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by KemMyst
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was an excellent ending even with the open with the lose ends i hope you do decide to make a sequel i really do enjoy Em and Lyssa story thank you for posting it
please continue cause you know we so need to see michael get his assed kicked, calvin to find a new mate in stephanie, jo an nathan to get hitched so to speak, an lyssa an em to have pups, an the list goes on an on, im sure im not alone in this. so keep up that brilliant and fantastical imagination of yours. look forward to reading more from you in the not to distant future.
It saddens me that this story must come to an end. But maybe you are right and it's time for Lisa and Emmett to fall into the background. Maybe they should have some pups, or possibly start to slowly explore Lisa's abilities. But only as background to another storyline. You have left several possibilities including the children of Ariel and Randall. It's not only Johann who has an interesting future ahead of her. The other children are also experiencing alittle fun themselves.
It has been a joy to follow first Animal Lover and now Pursuit of Happiness. To watch you grow as an author, to become more confidant in your writing, it really has been an honor to watch you grow and I honestly hope to continue watching you grow as an author. No matter if you chose to follow this storyline or start a totally different story, know that I plan to be here waiting.
So good luck with whatever to chose to write about and have the knowledge that I'm not your only fan.
hell yeah we want! lol maybe closing the chapter on emmett and lyssa, and continuing with jo and nathan. very interested in michael getting his cumuppance! bastard cant possibly get away with what hes done, proof or not!
please... i need more... story is too good to end there. i cant wait until the next installment in this story
you had a perfect ending to this story and a very nice opening for a sequel. thinking you can get away with leaving things as they are would be just deluding yourself ;-)
we'll be expecting that sequel sometime soon
But please put me down for wanting you to continue it. I'd love to see Emmet and Lyssa as parents, the future for the newly mating pairs, and Michael get his comeuppance. You've created too good a universe to let it go yet.
I really like this story and i love the the way you ended it. Thank you for sharing. Mechmanas
Not only are there many good spin-offs I hope to read. I also NEED Micheal to get what is coming to him. The females in your story are so restricted by the patriarchal society that it would be nice to see Jo bring about more enlightened pack laws. The idea of men getting away with rape, kidnapping and attempted murder because the victims are women unless a male accompice confesses is f-ed up and not in an erotic way.
Please continue with spin-off series. You have well rounded characters and great talent.
I have enjoyed this story since the beginning and I would absolutely love to read another addition!!
Thank you for giving happiness and the beginning options to many new options to continue.
Can't wait for the next set of this series! :) it's a good story and I love the charecters! Will be looking for your next story!
please continue, you have set up calvin and stephanie, nat and jo, erich and some others, i for one wish to see how they all make out
Bravo, bravo, take a bow. Excellent story. Good ending. Job well done.
There has been no reprisal for the kidnapping and now Calvin knows that his son was involved. I thought you were setting the scene for more action. If this is the end, you definitely need to write a follow-up!
Please, please, please continue it! Yes it works as an ending (sort of lol) but it feels more of a peek at what comes next. I still dn't like Thomas though:)
I've become invested in your characters. I can't wait to see Michael get his comeuppance and if Stephanie can help Calvin deal with his sons failed plan and help heal his grief. Will Jo and Nathan's courtship progress or will it be Erich and Madeline (or both)? And will (hopefully) Lyssa and Emmett have the pups they both so want? Looking forward to your next installment already.
it cant be finished there are so many more possibilities with all the characters
You called this the Pursuit of Happiness and yet none have really found it yet, how can you stop it there?
Things are still up in the air about the kidnapping, I would have thought that the Alpha would have asked Cal to talk to their prisoner and get some answers but instead they ask him to go back to the party! They had the perfect person to get the answers and because he is no longer Alpha dismissed him.
Not to mention all the other unanswered questions this installment left, so ofcourse you have to continue. I do hope that the next installment you give us you WILL have taken all the comments about separating the pov and locations that we have all begged for for so long on board. Please continue soon.
PLEASE FINISH IT. WE WOULD REALLY LOVE TO READ THE ENDING RESULT. THANKS..
We want you to continue this series or at least the story. Please!
I really enjoyed this series but, I so feel like it was just soo much to still be revealed. I understand that you'll be starting some if we want. I'm saying yes we would like you to continue and maybe tie up some things. There are so many unanswered questions but, thanks for giving us this great story and hopefully more to come.
No pups, no ending to the kidnapping, no Micheal's head on a silver plater, no matings.
Of course another series of their story will suffice. XD
of course we want more! you just can't it let it end there... more! more! more! :)
this is a story with so many lines and ways to keep it going forever, and i would happily read them forever.. keep on the good writing.
The next installment should have Calvin challenge Michael so he can take up his leadership again with Stephanie at his side. That way Michael will not be ammune to punishment for the kidnapping and attack on Lyssa. Lyssa could also threaten Michael with her ability and scare the crap out of him and get a confession.
Will you consider writing an epilogue for POH? I would love to see what happens next. Lyssa said she might not have a daughter. Emm expressed concern earlier about her not getting pregnant. Will she be able to have kids?
If you don't I'll be seriously pissed. There are so many things left unresolved.
Lyssa & Emmett's children, if any (please yes!)... Nathan & Jo... Calvin & Stephanie... Erich & Madeline... what Wyeth do about Michael... the list goes on. I *need* to find out what happens next, please don't leave all this unresolved!
...would just like to see calvin happy after loosing his mate and michael sorted out.
well thats my two penneth worth.
thanks for both series' so far. ;0)
This is one of my favorite series and I can't wait for the next story. You have left me with so many questions, that it is not funny. I eagerly await your next story, keep up the good work.
You have definitely gotta keep writing more!!!
I absolutely love it!!!
Please continue, I love your stories and I hope Em and Lyssa get to have a pup or two of their own. They been through so much and want pups so bad it seems cruel that they might not get any.
Yes oh yes! Please do write more!?! Your writing's are the only ones on this website that I actually like, please do write more, I will be so sad if you don't... Keep it up and I might just have to get you published.
It says Em is the same size, as skilled and as strong as Thomas who's an omega but Em is bigger then the average wolf and also stronger. It also says that the Alpha (who reminds me of a dictator who pretends to be nice) is just alittle bit bigger then Em and they are both as good at fighting an equally strong... But Ariel beat Thomas easily even tough Em had trouble and only won because he wanted it more... So how come noone challenges the Alpha? Is it because they're scared of Ariel?
a big YES YES YES for continuation!! More stories please!! :-D
"Happy, Happy! Joy, Joy!"
Not that Stimpy (or Ren, for that matter) holds a candle to these wolves, but the quote so applies.
Am curious to read further and find out what happens with Michael - he needs to be taken down, big time, and replaced by a more worthy Alpha. Looking forward to see how that happens.
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Huh, I thought the key to Lyssa’s collar (from being held captive) was a plot drop as evidence against the douche New Alpha Ross. Looks like the elder Ross is getting ready to hook up again.
It’s all definitely misogynistic and Victorian ethics wise.
Tess (uk)