All Comments on 'My VideoChat Error Ch 32'
by NaughtyOne88
- 120 Comments
So is he transgender? Is he gay? Is he straight? Honestly, I’m more confused than anything.
I don’t even understand why Emma loves him when neither of them “actually” do anything loving with each other, they’re more like roommates than husband and wife....especially since both of them have significant others in their lives.
I mean, he couldn’t even talk to Emma. He pretended she didn’t exist other then to acknowledge her existence.
If you’re going to keep them married then they need to be married; but if he’s in love with Denise and she’s romantically involved with Jacques, then they really aren’t married except in name only.
Welcome back. Hope you are happy and healthy and enjoying life in these weird COVID times....
Well, at least the question about whether there's something in the protein shakes seems to be answered. Is Shaun(a) going to be dumping them out when he has the opportunity - say when Emma drops them off for him at work or when he's running late and takes it with him to drink on the way to work?
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If he does, will he get withdrawn symptoms? Will his penis stop shrinking or get back to its original size? Will his boobs that seem to be more sensitive go back to normal?
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I keep hoping to find out more about Emma, is she blackmailed as well? Does she think Shaun really wants to be feminized? Is she truly the hard hearted bitch who seems to love humiliating her husband by bringing lovers into the marriage bed, flaunting them in front of him? Or does she think he enjoys it when she does? Does she know that the shakes have drugs in them that Shaun hasn't consented to? Does she know Shaun is being blackmailed?
I thought CH 32 was subversive and and very good. Your story tends to the hard-to-believe. Why doesn't Sean run? What holds him, and a magical pink shake in the morning would be a capitulation to deus ex. How about unbreakable bonds of love? Miranda clearly is running Emma through the same training that Michele's wife is getting. Emma was reluctant in the coffee shop but domme's Sean easily now. She's just farther down the track. Sean's reactions make clear that he was taking Emma for granted and she wanted her revenge. Is Emma trapped in this new, bizarre lifestyle? Yes. Does she mind? Not really. She's having fun. The sex is great. And her revenge on Sean is delicious.
So here's the rub. Is Emma allowed to get off the bus, or is she along for the ride, no matter where it goes? Same with Sean. How did Janine become a transgendered escort? Is that where Sean is intended to go? If asked now, Emma would say she's loves Sean as Shauna and it will be a fun game in the future, but underneath he's still the man she married. But can she still say that when he has obvious breasts and dressing as a woman is easier than dressing as a man. Suggestion: the POV has been all Sean but it would be interesting to get Emma's point of view out. Perhaps, during more girl talk, one of her friends can dish the Emma dirt.
None of this resolves the overarching conspiracy issues attendant Naughty's identify and the why's and how's of her plot to reach a yet unknown goal. This story works best in its details, which are very strong in marshalling the plot. So, please keep at it.
I do think you need to advance Emma and Denise, make them cross lines not easily re-crossed, make them see themselves in new ways. Denise the size queen. Emma the hotwife domme. Sean the TG party femme. So even when they get to Mount Doom and throw the ring in the lava, they come back profoundly changed.
As always, your writing is a pleasure to read.
I just read it awesome, although i want more ,sorry hungry for this story , I can't wait for sauna and bf weekend
I look forward to this series more than any and it has never disappointed. It's almost excruciating, the slow reveals and anticpation of the inevitable, but it delivers. Can't wait for Shawna's next step.
Just found this and am half way through. Some pretty good writing! Please finish the novel.
Naughty88 so glad that you are back. Got to say I was worried for you with this covid mess. One thing I liked about this chapter was Shauna didn't over drink to submerge her feelings. Her dream was very revealing as to the direction she is going. When she stops getting elections during sex we will know what is in those "protein drinks", or when she has to go up in cup size. I would like to know more about Emma's situation. Is she a victim or is she an instigator?
Welcome back.
Yay! So glad to see the next chapter today. A really good one. I appreciate how the genre and your story in particular deals with the layers of personal acceptance of nonconforming sexuality and gender identity.
I know Shauna is not going to do the smart thing and have the protein shake analyzed. But he/she never did a smart thing through out this story. Did he count how long they were on a once a month schedule? After seeing her at the party did he figure out how long Emma has been going on "yoga retreats". Shaun(a) seems incredibly dumb, so the fact that he has an executive position is unbelievable. Isn't he supposed to analyze business decisions? How come he can't figure out what his own wife is doing and how long she has been doing it? How come he can't make good decisions about the people in his life. How come he can't figure out how long his babysitter has been banging his wife? Please give shaun(a) a few active brain cells. Take his head out of his abs and use it for more than a hatrack.
Ms Danie
A lot of information in this chapter, but what is Shaun(a) going to do with this information? Dave's party is coming up next weekend and Shauna's weekend with her boyfriend is the week after. Denise going to Naughty's party with Emma should be interesting. How much truth is Denise going to share with Shauna? Is Emma going to take Denise as a lover? If Emma going to do that in front of Shauna? Will Denise keep it on the down low front shauna, or be up front? If Denise becomes Emma's lover, I believe she will try to keep it on the down low and Emma will reveal it to Shauna to further break him. Emma is Naughty.
Ms Danie
Just another thought about the shakes, they're 'addictive' according to the info Shaun got. Is there more than hormones or hormone blockers in them? A.long time ago I thought that there might be something in them that made him more horny, and more easily accepting of what's happening to him. Maybe there's something actually addictive in them, that will give him withdrawal sypmtoms if he stops, or at least crave them if he tries to stop.
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As for msdanie's comments about him being dumb, yes, maybe. But he did mention as did the author, that he's someone who wants to get all the info before making any decisions. As for the dumb part - how long Emma's been fucking around, I think he's more clueless than dumb. He did tell us early on, when he and Emma were going to get together on a Friday night for their once-a-month session, that it was work and kids etc that kept them apart. Maybe it was Emma arranging things to keep them from making love more often. Her comments to her lover that Shaun doesn't enjoy sex with her is just more ways to humiliate him and hurt him.
