All Comments on 'Passing Grade'
by vcard21
- 10 Comments
Add that to the whole complex your/you're thing, and you have a writer who knows as little about English as he does about Math.
Terrible story.
I won't give this a "1" because I guess I didn't dislike it so much I couldn't finish
But - the story line is worn out - sex in exchange for a passing grade is not in the least bit original. There were no twists in the plot - very straightforward.
You also followed the convention that no matter (actually, it helps) if the rape victim is a virgin - she will have multiple orgasms.
Something different - the evil Mr Wilks discovers that Tor loves anal - particularly with a strap-on - or maybe Tor slams a desk drawer closed on Mr Wilks' balls, and then does him anally with the pointer Mr Wilks uses at the blackboard
I'm so tired of people who read these stories then try to pretend they did so to comment about the writers use of English.
Next thing they'll be trying to convince us they read Playboy for the articles.
Great story, it got me boned, that's why I read erotic stories. Keep up the good work.
Excellent story. You should think about writing more; perhaps a sequel?
This website is called Literotica....NOT Pulitzer Prize....
Enought with the critique on punctuation, slight spelling mistakes etc..
Enjoy the stories for what they were meant to be...and NOT for making yourself feel superior to the "writer's" writing skills.
Give your head a shake folks!!!!
I liked it. It may be trite to others but if this is your story/fantasy don't be afraid to express it. Hope to see more.
This was a great story and people commenting on grammar and punctuation is ridiculous. The writers on here do not have an editor so they deserve a break. This is a fantasy site and I enjoyed this fantasy. Do not change a thing and I dont think you should search for a new twist to please that previous comment. It is your story write it as you wish. Thank you for sharing