All Comments on 'Parking Leads to Dogging'
by ImACuck
- 18 Comments
was really good the way you treated the whole situation... was very visual for me thanks :)
And when the doors of the minivan opened, ILMAO. That was comical. the sex was hot. I hope there is more.
Just one comment of constructive criticism, dialogue usually makes a story seem more real--you didn't use much, if any. Still, I think this is well written; you had a story to tell, and you did it very well. 4 stars from me.
Nice quick story. The circumstances would be hard to repeat- hard to find campsites with hot and cold running studs, but there you go- where there's a will there'll be a way. Plus there's a phone number, but that's not very spontaneous
This is absolutely the best story I've read in a very long time.
Such an adventure I have a fantasy when I think about the theme of a hot wife
Writing dialog is HARD. You did darn good without it. Although the gay part is not for me, the rest of it was really good. Thanks.
I really enjoyed this story and the accidental nature of the bi encounter which was a lovely fantasy. Well done!
Great story so sexy hard me stroking all the way to the end but had to stop to prevent myself going over the edge to soon. Hope there will be a follow up part 2 of the return journey home.