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Surely if she did Love him, she could find SOME way to let him know that she truly did, rather than just whispering to him in bed once in a while. Or maybe she is as much in an information blackout about him as he is about her. She is only told he loves what's happening and doesn't realize that he's being blackmailed. Although his reaction to seeing her and Brown at the party should have been some clue to her. Well maybe not, if she's also drugged, or at least only told things and shown edited videos of his actions - she might be clueless. But then 'secretly' occasionally whispering 'I love you' does indicate that she knows something.
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Until further info comes our way I'll continue to assume that she is at least partially a victim, but she also has come to accept her role. After all Shaun has accepted Shauna, and does get physical pleasure from his new role, and even has started dreaming about things.
Similarities
I see a lot of similarities between the different characters in the story. Do not know whether they are intenional and relevant or not. For some of these similarities I see what I think are clues in the story. Some others follow from my imigination and what I think is the plot of the story.
Like to hear it if you think there are more similarities, or if I did make misjudgements!
Shaun(a)/Emma:
Love each other; Are controled by Naughty; Don’t know who Naughty is; Drink protein shake for breakfast; Have a far higher sex drive than before let’s say Shaun’s alleged affair with Rachael; Have a lover; Don’t condemn the other’s sexual escapades; Have/had sex with Mike; Made a business deal in exchange for sexual favours;
(Difference:) People from Emma’s work, but not from Shaun(a) work, are involved in Naughty’s game;
(Imagination:) Are punished by Naughty; Are initiated by Mike;
Emma/Denise:
Are real women; Control Shaun(a); Wear Shaun’s wedding ring; Are controled by Naughty; Aid in the training of Shaun(a); Have been gang banged; Were not sexually satisfied by there friend/husband; Their friend/husband is punished by Naughty;
Shaun(a)/Mitch(Michelle)
Are punished by Naughty; Are trained with their wife’s consent; Did not sexually satisfy their wives; had (alleged) sexual affairs outside their marriage; Are caged; Crossdress; Are sexually satisfying men; Are dominatex by women; Have the same dick size; (Does John Harding fit in here?)
(Difference:) Mitch(Michelle) is forced, Shaun(a) is not; Rumours are spread about Mitch but not Shaun at their work place;
Emma/Leslie
Were not sexualy satisfied by their husband; Their husband had (an alleged) afair(s); Have a young boyfriend;
Difference: Leslie does not take the domme training, Emma does;
(Imagination:) (Difference:) Leslie does not love her husband where Emma does.
Nathalie/Teri:
Are married to a real men; Are cuckqueaned; Are chastised;
Naughty?: yes, I do have a strong suspision for a certain character but keep that for myself ;-)
Imagination: Is a woman; Punishes for her own private reasons; Controls and punishes Shaun(a) and Emma; Earns good money with her parties; Is linked to secretaries;
PS. Regarding my previous post...
Maybe assumption is a better term than imagination.
At difference Shaun(a)/Emma it should be mentioned that this is apart from the three obvious involved persons from Shaun(a)’s work.
Addition to Emma/Denise is that they both have had sex with Mike (both initiated by Mike?).
First of all, glad to see NaughtyOne88 back.
It’s a great chapter as always. Suberik’s list of similarities is a lot of fun to read.
As to who is Naughty, I mentioned my speculation before that Emma may be Naughty. I hope that’s not the case though. It would be so much more interesting if Naughty is someone else as the storyline has many more possibilities that way. Like there can be a spin off story from Emma’s perspective as well.
Hi Meety,
No, it's not Emma... at least that's what I think ;-)
Have fun comming up with your own fitting solution...
Btw, I also think Shaun(a) will not grow boobs because of the protein shake. If so, Naughty will loose a valuable cuckold couple, and she is very choosy according to Rachael...
CU, suberik
One Shauna may not be dumb but she cannot make a decision to save her butt. Nobody has all the information in any decision the make. Usually the preponderance of the information let's you make a decision about the like outcome. People make bad decisions all the time. The best way to make a decision is to lay out the facts as you know them and branch off possible outcomes. Fact, Shaun is being blackmailed. Fact, Shaun is locked in chastity. (More about that later) fact, his wife has been/is fucking several/many men, since before the party. Fact Emma has several boy/men lovers Jon, Jacques, Dave, Nick, Mike. Fact, Shauna is taking a drink everyday that may contain an aphrodisiac, hormones, maybe addictive. Fact Shauna is being trained as a feminine submissive. Fact Emna is taking a drink everyday, effects unknown but may contain aphrodisiacs, something to increase chances of pregancy, maybe addictive.
Speculations, branches: Shauna is being trained to be a trans gender fucktoy, slut, whore. Shauna is being trained to be Emma's house slave/maid/babysitter. To fall in love with Jason or someone else to get out of Emma's life (think this is less likely) being driven to suicide,
Speculation 2: Miranda, Nick, Mike and maybe Rachael know who Naughty is. Miranda, Nick, and Mike are junior partners in Naughty's schemes. Speculation3 which of the three companies is Naughty involved with? I think it is Dave's company.
Two things. 0ad locks on chastity devices are easy to pop open with two butter knives. The newer type locks are easy to drill out with a 1/16" drill bit. And those plastic chastity devices ( like the one put on Shauna often fall off with vigorous movement.
Speculation #3 it is likely that Nick caught Emma off base with Jon, and Nick shared that info with whoever Naughty is.
Naughty, naughty is John Harding's wife. Shona will be forced to work out the contract in favor of Harding, and Terence will be ruined. Sean will be fired from his job for the losses caused to the company. He and Emma would be ruined and turned into street whores.
msdanie, It is not profitable for Emma to remove Sean from her life, she will immediately turn from a married woman into an affordable whore and lose a significant part of the income from her husband's salary.
Sergaydom, hi not sure about Harding's Wife. Naughty said in the beginning that Naughty was paying him back for hurting Him/Her. This is a powerful clue that Shaun/Shauna never considered. I know my self that there are people I hurt and there are people that I may have hurt unintentionally. If someone was blackmailing me because I hurt them, I would start listing them in my mind. Everyone of us has hurt someone in the past. Parents, siblings, friends, semi friends, enemies, aquantineses. Some we will remember some we won't. But the possibilities and the people around us will give clues.
msdanie Who is a Naughty, Naughty is not very interesting, I think the author has not yet decided on a Naughty, one thing is clear, that a Naughty woman. I don't think Sean is afraid of blackmail, he has seen all these people and can tell you about them himself. It's just that Sean is a whore inside himself, and that's why he does everything. I wish I could read English.
