by shimm2
Truly an amazing story which could easily fit in with life as we know it in 2021.
This is a very well written story and one that showed great debate between them and thinking of all the remifications. Their sibling love became love as a couple and they bonded fully realizing the issues that would happen now and later. I hope you write another chapter or two as this happens in life and many brother-sisters have enjoyed a loving life, raised children and paid special attention because of who they are to each other and how it changed their family; not just the 2 of them. Yes, more please.
Very well written... It draws you in and you feel as if you're there yourself...Thank you...
The prose is evocative and electrifying. This is some of the best balance of narration and description I've read on here. A+
Very well done! You made us a part of both their pleasure and their angst! Great story!
Loved the story! Though I wouldn’t feel right not point out that you can get pregnancy via bath water. The more you know!
When isolated our base desires surface, the instinct to propagate the species. Fun to read, got a big laugh at the bath water, how many siblings shared bath water? :D
You probably wrote a little too much on the pros and cons of pregnancy in incest and I've never heard about the 25% rule. Still a great story. 5*
I don't think it's possible to get pregnant by taking a bath after a man wanked in the shower. The Virgin Birth is strictly mythological.
If shower sperm could do it, then there'd be a case of it by now.
Hot story, her OCD aside. But it was sad that she was thoughtless enough to gamble with a baby's wellbeing. It shows what kind of mother she'd make, and that's a self-centered one.
4 stars