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by Ickenboffer
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I just started to read the story but thought I'd pause to make a preliminary comment: within the first few lines the husband hits his wife hard enough to almost knock her out of her chair, then goes on to claim he isn't a wife beater? Need I go on?
Follow up: sorry, I couldn't make it past half way through page two. Totally ridiculous, over the top misogynistic brag fest. I guess some might like it; women haters and self proclaimed 'real men,' but as a story I really can't see anything there.
overestimated from the start but i think the wife infidelity only made it to divorce... nut the weekly office gang bang only made worse by the whoring.....for a quite stupid excuse-misunderstanding...
i would expect the husband in a living hell but then with no other way to evolve the story had to end somehow to a harem...its a way.. i liked the writing 5/5 for the size and creativity both in script and sex scenes. keep it up .
This is quite the achievement, 7 pages of boring, not just one or two but the whole 7 (luckily I had bugger all else to do at the time) pages, after each page I keep thinking the next will be better, but alas no not even close. I want my money back.
OK, then: no plot to speak of, no exploration of motivations, no emotional insight, no historical background, and a Main Character who, for completely unrevealed reasons, is a sex god who seems to have women at his beck and call willing to debase themselves for him. Even as a fantasy this is about as empty as it gets. 1*
I know its to have a fantasy about husband getting his own harem but just the set-up was not great. Comes out the gate swinging, literally, on his wife and then we learn she's been cheating with multiple guys while doing things with them she never did with him. Why would he want to stay married to a woman who cheated on him so much? Why would she want to stay married to him when she is tossing blowjobs around to every guy BUT him?
Stopped reading when you, the author, lied to us.
He’s not a wife beater but he slaps her hard enough to almost knock her out of her chair? That’s a wife beater, all he needed was an excuse.
So now, to finish your story, she gets up, grabs her phone and calls 9-11. Reports a case of domestic abuse. In a panic, her abusive husband yells at her to put the phone down, that she made him mad, that it won’t happen again, blah blah blah. And by the time he finishes talking, two cops are there with guns raised, hoping he’ll try anything to justify plugging him full of bullets.
He comply while the cops ask her if she wants to press charges while looking at the handprint on her face and snot and tears flowing.
He is charged with domestic violence, assault and battery, resisting arrest, and a whole host of criminal charges that his lawyer advices him to plead guilty to avoid trial and a worse sentence.
In the meantime, she sues him for divorce, alimony, years of abuse and control and she gets it all.
On his release, he’s broke, homeless, has a felony conviction and is living under a bridge with sex offenders and drug addicts begging for spare change while his wife marries her lover and lives her best life ever.
Easier to just divorce this wife beating idiot who contributes nothing but hollow ego.
WTF! It's one thing to catch her cheating then burn her world and get revenge on her co workers, or fix things, it's totally another to allow her to continue cheating while she lines up pussy for him. Nothing is clear about her affairs or a resolution. Husband catches slut cheating and doesn't do anything about it.
Read the first half page; then started skimming, but couldn’t even bother with that after halfway through the second page. Just struck me as misogynistic incel fantasy. Might be a market for it here with the anonymous
I'm surprised cucky boy Harddaysnight hasn't berated you yet for having a man controling his bitches instead of the orher way round. He's probably had to go to bed early with his glass of hot milk. At his age everything is difficult
Not very entertaining. It read like you found a shining object and rubbed it for 7 pages. I like drawing verse sex in a story, however you really beat it to death.
This is a very weak story and you need and finish th damned story. What revenge did Ashleys former bosses and company suffer
"With both girls up dancing, it gave me a moment to reflect on how lucky I was to have a wife that cheated on me."
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Every man's dream, a wife who becomes the office slut. Classy characters in a very realistic and wholesome scenario: what could go wrong? Maybe this story should have been submitted in the Fantasy category?
Makes no sense. He told her she has to listen and do or they get divorced. Why is she still going on Wednesday night? He just has to say, no more Wednesday's or divorce. A long winded story that that doesn't have much too it.
Lots of fantasy sex for sure. The story itself? The MC seemed amazingly tolerant of his wife having regular weekly sex with numerous people from work. His wife was sexually abused at work, and then essentially sexually abused and taken advantage of by her husband who applied leverage. The 19 year old girl they brought in and groomed to be a sex slave was despicable to my way of thinking. However, the story is in the author's universe and it's his/her story to share. I admit to skimming over the most of the sex scenes hoping for some substance or revelation in the story. 3 stars.
I think you had something here at the beginning of the story and even the first couple of times that Ashley brought another woman home, it sort of worked, but the story should have climaxed when Ashley quit her job and then they should have either split up or reconciled. Everything after that was just.... well it was boring to be honest.
A story that has a lot of sex in it isn't good unless each scene isn't essentially just a repeat of the last. It also needs to have rising tension - like pushing boundaries, but it seemed to me that all the boundaries were pushed from the outset, so everything felt flat.
You could probably remake this into a more traditional "cheating wife" story just by adding some more angst and introspection from the narrator and more interaction between him and his wife that aren't centered around her setting up girls for him. However, as a piece of just "erotic fiction" it just doesn't make it after a few pages.
I too wonder when the switch took place. Considering her cheating continued, his need for punishment and revenge never really happened. When the wife’s real story came out, she was doing the same as before, only for her husband as well.
In the beginning it seemed that his revenge was coming, one step at a time. If there was revenge on her employer I would have wanted to see the results.