She sleeps with him several nights without making love, and he has absolutely ZERO problem with it. Good, he is a gentleman, of great willpower, actually, great! But, he does not even excuse himself to beat off privately from what MUST be almost unbearable sexual tension. When she finally blows him, great, hell, I would have soaked or drowned her from no relief for several days of sleeping intertwined without sexual release, from what would appear at that time it occurred a serious hair-trigger response!
They are so perfectly set up and perfect for each other that they are almost boring.
You tend to excellent, I generally love your work
Sincerely, a fan
Very nicely done. I must admit to liking the trauma and drama of a LW story, but a well-written romance is even better. The changing PoV worked well.
Not bad. Unless you plan to write a prequel, I could have used more on the back story of all the main characters. Also glad you didn't go for the mother/son sex scene. Not a favorite of mine.
Liked those. . Not any real drama but a nice love story,,interesting that his mother was the instigator .
Really good writing, nice enough simple plot, but the way you wrote it was spot on for me.
Good descriptions and characters.
Easy to say oh it wouldn’t happen, but it does and let’s not forget, it’s a story…..