by PaulaApril
Now that was absolutely and in all respects the perfect erotic short story. I - and I'm sure every other male reader - would love to have my home broken into by miss Grace. Wonderful.
Again, your narrator was beautifully drawn and utterly believble. The cock was mostly just a cock, but none the worse for that. I did wonder whether he would seize her when the catsuit was round her ankles - a tight fitting catsuit can be quite awkward to get off - but the story is perfect as it is.
The second of your stories I have read. Again, it was sexy and wickedly enjoyable. Your characters are delightful fun to spend time with and your plots are plausibly intriguing. I will read more. Keep up the excellent work.
Ditto second story. Again loved it. No real need for character development in fact better spares. This just bounces along with a driven desire to keep reading.
It was even better at the second reading, probably because I've read your delightful, expanded story about her further adventures. You are an extremely talented writer. I am devouring more of your work happily. Consider me a devoted fan.
As an ‘Erotic Couplings’ story, it fulfilled its promise amazingly well. It does, however, beg a level of expansion. Extremely well written, it’s small wonder that it creates a want in the reader.