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All Comments on 'Pushing Boundaries Ch. 09'

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donaldedonaldealmost 13 years ago
excellent chapter

i love this on going saga it has been an epic tale from the first chapter of To Love A Were and it has only gotten better i look forward to future installments of this terrific story thank you for posting it

MizTMizTalmost 13 years ago
Wonderful Journey

From the time Eian found the child Fiona thru the adventures w/Lord Culzean her grandfather and Draven her uncle and Alaron the Purebred who bit Fiona to the life of Eian and Fiona daughter, this has been a wonderful journey to be a part of.

I thank you for sharing this journey and allowing me to be a part of it. I look forward to seeing where that wonderful imagination takes me next. Wherever that is I plan to be a part of it. Again thanks for sharing!

LadySilverNovaLadySilverNovaalmost 13 years ago
Aw..

Mike wanting to bring Kendall into his own family was genuinely sweet.

So glad Marine got a chance to be a hero as well.

Excellent ch...plz don't make us wait too long for the next one.

mikothebabymikothebabyalmost 13 years ago
tears in my eyes

reading this. Please do not stop - we all want more, more, more pretty please with sugar on top and whipped cream and a bir juicy strawberry?

allimbaallimbaalmost 13 years ago
thank you!

awesome!

foxy_lady76foxy_lady76almost 13 years ago
Need More!!

Please continue on writing this series..it's too good to end it now. I need to know what happens with Keona and Alex will they finally mate. Will Marine parents especially Aaron allow her to mate with Riley? What happens with Kendall will he be adopted by Mike. please continue on I will be waiting for your next story.

SunshineChica73SunshineChica73almost 13 years ago

As you can see stopping here would totally disappoint your fans :( PLEASE...PLEASE...PLEASE don't stop now! We're not ready to let them go.

shortydeeshortydeealmost 13 years ago
THANK YOU!!!!!!

I have missed reading your work of art. I hope that you will be adding more soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Phew I need a drink after that

What a roller coaster ride!!!! I had so many emotions evoked by your story I thought I was going to need couseling. Thank you for your awesome work.

smurfmatesmurfmatealmost 13 years ago
Oh My!!

Wait, what about the implant the female scientist talked about? Is she pregnate with some sort of hybrid? Inquiring minds want to know..... What an unbelievable rollcoaster ride.

katgoddess1katgoddess1almost 13 years ago
Rough story

At first, I thought you were going to have these characters, sentimental favorites, used as breeding stock. I was quite upset with that idea. Happily, you had something other in mind. I would like to know how they deal with the aftermath of this experience, and what happens to the rescued prisoners. And Riley has to find a way to atone for his actions if he wants to be accepted by Marine's family, mate or not. Your writing is awesome.

HellsSpawnHellsSpawnalmost 13 years ago
Awesome sauce... In an epic jar

That was amazing. Very intense and thrilling. Defiantly something I want more of, even if it means reading everything hundreds of times over.

GerrivGerrivalmost 13 years ago
Wow!

Love the ending ... Also love how you've left the story open for more to happen! Great story!

dliterdliterover 12 years ago
Fantastic

Great story, but please don't let anything else like what they just went through come up again! Let Hedva be a good person after all of this and remove the cell she still has so there is no more danger to the kids by anyone! Lots of things they could do if future stories are written without going through all of this again, just in a different time and place.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Need more will you be writing a new story?

You are a fantastic writer I love your characters especially Keona and Alex. Please create another story I want to see the other hybrid children meeting their mates and they one with mates tackling marriage and children lol. Alaron is hilarious can you do something interesting for him eg twins in the horizon I would love to see him become a pride filled father teaching his sons to become hearth robs and breaking girls hearts. I am interested to know the powers of the other hybrid children and the new pure blood Gabriel. Please dont keep us waiting too long, I need my regular fix of your stories.

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOabout 12 years ago
True

love is worth fighting for. Indeed you always get back what you do to others, always! Looking forward to more intense series from you soon. Hevda will come clean, or Keona will sense the implant and cause it to fail-for the hybrid race sake. Connor and Helene will cease to corrupt Any race now. Hatred is such a volatile and draining emotion.

cittrancittranabout 12 years ago
phew.

For a second, I thought that this chapter wasn't the last one -- there's nothing worse than reading through an entire series and then realizing that you can't read the final chapter because it's not there.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
wow

great story more please you've a real talent

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Great storyline

Please continue......

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Wow

Great story! I want more marine and riley! :)

peachesgirlpeachesgirlover 11 years ago
Great endings

I have read all you stories now, and I see how you tied them all in. Great job. I would love to read more about the young ones, and how they have managed to build their lives together.

Heres hoping you get back to writing in the near future.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Brilliant!!

Loved it! What more can I say. Please please please continue writing. I'm addicted and lovin it! I want to share these stories with everyone and at the same time want to keep it for myself. Bloody well done

OmniferisOmniferisover 11 years ago
loved the collection

i love the collection, but you left the ending in a cliffhanger. what happens after, the other stories ended like months or so after a big battle

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Loved them all:)

Loved the story. I would love for you to tell more of the children´s stories. Plus, you left a bit of a cliffhanger with the scientist carrying one of the 'experiments.´

~AliClaire

rebel697rebel697over 10 years ago
OMG

I have NEVER cried at the ending of a story!!! I was so freaked out thinking Keona and Alex were going to die together that I completely forgot about Marine and her ability. Bravo...VERY WELL DONE

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Helene

What about her?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
...

...so what happened between Riley and Marine afterwards?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
The End

Seriously, this can't be the end, can it?

HEyLoliaHeY22HEyLoliaHeY22about 9 years ago
Well...

Im kinda pissed off that i read this whole series just for it to end like this! Amazing series, but there has to be more, its like you just got sick of writing this story & gave up on it with that ending. There's so many things left unexplained, lets tie up some loose ends!!!! Great story, but a finished product would make it spectacular :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Love this story

i love this story but its not the end is it

Whats next i really wanted to know but Now u are starting with another story (summoning the vamp) and as all other one i missed ettien too so

Just bring it on

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