I think Shauna is a person that sees doom in every decision. The only people that would be affected by the revelations are his parents. And since he doesn't seem to live anywhere near them it isn't a big deal.
Why do you think Emma will lose financially? What ever is Naughty's scheme, Naughty must be expecting it to be profitable in a big way. Is Naughty expecting to peel off a large payout from John Harding, or to take control of the company that Shaun/Shauna works for? Dave's company seems to be outside the loop of the financial playing field. That makes me believe that Naughty is inside that company. Also, yes there are sexual shenanigans in every company, but the amount, and incestuous nature of them would cause less attention to actual business, and profits.
Shaun is disengaged socially, and somewhat in his marriage. Shaun is a social chameleon, says the acceptable things, but is actually disengaged. He seems to have no passions in life other than maybe his(?) children. Even his relationship with Emma is rote. There doesn't seem to be much passion on his part.
I think that if Nick caught Emma in an affair with Jon, then started to blackmail her for sex, being Nick he bragged about it to someone and that someone was Naughy. Does Naughty work at Dave's company, or Nick's company? I think Dave's company maybe on the chopping block also. Too much non business going on.
Emma is not the kind of person who can conduct a financial operation to take over someone else's company, otherwise she would already be in another position. In the event of the destruction of Sean, Emma loses the most., 1. Her husband's salary, and Sean is a successful manager. 2. She loses her husband and the father of her children, no one will take her as a wife, they will just fuck her and no one needs her children. 3. If Sean is destroyed, the whole scandal will spill over to Emma's children. Emma is the least interested in destroying Sean. Her interest is in dominating Sean in family life.
Hi,
Having developed my own theory on who Naughty is and why the story evolves as it does I am now trying to properly link more character to it. Rereading chapters 29 through 32 and focusing on Denise I am curious after why she acts as she does.
Is there anybody here willing to share hiw or her reflections on this?
PS. Did we loose contact with our author again?
CU, Suberik
Hi Suberik
I haven't been able figure out if Denise is one of Naughty's minions or one of his victim's. Of course she could be one of Naughty's victims with instructions to push Shaun/Shauna to accept his/her feminization, and keep it from him/her. How has Shaun/Shauna hurt Naughty so bad that he/she is devoting so much effort and time to punish him/her? That should be a major clue to Shauna/Shaun.
msdanie, I don't think Naughty took too much offense to Shaun. Naughty reveals Shaun,s inner need. It is possible that Nick is the Naughty One and he is taking revenge for Emma choosing Shaun over him and punishing Denise for her refusal to have sex with him.
Hi Msdanie,
below some quotes that may be hints that Denise is somehow in touch with Naughty. However, I am convinced that Denise does not know who Naughty is. This implies that Denise is somehow in touch with Naughty under her true identity. But take care, even with the qoutes it is pure speculative.
Ch 1: "Don't be silly, its part of my job, not yours! Besides you seem not yourself today and slightly ill. You likely need some more water." … "The water is on your desk Mr Jacobs." said Denise in her forever cheerful voice. ... {Naughty} "Drink some water. Leave an inch height of water in the glass," came next.
Comment: How convenient, water at the right time...
Ch 2: {Naughty} "Now your client is coming at 12 noon. He will be meeting with you during your lunch hour. You should thank me for that. Denise will be away at lunch."
Comment: How does Naughty know that Denise will be away?
Ch 3: {Denise} "You do like your lingerie," she added a little lighter tone to her voice. "Good choice. Looks like you go to the same place I shop at."
Comment: Denise shops at Mandi’s shop? Which is also the source for lingerie for Naughty I think.
Ch 5: {Naughty} "Good job Denise, you know your place. Come dressed as usual for work tomorrow. Will you do everything I ask of you?"
Comment: Why would Naughty comment on the way Denise has to dress? And what is meant with “dressed as usual”?
Ch 31: Part of me wished I did not have to fire her {Rachael} earlier this year. She had been a good secretary. But then I would not have needed to hire Denise. Well, actually, then the company would not have hired Denise to be my secretary, And that was after I had several temps.
Comment: So, it took some time to get Denise as Shaun’s secretary. Why?
Ch 32: Everyone chuckled a bit and Denise led me out of the bar after we said our goodbyes. In the car ride back to her place I told her what I found out much to her delight. I asked her about her conversation with Kayla but she was not very specific about things. Told me that she did not get any sort of golden nuggets like I did.
Comment: What is it that Denise is holding back?
Suberik, as usual you get to the heart of the matter. That Naughty has conversations with Denise that Shauna/Shaun is in the dark about is very probable, however that doesn't necessarily mean that she is apart of Naughty's organization, she could still be a victim. I'm still waiting for the Denise, Emma fallout from Naughty's party. I don't know what that will reveal. I also don't know if we will ever find out what really happens at the party as Shauna will not be attending. Emma and Denise can't be relied on to reveal the truth. Still waiting to see if Emma gives Shauna permission to go away with Jason. Most likely will give permission. Dave's party will be interesting, will Shaun or will Shauna be attending? Betting on Shauna. If Shauna attends more clues will be dropped. Shauna's feminization will be stepped up.
I just re-read this chapter, and noticed something else, which led me to check out chapter one. In this chapter Saun was questioning to himself if the reason he was being punished what because he, like Mitch, was only making love to his wife once a month. - and the wife's need more than that.
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In chapter one, very early on, Shaun states that he's excited to be having some time with Emma and that, yes, they only get time for lovemaking once a month or so. But only because they are so busy with jobs and children, not because Shaun doesn't want to. He's very eager - leaves me with the impression he would like to be with Emma more often.
