All Comments on 'Owning My Favorite Cam Girl Ch. 02'
by SaveFerrisBueller
- 6 Comments
As a female reader, I very much enjoyed the two chapters you’ve posted. Please keep them coming!!
This is a super hot and well written story. You built characters who are multi dimensional and scenes which are believable. I really appreciate how Chris/David puts Sarah/Teresa’s sexual needs first while seeing to his own fantasies. I like how feisty she is and how he pushes her to explore her own sexualIty. After you wrote after chapter 1 that you had already submitted chapter 2, I was checking for updates everyday. Can’t wait for chapter 3 and more.
Between his willingness to pick up any diseases she has, and her idiocy in protecting herself from exposure by publicly exposing herself at his demand, this plot is terribly broken. Get an editor or stick to single page vignettes and flash stories.
This is a fantasy story. Why be so angry? Have you read some of the crap on this site? Why don’t you make comments on those?