All Comments on 'Power... Girl?'
by winna820
- 15 Comments
Very very good one! You struck a good balance between telling the story and making the reader imagine some of it for themselves here and there. I also liked the whole extra bit of dominance and overall story with the superpowered girl.
There were some spelling and grammatical errors, but nothing that can't (at least in my book) be overlooked in a story as good as this one.
5/5 easy, and I do hope that even if you decide not to continue this particular story (though I'd be thrilled if you did, obviously) - that you continue to write and share your stories with us :)
Amazing first offering. You painted a great picture and the characterization sets up well for a second part if that's what you plan to do. Regardless, would love to see more from you. Keep it up!
I can't reconcile power girl and the concept of having "basically no breasts" in my mind, it does not compute!
Incredibly good! I love it and want more of this,,, please write more so I can imagine being her bitch :P
...and one more thing - wouldn't it be interesting if her cum transforms/adjusts him to her needs i.e. cock stops to work/gets smaller or turns into a pussy ;)
Power Girl should have large breast. That's how the famous DC heroine looks like. I was totally turned off by this story the moment I read she didn't have breast.
I couldn't read this, but I felt it necessary to comment. (I feel really bad about that, but I feel the need to say a few things.)
What image could've possibly inspired this? Powergirl is invariably drawn with breasts. In fact, she is generally considered to have the largest breasts in the DC universe (if not all of comics). My second point of outrage is the fact that fact that you wrote a superheroine raping a man. A woman would've been terrible, but this is unspeakable!
Please, never write like this again. (I edited that sentence by adding the words "like this," as I felt that my first reaction was not helpful.) I can only fathom that you are unfamiliar with comics, but are into crossdressers. Whatever your sexual orientation, fantasies, and fetishes are; you should create your own characters. We wouldn't want you to treat a villianess this way.
Please, please, please ignore the idiot who made the following comment:
" I couldn't read this, but I felt it necessary to comment. (I feel really bad about that, but I feel the need to say a few things.)
What image could've possibly inspired this? Powergirl is invariably drawn with breasts. In fact, she is generally considered to have the largest breasts in the DC universe (if not all of comics). My second point of outrage is the fact that fact that you wrote a superheroine raping a man. A woman would've been terrible, but this is unspeakable!
Please, never write like this again. (I edited that sentence by adding the words "like this," as I felt that my first reaction was not helpful.) I can only fathom that you are unfamiliar with comics, but are into crossdressers. Whatever your sexual orientation, fantasies, and fetishes are; you should create your own characters. We wouldn't want you to treat a villianess this way. "
Honestly, the story was really good and i would love to see more of it. Please continue writing in whatever style or genre that appeals to you. I'm getting tired of people who don't like a particular story so instead of reading something else, they have to impose their views on the writer. seriously fuck off.
Thank you for sharing this beautiful story! I absolutely loved it!