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Of course if he was that eager he wouldn't have to surf porn to get excited to be with his wife. Which, if it were real life, would lead me to think that maybe he has trouble 'getting in the mood'? Does anyone else get that impression from those early paragraphs in the first chapter? Of course without his porn surfing and the oh-so-convienient femdom/pegging porn there wouldn't be a reason to blackmail him.
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On another vein, Suberlik - thanks for the quotes in your last post. They do point out questions as to Denise's relationship with Naughty. Or, to Naughty being in the same company as Shaun - if he/she is in the same company then that's how they might know all about Denise's movements. I still hold out the possibility that Naughty might be Vanessa (I think that's her name - the Higher up that did so much work on the contract with the other company that Shaun got the lead on, and now has her own blackmail on Shaun.)
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Sorry if my sentences run long, I do tend to ramble on. My better half - much better half - has to keep reminding me to stop rambling on - as well as to stop talking with my hands - "You're windmilling about again" she'll quietly say as she gently touches my arm to keep me from bumping someone behind me.
Hi Msdanie, Johsun,
thanks for replying to my recent posts. As usual, one question leads to others. I will try to reply on your questions and also give some recent speculative insight into a plausible explanation on my initial question regarding Denise’s behaviour.
First the questions raised by Msdanie (doing this from the top of my head, so I might miss one or two). You are correct that the harm done by Shaun to Naughty is a big clue. As said before, I have a theory on what is happening and why (though I might be completely wrong). Following this theory Shaun(a) knows but does not realize it ;-).
Regarding your remarks on Denise and her connection to Naughty, or Naughty in her real life identity... Denise does not know who Naughty is at the current point of the story (I think). Moreover, she is really blackmailed (this is not just a cover) and thus a victim of Naughty. But I think that she has contact, is guided in her work somehow, by Naughty in her true real life identity. However, this is still vague to me so I can not explain more about this. As said, Denise is a victim of Naughty. But... I think Denise was put in place to replace Rachael and seduce Shaun. Furthermore, I think that Denise was intended to play the same role as Mandi does for Michelle. However, Denise loves Shaun(a) and therefor complicated things for Naughty (and she has to atone for this ch 13).
I agree that we will not learn much from Denise and Emma performing at the next party. Maybe a little bit that will be told by Denise to Shau(a). As to the company picnic... Shaun(a) is being trained I think on three aspects, being: feminzation, being a good husband, dominated and fucked by women. In all aspects Emma plays a role, she has to as she is Shaun’s wife, and wants to contrary to Leslie (Mitch’s wife). The feminization part is mainly covered by Denise (see more below on my comments on her stange behaviour). Domination and being fucked by women will be, I think, covered by Rachael (next step in training). This leaves the good husband aspect. This is, up to now, only partly covered by Emma (cleaning up). I think the picnic will be the first time that Shaun(a) has to prepare a partner for Emma and Emma herself (like Teri did). But again, these are all speculations.
Next the issues raised by Johsun. According to my theory Naughty does not work at Shaun(a)’s company :-). About Shaun’s sex drive. You may be right. However, it can also be the regular routine that happens in may marriages. To busy with kids, jobs, etc, failing to have the energy to have an abundant sex life. This may also be the reason that Shaun dod not respond to Rachael hitting on him.
Back to my initial question regarding Denise’s behaviour. I leave out citations to not let this post be to lenghty. In later chapters Denise acts as a jealous, possesive girlfriend (Shaun(a) not telling he was fucked by Jason in the cafe’s backroom, Shaun(a) not telling her Mandi and Kayla are her friends). On top of that she wants to go shopping with Shauna and also buy a matching lingerie set. To me (recent insight) this seems that Denise steps up the feminization to high levels. Shauna has to be the real best girlfriend of Denise. Share all her secrets and act as a woman also when there is no sex involved. I don’t think MIchelle will be trained like that by Mandi. Training Shaun(a) this way may have a purpose, but the reason I can think of is highly speculative speculation...
CU, Suberik.
Hi Suberik
I think Rachael is the dark horse in this race. I'm not sure she was put in place by Naughty. May have been put in place by Mr or Mrs Harding.and Naughty used Emma to replace Rachael with Denise. Rachael knows slot about Naughty and even may know who he/she is. I believe Harding and Naughty were actually working for the same foul without realizing it and when they became a where of this the combined forces.hence Jaunty using Hardings house for his/her parties. Rachael is Hardings agent. Or maybe the are still competing but it doesn't appear to be the case re Naught yes answer to Shaun when he asked Naughty about submitting to Rachael.
Rachael is the dark horse in this race. She is obviously an agent of Mr. or Mrs Harding. Therefore Harding and Naughty are working together. If Denice was put in place to seduce Shaun, then she was already an agent of Naughty. Her anger and tears when she revealed to Shaun that she was being blackmailed was an act.
One thing bothers me. Emma says she loves him/her then walks up the stairs holding Jon's hand talking cheer fully and telling Jon she wants anal sex with him, but wouldn't give it up to her husband. So why does Shauna believe her when she says she loves him? Most normal people would hate the person that treated them this way. Shaun/a doesn't even really hate Naughty. Does he believe she is putting on an act for Jon, or for him. She has to be putting on an act for one of them.
Hi Msdanie,
Aahh, Rachael..she plays an important role in my theory :-).
Ch 1: Rachael, my secretary of 10 years (who had been hitting on me enough that my wife knew).
Ch 17: I {Shaun(a)} remembered the wretched look on her {Rachael} face the day I fired her. I remembered her tears and how awful it had made me feel. Here she was expecting me to finally succumb to her charms and instead I fired her. She was not expecting that. How humiliated she seemed as she cleaned out her desk in front of the other office staff that Monday morning. They looked at her as if they knew why she was being let go. She took it so hard.
Ch 31: I like sexually submissive men. I like fucking their asses. And more. That brings me deep sexual satisfaction. I get off on it." Rachael declared. ... {Naughty} "Rachael is good at breaking husbands. She can help with your training, in fact she will be the next part of your training." Naughty typed. "Submit to Rachael when you are with her. Miranda will talk with her. Chat later."
