by pujalata980
The end was beautiful. The lovers didn't get separated. I really like the way you write, depicting the emotions of the characters along with the graphic scenes. Thank you
Very well scripted and described. It gave the feeling of a love story more than that of an erotica
An erotic as well as romantic story which speaks a lot in just two episodes. Author please write a story with similar setting, desi girl with videshi woman that is.