All Comments on 'No Ordinary Proposal Ch. 01'
by Member389
- 13 Comments
This is the first Member 389 story I have read. I enjoyed this immensely. The sexual tension is palpable. A dream come true. 5 Stars.
Out of the gates at a full gallop. Nicely sketched & fleshed-out backdrop for what’s to come. Most impressed and eager for the next installment. That this is in the romance category makes for interesting speculation.
Great beginning! Can’t wait to read what comes next. I’ve read many of your stories and enjoy them immensely
The hottest story I've read on here - that didn't include a fuck. Awesome!
OUTSTANDING!!! Not surprising coming from you though. I've read all your stuff and so far this is right near the top. Haven't heard (OK, read) from you for a while, I just thought you took a sabbatical or got hooked on something shinny. I have to say, if you aren't writing professionally you should be, you are that good. Maybe not erotica; sadly enough, it doesn't pay as well as mainstream. In the meantime, I would like to say thank you for sharing. Like everyone else I look forward to the next chapter... and next...
"I can deduce by that look on your face that you've come to the correct conclusion. Yes, she will be nude for these photos. I said to her that I knew you would be discreet. I hope I was right on that count."
I think you know better than to put this into romance. Fingering and blowjobs are a form of sex. A married woman doing this with someone not her husband is committing infidelity, even if her husband approves. Sorry, not Romance in my book. Having said this, you are such a great author that I'll give you one more chance. I want to see if Scott is dying and hoping his best friend and wife are compatible after he's gone.
He is sick and he wants Bobby to take care of Jo. The cough and the permission make me think this. I could be wrong, but he sees her as her husband sees her. Not just sexy, but a woman with depth. I was screaming in laughter (Run Bobby Run) lol omg I would have run out the door screaming.
Indeed wrong category. This is LW and you know it. But you also know most people hate this type of story so you hide it in romance.
"But you also know most people hate this type of story so you hide it in romance."
I assure you didn't hide it anywhere I chose the category based on how I perceived it fit those listed.