Let X be Naughty’s true identity. Rachael knows X and Naughty, but I do not think she knows that X is Naughty. I think only Miranda knows that Naughty is X. Apart from that, a lot of people know X.
Rachael wanted to step up the ladder in the company (ch 31: she is more than a pretty face). When X learned this she set up Rachael to start an affair with Shaun, maybe done through Miranda. It is possible that Rachael also knew Miranda as she herself is a domme. Why else would Rachael try to start an affair, after 10 years...
The affair would give X/Naughty a reason to punish Shaun (make the affair known to Emma, and then proceed as with Mitch/Leslie), which has been a long lasting incentive of X. However, Shaun did not respond as anticipated, although there were rumours. X told Emma about the rumours which sifficed. Neither X not Rachael anticipated that Emma would become furious and made Shaun to have Rachael fired. This was a great shock for Rachael. X (or Miranda) told Rachael that there was this person Naughty that would take care of things. So, in exchange of breaking John Harding she was offered a good position in the Harding Company by Mrs. Harding. The fact that Rachael wants Shaun(a) to submit to her is not directed by Naughty. It is an unanticipated gift, as Denise can not train Shaun(a) to submit to dominant women (Denise loves Shaun(a)). So, Naughty jumps to the opportunity.
Regarding your question on Emma telling Shaun(a) she lover him/her and walk away with Jon... She puts on an act for Naughty (the house is bugged), or just thinks she really helps Shaun(a) with this. Emma is made to believe by Naughty, that Shaun(a) is into men, feminization, cuckolding, etc.and is most likely also shown proof of this (video recordings). Furthermore, Emma is told that Shaun(a) needs to be trained, and that Emma should train him to be a good husband. So, she has to confront Shaun(a) with her having sex with her lovers. Apart from that, she lets Shaun(a) know she does not disapprove his life style but still loves him. Apart from that... she is also on the protein shake.
Btw, I think Denise is also on the protein shake...
Well, this is what I think of it.
CU, Suberik
I have a nasty feeling we will never know the ending. I just hope the author is ok.
Suberik
I agree Denise is playing a hidden game on Shaun(a). Not sure if love of Shaun is real or act. Also unsure if Emma's supposed love of Shaun(a) is real or act. I tend to think Emma's love is an act. Her sexuality is real, and hiding it from Shaun by limiting him to missionary sex once a month while she has been having affairs for some time(?) shows her disrespect and loathing of him. Emma is definitely a size queen, and probably always has been. Shaun should definitely do a DNA test on his children. How long she has had him on a monthly schedual is important information that Shaun(a) or Naughtyone88 is not giving us.
Suberik
I think you are glossing over Emma's emotional relationship with Jon and Jacques. There is emotional relationships with both. She doesn't have a emotional relation ship with Tina and it shows. The expressions of love she uses with Shaun(a) are a control device. When she had a cance to tell Shaun after Nick and Natilie left she didn't even give him anything. She could have just said she was being blackmailed. Of course Shaun could have said. "I'm being blackmailed, and he didn't use that opportunity. Emma's actions showed me that she wants to keep Shaun in the dark about what is going on.
Hi Msdanie,
I think we will not agree on the issue of Emma loving Shaun(a) or not up until Naughyone88 will let us know. We had this discussion several times in the past. Emma loving Shaun(a) is an important issue in my theory, but that theory can be completely wrong of course. Where you see Emma act to hurt Shaun(a), I see mixed emotions. Firstly, Emma really thinks that cuckolding and being a good husband makes Shaun(a) tick, but s/he needs more training. So, that's part of what she does, also because Naughty told her to do it. Secondly, she is hooked on the sex (proteine shake, like Denise needs cock and sperm every now and then, well very often). With Nick there is also anger, she does not like it that it hurts her sister (they often sat together until contact broke), and also not the arrogance of Nick towards Shaun(a). But she knows that Nick fucking her is part of an agreement between Nick and Naughty. Thirdly, the house is bugged and Emma fears another punishment from Naughty. Like Denise she was gangbanged (at the office, according to Dave). So, telling Shaun(a) she is controled by Naughty is a no go.
No offence taken in you not agreeing with me, hope you feel the same (think so :-)).
Wonder if others are also reading our posts and what their opinion is...
Really hope that Naughtyone88 will return soon...
CU, Suberik
I agree that until more information comes forth we'll disagree about Emma. I think the bedroom isn't bugged. Nick is the person that does the bugging and I'll wager that he avoids being videotaped.
With apologies to Sr. Longo's ill-conceived "ending," in addition to tracking more than one other story on plotting, it's predictable and therefore boring.
NO88, your plotting tends to the subtle and therefore remains hard to foresee. I've shared with you in more detail than here what I think is the plot. Shortly said, Harding's wife runs Harding and his business. She wants to take Fred (and Shaun's) company over., the first of many. She created the sex club (and its extension the sex slave ring) as a way to get into Fred's company under the radar. The changes the characters are being put through makes them useful to her organization, now and later. Acting thru proxies, she is almost impossible to trace, making retaliation impossible. Because she is ruthless and advertises the fact, it makes escape seem an almost certain death sentence.
Framed that way, Shaun's willingness to endure terrible things becomes believable. Because Shaun cooperates, Emma, Denise and others get license to go along because if Shaun is going along, how bad can it really be? Plus the sex - Emma, Denise and others think the sex really good, and hard to give up. Shaun's ex-secretary has been bought off, and really hasn't Emma been bought off as well. Perhaps Denise has been too but those details have yet to emerge.
Only a plot broad enough to allow all these simultaneous developments can work. And I have little doubt that whatever the details turn out to be, the overall scope will be as broad as I suggest. The thing I like most about your story is your willingness to let it breathe. So take your time. And be in no rush to wrap up. This story is as good as it gets.
(I tried to send this privately but was informed you no longer accept such messages.)
Michael Fitzgerald.
One of the things that really bothers me, is that Emma and Shaun do not communicate. They didn't before the blackmail started, and they don't now. Emma communicates more with Jon than she did with Shaun. Now all she says is clean the house, do the laundry, eat my pussy, no love on her part, and none on his. Why would he even think she might love him? Jason communicates with him, Denise communicates with him, and he puts up a plastic front with both.
