All Comments on 'New Neighbour Pt. 17'

Wonderful... Thank you so much for the continuation of this truly wonderful story. I love it each chapter more and more

My denial lasting quite lon from last chapter is now turned to anticipation for the next chapter, which is promised to be here soon :-)

Once again this is outstanding.... It's building up nicely for the next chapter..... You are a master of the dark kinky arts.

After such a good first chapter, why make the rest so awful?

Lol maddog. That's the sort of constructive criticism that writers love.. thanks!

Amazing story, really one of the best on here!

This is a classic story. I haven't read anything like it on here before and the author is doing an immense job keeping the fans coming back for more. Outstanding work.

I like that you ended like this, teasing us for the next chapter. It’s nice not to have an ending of sorts but an anticipation to what will happen next. Can’t wait!

Very nice story. I am waiting with anticipation for the next chapter.

Please done keep us in denial for to long.😲

I'm guessing we are well into the vague part of "the next week or so..." at this stage? This story is the second thing I check after I wake up, the first being am I still alive.

Gee Fuzzi, perhaps you should get a life, this story isn't that great.

Thanks anonymous, for taking time out of your amazing life to criticise someone you don't know. Well done you!

Well, you would be in the minority on that so we'll agree to disagree. Have a blessed day.

I stand by the belief that this story is not good enough to rate just over breathing in someone's daily life and I dont think I am in the minority there. I admit saying get a life was not fair. Apologies. Yourcybersub you are defensive a lot and your responses to your readers can be sarcastic and mean. I am a reader. Not that great didnt mean I wasn't enjoying it and didnt think it was good. You do seem to be the exact opposite of your name and Tom. Off-putting.

I assume you are also referencing my response to maddog "After such a good first chapter, why make the rest so awful?" What you probably don't know is that people send me private messages, some of which are pretty horrible and sometimes it gets to me. However, you are right, I probably shouldn't be mean to people even if they always criticise via the cloak of anonymity and I apologise if you feel offended. You might want to consider that maybe fuzzi was possibly making a little joke...maybe? Anyway let's all agree to not make a storm out of a tea cup and get on with our lives. Stay safe

This is why I quit all social media a few years ago. You simply can't say anything without it being picked up wrong or taken out of context entirely. Nobody is claiming this is the greatest story ever told but for me it works and I commend the author for the time and work and passion that is put into each chapter. Even the ones I find challenging. I don't write or post anything but if I did and it was something as good as this I'd be happy to have my name over it. Maybe some day I will write one.

Could you say the same anonymous?

I have been and occassional admirer and also adetractor of this series. Just because a story is written very well does not mean the activities written about are beyond criticism. Also, a criticism that is serious, should not be blithly dismissed as with "if its not your kink, why criticise it". Also posting as anon is not shameful or cowardly. The username "Yourcybersub" is no less anonymous. My criticism of this is that she's torturing him. You cant consent to torture. Shes got him brainwashed, mentally programmed to the point where any consent he gives is pointless. The extreme CBT, the overnight khalis teet treatment? Thats pure sadism. Its not BDSM, nor is her continul cranking of the intensity and suffering, while knowing when to calm his panic just enough to keep him sane the least bit ethical. Shes creating a slave who will endure anything, litrerally anything, to please her. I dont think hes once said no to her or set any limit, or invoked any stopping of anything for his own well being. Just because he consented at first doesnt mean he consent to anything at all forever after. Care for the subs wellbeing is a cornerstone of bdsm, as are checkins, negotiations, aftercare, knowin when to ease off, and knowing when harm may be inflicted and knowing what not to do is absolutely required of the dom. Otherwise you have abuse, not safe, sane, and consensual bdsm. This is an extreme comparison, but what if i had a kidnapping fetish and found a sub with a similar kink. If i locked that person in my basement, then proceeded to say all the right things and push all the right buttons to make the sub think that they liked being a captive in my basement, if i did this for months or even years but was skilled enough to keep the sub giving coerced consent or affirmation, does that make it ok? Toture and mind control negate consent, and are almost criminal in nature. So when people crow "best story ever", i kind of really question their morals. And the people you laugh off any moral objectios to this series as ""Its just erotic fiction relax" are enablers who normalizing torture. Thats the problem i have with serial killer films or torture porn films like "Hostel", they normal or glorify serial killers and gruesome torture. Just because ma'am is a skilled seductress and is a brilliant phychological manipulator, that does not make the actions she takes OK.

Despite all that is said here, it’s a great story. It certainly pushes all my buttons. One must realise it’s fantasy written in a way that makes it believable. That’s why it’s called fiction.

Note that Tom has power of consent where he can walk out anytime between the intense sessions if he doesn’t like what’s happening to him. If it doesn’t float your boat for whatever reason, find something else to read,

Thanks yourcybersub for a great read.