Hi all,
Ch 1: I {Shaun} accepted that because she {Emma} was a very hot blonde and we had a lot in common.
Ch 10: We {Shaun(a) & Denise} both found out so much about the other and discovered that we had more in common than we realized before.
Ch 20: In doing so we {Shaun(a) & Denise} had great conversation and continued to discover that we had so much in common.
Ch 21: She truly is everything a man could want. Hot looking. Nice person. Lots in common with me. If I had met her instead of Emma-
If Shaun(a) and Emma have a lot in common, and Shaun(a) and Denise too, then do Emma and Denise also have a lot in common? Does this mean anything for the realtion between Emma and Denise?
CU, Suberik
Hey Guys!
Sorry for the absence! RL has been hectic and kind of troublesome lately. Finally able to get back to writing. Have a fair bit of each of the next couple of chapters in first draft.
Chapter 33 has been proving to be a hard one to write right. Several tough scenes for me that I need to get just right. There will be lots for those who like reading between the lines, but as usual, not everything will be as it seems!
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Will comment on some of the interesting comments posted here soon!
Hurray!
I missed you! Welcome back. Hope RL will improve and stay good now for you.
CU, Suberik
Just had a thought. Ted, the husband of Emma's secretary is a computer programmer, and has reason to feel hurt and angry towards both Emma and Shaun. Could him and his wife be plotting to bring down Emma's and Shaun's companies? With Mr and Mrs Harding's help?
Emma told Shaun that, HER AND NICK DID NOT HAVE SEX WHILE THEY WERE DATING. Doesn't forclude after marriage. I wonder how much Emma's kids look like Nicks kids.
I enjoy reading the comments, but not as much as reading new chapters LOL. To msdanie and Suberlick and other posters, thanks for the comments and insight. Makes me think about this and gives me new ideas as well.
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I think I'm obsessing about this story nearly as much as my dad did about 'his soaps' that he got into once he retired! One of the points that I really obsess about in this story is the relationship between Shaun and Emma. Does Emma love him. Is Emma being blackmailed or is she part of the plot?
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In an earlier chapter Shaun(a) recalled a party where Emma reappeared after an absence and I seem to remember something about her hair or dress not being neat and in place - perhaps in my mind or in the chapter there was something about her boss reappearing at the same time. Made me think that Emma and her boss (Dave?) went off and fucked. Was there a promotion or raise announced then for Emma? Or has my addled memory made things up?
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That bit made me think that's when Emma started on her extra-curricular activities in the office. Blackmail or did Dave remind her of the pleasure of large cock? - remember that she was with Nick before she took up with Shaun.
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And then Emma gets to see video of Shaun dressed up as Shauna and supposedly enjoying being ... used. She certainly didn't act much alarmed or shocked or that surprised to see Shauna being taken doggy style at the party. So the idea posted below that she thinks Shaun enjoys his role is valid. But also valid is that she is conscious of the bugs in the house (and elsewhere?) and plays up to them. Only whispering her love to Shaun as she snuggles. But doesn't explain why neither of them said anything when outside the house when Nick et al left.
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Nor does it explain why neither Shaun or Emma - both highly paid supposedly successful business execs - didn't think to write a note on a napkin during their conversation in the coffee shop/restaurant way back early on after the party - Naughty was listening and texting Shaun, and Emma kept sending texts. Makes us wonder if Emma was the one sending texts? Or was she reporting what was going on to Naughty or someone else. A note or two would have cleared much up. But I can see why an author wouldn't put that in since it keeps the suspense active.
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One last thought, for the moment, The companies, Shaun's and Emmas and Harding, Big business - will we find that it is all about money and contracts? I think the below comment posed by Anonymous about Harding's wife being behind things might be valid. Money is the root of all evil. I hope that Shaun is being so submissive and non aggressive because he wants to find out as much as he can about the situation. I do believe that perhaps he has found that he is truly bi, and perhaps what's happening to hm isn't that terrible. And he has fallen in love with Denise. All along he is trying to find more and more information about what's going on.
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And yes I ramble. I'm afraid to go back and re-read what I wrote, I'll probably find I'm making no sense at all. I blame the Lipitor.
One of the things I find inconceivable is Shaun being a senior executive. He is to much of a beta male. Senior executives are by nature alpha males. A necessary attribute for the position. There is the fighting, spying, and backstabbing necessary to achieve those positions, and hold them from ambitious underlings. Shaun is a milktoast from the beginning, a hide his head in the sand person.
Johsun
Another comment, Shauna is becoming something of a size queen herself.
Hi Johsun (and others),
some reflections on your post reasoning from my theorie of what is going on... So, most likely it is all completely false.
To me it is clear that Emma loves Shaun(a). I think there are numerous clues in the story to back this up (to many to put here as quotes). Furthermore, Emma is also being blackmailed and is also an important part of the plot. And yes
ch 17: At the last one {company picnic}, she {Emma} had disappeared for a while. Just before I found her again he {Dave} passed by me. He stopped and told me what a fine wife I had. With a shitfaced grin that I attributed to too much alcohol. When I found her, She did not seem herself. She said she was mulling something over. When I pressed her for details, she said that her boss had mentioned that she might be able to land a promotion
This was about one or two month before Shaun(a)’s blackmail started. At that time Emma’s blackmail had already started. I am not sure whether or not the encounter with Dave was set up by Naughty or not (compare this to Rachael’s and Shaun(a)’s deal). And no, she is not hatefull to Shaun(a) at all. At least not anymore (think of what I wrote about the role of Rachael being Shaun’s secretary). And yes, Emma is being manipulated by Naughty by showing video’s of Shaun(a)’s sexual encouters. So, she truly believes that this is what Shaun(a) really likes. So, out of love (and also because she became hooked on sex with real men herself) she supports Shaun(a).
Emma has been punished by Naughty. I think it was the gang bang Dave mentioned at the party. The video recordings of this are probably used to blackmail Emma. Anyhow, like Denise she fears another gang bang. So, she is very cautious to not upset Naughty again. This is why she does not communicate with Shaun(a) about their situation in any way.
You refer to the anonymous poster that Mrs Harding may be Naughty etc. The problem I have with this is the question what Shaun(a) did to her to deserve a thourough and harsh punishment. How did s/he hurt her? I think there are other options that appear in the story so far.
Well to end this comment I give you something to chew on about Naughty and money (did not yet fully solve it myself).
Ch 1:"I don't want your money. You will have to do exactly as I say or the chat ends and I begin forwarding emails, got it?"
Ch 6: "Now be especially careful with those controllers. They cost me a lot," typed Naughty. "They work up to a distance of 25 yards."
Ch 20: There were three nice sized boxes {with lingerie} in our entrance hallway. All had the markings of a local courier.
Naughty’s parties are expensive to attend. So, Naughty makes a lot of money? But how expensive can those remote controllers be? Didn’t Naughty pay for Shaun(a)’s first lingerie sets and female clothes? Naughty does not want money from Shaun(a). And what about all dildo’s molded after real men’s cock’s. Add to this that Naughty does not have to pay for the location of her parties...
CU, Suberik
I just did a quick re-read of chapter 20, where Shaun is shown that Emma now has Jon as a lover in the marriage bed while he stays downstairs, then has to clean her out.
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What I was looking for was the bit about the boxes that were delivered. Yes, there were three boxes, but only two for Shaun, the third was for Emma. We never found out what was in the third box. Just that Shaun though it was heavy. What was in it - perhaps the strap on Emma uses, but surely that wouldn't be that heavy, so there's other things for Emma. Computer/laptop and wifi stuff to download and send off the recordings of the hidden cameras that were set up? Or more toys to torment Shaun(a) with or for Emma to use?
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I hope we find out about that third box or is it just a red herring thrown out to confuse us, or something that the Author changed his mind about later on.
Look at us pouring over all these chapters trying to read something into them, like some conspiracy person checking every line that Nostrodomus every wrote LOL.
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So another thought, Dave - in Chapter 17 (thanks msdanie) Shaun recalls how he is always around Emma at parties, how he has told Shaun that if he wasn't in the picture he'd go after her. How he says how good her figure is and how hot she is. Could he be Naughty and the thing that Shaun did to deserve all his blackmail is that he's married to Emma? Emma who is now working longer hours but hasn't gotten the promotion? (or did she in a later chapter?)
In chapter 24 when Emma Is getting ready to take Shauna analy Shauna observes a twinkle in her eye. To me this means that she enjoys the humiliation, embarrassment, and power exchange this means. Those emotions are not love. At no time does Emma Show Shaun love. Even before Shaun was being blackmailed she dictated the sexual frequency, and method of sex. The fact that she now apparently enjoys all the things that she denied Shaun, shows that she was two faced the entire marriage. Suberik you obviously live in lala land yourself. I have to agree with Sergaydom that Emma Has a vested interest in keeping Shaun(a) under her thumb, and broken. An important point glossed over is Emma's yoga lessons. How long has she been taking them? how long has she been fucking Jon? (22years old, been baby sitting since before the kids were in grade school.) How long has Nick been fucking her? How long has she been rationing Shaun(a)'s sex? Let's get a time line on Dave's party's. Seems like this next party is a Spring, or Summer one. If spring and the party that Dave either fucked or blackmailed her was a picnic one it was a summer or spring the previous year.
Hi Msdanie, I like the post you just made about Emma enjoying "the humiliation, embarrassment, and power exchange," that goes with pegging her hubby - Shaun(a). I guess there's two sides to everything, because when I read that part I got the impression that, Yes, she was looking forward to the 'new married sex' but for different reasons than you propose. I took it to mean that she was happy and excited to be intimate with her husband after a long dry spell, and - she thinks - in a way he will enjoy better.
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Although where he was obviously surprised to see her with a strap on, and reluctant, confused, etc, she did sort of egg him on, telling him she wanted to hear him tell her to go faster, earlier she commented that "someone's excited" as he tried to get hard in his chastity tube. To me she was telling the truth when she said she wanted to reward him, that she thought he looked to good all femmes up etc. She seems to think that he's into the crossdressing and having sex as a woman. No telling what she's been led to believe. I think that there's the possibility that she is turned on by hurting and humiliating him, as you posit. But there's just as good a chance that she loves him, been led to believe he's into it, and into her having lovers, and is trying to help by encouraging him. But just as likely that she's also being blackmailed, and like Shaun is playing at being eager to keep from being punished more. So, three possibilities, I like the possibility that she loves him and either thinks he's either into and excited about everything, or knows better but has to act like she believes it to keep from more punishment to her or to both of them.
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Either way, it's a damn convoluted plot and I keep reading to find out how it's resolved. It's a mystery wrapped in another mystery wrapped in another.
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Damn, just read what I wrote and it doesn't make as much sense as I thought. I hope I don't confuse y'all as much as I did myself. But I have to get going and start supper to keep 'She Who Must be Obeyed' happy.
Suberik, Johnson
We can speculate where this stories is going, who Naughty is, where people stand in Naughty's organization, and what Naughty's ultimate goals are. We KNOW what is going on. Shaun(a) is being blackmailed, Emma is cuckolding her husband with his knowledge, that Emma has had sex with numerous mail colleagues, that she is, or is becoming a dommatrix, Shaun is 40 years old, Emma is the same or near same age, that they have school age children, that they are both college graduates. That they met in college. We can speculate that they have been married 16 to 18 years( college graduation 22 to 24 years old.) If we speculate that they had children before they were 30, their children are 11 to 14 years old. (Although I get the impression that the children are 8 to ten years old.) We know that there is some type of drug in the breakfast smoothes that Shaun(a) and Emma are drinking. Kayla suspects that the drug makes Michelle hornyier. We can speculate that it has the same effect on Shaun(a) and Emma, and or it will make Emma more fertile. Incongruity, Emma has had numerous unprotected sexual encounters with presumably numerous fertile men with out becoming pregnant. Dave her boss knows this. So why does he think that he will father a child with her and the others won't? Is he really that ignorant? If Shauna really wants to communicate with Emma, why doesn't he write notes to her? They can read the notes in places that Naughty doesn't have eyes.
For executives in their respective companies, neither Shaun(a) nor Emma (if she is in fact being blackmailed) seem to think at all critically.
God sake, this is my favourite story on literotica but it gets written at a snails pace.
Each chapter takes so long you forget what’s happening each time.
Come on, I don’t want it to end soon but I want to be able to read it!!
It's been 6 months since he released any thing and he said ( last communication) that 33 just needed editing. Think someone else needs to finish the story. Suberik do you or Johsu want to it take over?
Naughtyone88
You are being Naughty by not letting us know what is going on - Please!!!!!! An update Pleasssssssssssssse!!
this is one of the hottest stories I have ever read and I really hope you add to it
Loving this story. I have a theory about Emma's role in all this, and Nick's, and who Naughty is.
Would love to see how it pans out though, whether I'm right or not. And the stories are great. Hope the next chapter comes around soon.
Please, please, please! Continue with this totally hot story. If you leave it here, you are being naughtier than Naughty!!
I'm getting even more restless than Shauna in her chastity waiting for the next chapter to drop.
I am sure it is Rachel. I won't tell why because once you see it you can't unsee it.
But please update the story.
I yearn for (your next chapter) tragically. A. T. Tappman, Chaplain, U.S. Army
Naughty, sorry about my rant a year ago.
I have come to see Shaun actually likes some of the dirty things he is forced to do.
You have stretched this out for at least 32 chapters over 8 years. Please finish it.
Well, it's been what, 14 months since the last chapter. But the author did go for 15 or so months between chapters before once. So maybe there's still life in the story.
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I've been looking at this, up to now, as something revolving around Shawn. But I wonder if he's just a side act to the whole thing. Maybe it's Emma, his wife. (I hope I got the name right, it's been a long time since I read this.) What if she's the one that this thing revolves around. Say she was blackmailed first. Slowed down the sex with Shawn on instructions from Naughty. In the early chapter(s) Shawn says that work and kids etc kept their sex down to one, or was it two, times a month.
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Then also there's evidence that Shawn has or had a low libido. His whole problem started because, in spite of not making love to Emma for some time, he had to accesss porn to get worked up for it. But by his admission she is a sexy and beautiful woman. You'd think that any hit of a sex night would be enough.
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We also had hints that Emma wasn't into much more than the basics. No anal. Not sure if she would allow oral either, been a long time since I read any chapters.
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So Emma gets blackmailed. Forced sex, OR is seduced, and learns to LOVE sex. Yet possibly still loves Shawn. So she's enjoying sex at work. Then 'has' to get a boyfriend much as Shawn 'had' to get a boyfriend. The blackmailers/Naughty want Shawn on board, after all things would be easier to access Emma if hubby was on board.
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Remember Emmas Secretary - in the Party Shawn performed in, the Secretary's hubby made use of Shawn, mentioned that his wife was fucking all the guys that Emma was, or at least lots of other big decked guys. And yet the husband wasn't in the Big Dick club. So he got on board with the thing, was given some perks - using the fem-boys at the party, and possibly other perks, while his wife did the big guys.
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This could have been what 'they' wanted for Shawn. But remember that Shawn had already tried on Emma's panties, he was drawn to feminine underwear before all this happened to him. Maybe he left stains, or stretched them out, or didn't put them back properly. Or the house was already bugged to keep Emma in line.
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Or Emma figured it out and mentioned it to 'them'. So they set Shawn up. If she was only getting minimal sex from Shawn, and loving the wild gang bangs and other sex with boyfriend and co-workers, she might have felt resentment toward Shawn. Or Nick did. And Emma is involved with Jaques' wife, maybe she thought it would be ideal to have Shawn as a woman at home for romance and love etc, and 'real men' for fucking at work. Or the idea was sold to her. And she's learning about domination both with Jaques' wife, and with Shawn. It suits her.
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Anyway, that's. my take. Look to Emma to figure out what's going on.
It is a pity that you stopped writing this wonderful interesting story, which has many interesting plots and shows the psychological, sexual side of man. I really regret not finishing what happened to Shauna, Denise, Emma, Naughty, and who is Naughty?
Please, finish my video chat error.
Greetings from Warsaw, SissyBoy
Szkoda że przerwałeś pisanie tej wspaniałej interesującej opowieści, dającej wiele ciekawych wątków i ukazujących psychiczną, seksualną stroną człowieka. Bardzo żałuję że nie dokończyłeś co stało się Shauną, Denise, Emmą, Niegrzeczną, i kim jest Niegrzeczna?
Bardzo proszę abyś dokończył Mój błąd wideoczatu.
Pozdrawiam z Warszawy SissyBoy
I hope that you are ok and not a victim of COVID. I hope to read the conclusion of the story but most importantly you're doing well.
Well it's been 20 months since chapter 32. If covid didn't get you could you please give us a sign of life?
It seems the OP has either lost interest in finishing this or sadly expired? Maybe the story could be continued by one or more authors in individual paths, in their own styles as they would continue it if they had started it? So many plot lines have been started with no obvious conclusions so far. Lots of possible avenues going forward. Seems like it dhould be continued in some fashion.
Methinks someone else has to take over this story. Think covid got naughtyone88. If someone does take over leave a note here where to find you.
The FTDS 2-year waiting period expires on 4/13/23. Here's a request to NaughtyOne88 to allow someone else to take over.
I think that the last chapter was not written by the author. The writing style itself has changed, has become more straightforward and vulgar.
Actually Naughtyone88 is/was a good writer, however he/she created too many avenues forward and he got lost in the direction to go forward. Every chapter created a new branch. Plus I don't think he had an ending in mind, or if he did the original ending got lost in the many branches. So many possible Nauhtyones. Emma, her boss, Mike Brown, the president of Shaun/Shauna's company, the female board member, and Emma's yoga teacher. The story definitely got off track.
Sad to say but we are 30 days from the FTDS date. Is there interest in an invitational to write the next chapter? Due May 28th. Readers can signal what they like. This story needs an excellent ending, which is going to take several chapters.