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Revenge of the Nerd: Total Control

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"You really perfected it to get revenge on me?" she asked.

"Yep," he nodded, "and to prove I could do it."

"Well," she said. "I'm impressed."

"And now you will be my three-hole fuck slut," he said, before adding, "although I imagine that is how you got to this position."

This pissed her off. Sure, she had fucked some significant men and a couple women to get here, but she was also a very intelligent woman who deserved to be where she was. "Says the unemployed nerd."

He sighed, "Do you eat cunt?"

"God, no," Sarah answered, although she had on occasion on her journey to the top or to close a deal if need be.

"You love eating cunt, you crave cunt," Brandon gave Sarah her first of many 'forever' messages.

Sarah instantly looked down at her secretary. Her secretary had munched on her box many times, but she had never returned the favour.

"Karen go sit on her desk and spread your legs for your new pet," Brandon instructed.

"What?" Sarah asked, even as her mouth watered.

"Sarah, you are a submissive to every person in the world. You will suck cock, eat pussy and fuck any person who orders you to," Brandon listed, getting ready to really put the bitch in place.

"Please, no," Sarah begged.

"You only want to serve. You love cock in your mouth, cock in your cunt, cock in your ass and a pussy rubbing all over your face. You crave cum, guy cum, girl cum, you don't care. You just must have it," Brandon continued.

"You bastard," Sarah snapped, furious, even as she looked at her secretary, who was now in front of her with her legs spread and her own mouth salivating.

"You will suck, fuck or eat someone new every day," Brandon continued, as he walked towards her.

"Get eating my pussy, you dumb whore," Karen ordered.

"You're fucking sick," Sarah yelled, so angry, even as she bent down and began to lick the pussy of her secretary.

"You will offer yourself to at least one relative," Brandon added, really enjoying the power, as he moved behind her, tugged her panties aside and slid his cock in her cunt.

"God, no," Sarah whined, even as the pleasure from the loser's cock in her pussy hit her intensely.

"You will only come when someone calls you 'a bimbo cum bucket'" Brandon added, as his own balls boiled quickly... having not come yet today.

"I'm going to get you for this," Sarah continued being defiant, even though her mind and body were completely at his whim.

"You will only wash your face with cum," Brandon continued, able to add suggestions all day.

"Keep licking, slut," Karen ordered, her own orgasm rising and liking the idea of finally having power over her bitchy boss.

"You little bitch," Sarah glared, even as she licked the pussy in front of her.

"And Sarah, you can never give anyone else an order... ever. You are the lowest slut in the office and in the world," Brandon added. "Your only purpose is to get others off with your three bimbo holes."

"Fucking asshole," Sarah snapped, rage coursing through her.

Brandon agreed, pulling out and slamming his cock roughly into the bitch's asshole, "That I am, literally and figuratively."

"You bastard!" she screamed, as her asshole was ripped apart... a searing pain coursing through her.

"You told me to fuck your asshole," he responded, enjoying the power he had over the bitch who fired him.

"Please pull out," Sarah begged, the pain intense. She had been ass fucked many times, but never without excessive lube and usually a lot of wine.

"You love it in the ass, it makes you feel like the complete whore you are," Brandon reminded her. "Big dicks in your ass make your cunt leak and make you want to come."

Instantly, even as the pain lingered, her pussy burned and she began to enjoy the anal pilfering. Yet, she threatened, furious at what he was doing to her, "I'm going to get you for this."

"And now you will go to the homeless shelter tonight and fuck at least one guy," Brandon added, his balls about to burst.

"Fuck you," Sarah glared.

"And every weekend, you will go to an old folks home and offer a resident, male and female, your services, always doing someone new each time," Brandon said as he reamed her asshole... his load close to erupting.

As Sarah licked the delicious pussy of her secretary and got her ass reamed, her cunt burned and all she could think about was the orgasm that was so close to hitting her, but wouldn't come.

"Here comes your first load, cum slut," Brandon said, as he grunted and deposited a day's worth of cum up the bitch's rectum.

The load filling Sarah's ass sent shockwaves directly to her cunt and yet the orgasm didn't happen.

Brandon watched with his cock still buried in the bitch's ass, as Karen grabbed her boss's head and began to roughly grind on her face.

Karen ordered, "Lick my cunt, you fucking bimbo bitch."

Sarah licked, even as her orgasm was so fucking close it was all she could think about, which made her also fume at both her predicament and the name calling.

Karen enjoyed roughly using the bitch's face... revenge for all the years of being treated like a servant.

Brandon said, "Time to fuck that cunt of yours now... something I've wanted to do forever."

Sarah glared back at him, knowing she was defeated and yet too proud to not be defiant. She snapped, "It's probably the only way you get action."

Brandon shrugged, as he pulled out of her ass and moved to her cunt, "It sure as hell hasn't hurt."

"You're such a fucking loser," Sarah snapped, not going to let him bully her even if she couldn't control her body.

"You desperately want me," Brandon said. "Every time you have a cock in one of your three gaping fuck holes you will only fantasize about me."

"That is disgusting," Sarah said, repulsed, even as she glanced down at his cock and instantly wanted it.

Brando shrugged, "I think maybe you could use a nice baby in that body of yours."

"What? God, no," Sarah said, this repulsing her more than taking it up the ass.

"You want a baby," Brandon added. "You will take every load for the next year in that cunt of yours or until you're pregnant."

"No, no, no, no, no," Sarah pleaded, just as Brandon slammed his cock in her cunt.

"And you will stop using birth control of all types," Brandon added, as he began fucking her hard.

"Please, nooooo," Sarah whined, even as the loser's cock felt so good inside her.

"Oh yes, today you won't leave this room until you have taken ten loads in your cunt," Brandon added, his balls boiling rejuvenating as his revenge plan finally came to fruition.

"You sick fucking bastard," Sarah roared, again unable to control her anger.

"You will get your nipples pierced and a tattoo on your ass that says, 'Cum deposit,'" Brandon added, beginning to run out of new lifelong conditioning.

"And you also will drink a cup of pee every day," Karen added, as she suddenly urinated all over Sarah's stunned face.

"You bitch," Sarah gasped, as a yellow stream sprayed into her mouth and then on her face.

"Good one," Brandon smiled.

"I hate you fuckers," Sarah said, tears streaming down her eyes at her complete humiliation, even as the pleasure continued to drive her nuts... the orgasm that wouldn't erupt only adding to the frustration.

"And yet you love my cock, don't you?" Brandon smiled, continuing to slam into the bitch.

Frustratingly, the answer was yes for the horny as hell bitch.

"Speak the truth," Brandon ordered.

"Yes, dammit," Sarah admitted, before adding, as she moved her hand to her cunt to rub herself, desperate to get off, "because you made me."

"You want to come?" Brandon asked, as Karen got off the table.

"Yes," Sarah whined, unable to think of anything else other than coming.

"Tell me what the words are," Brandon ordered.

Sarah couldn't remember them. She knew they were degrading. She knew bimbo was part of it, but couldn't remember the rest.

Karen said, "You're a bimbo cum..."

Sarah remembered and so desperate to cum, the nerd's cock feeling so good in her cunt, didn't even hesitate, as she declared, "I'm a bimbo cum bucket." To her frustration that didn't make the damn burst. She repeated, "I'm a bimbo cum bucket."

Brandon explained, knowing his second load was close, "You can only come when someone else uses the magic phrase."

Karen really enjoying the power over the bitch said, "You're a bimbo cum bitch."

Sarah could feel an extra rush of pleasure that almost erupted with the magic phrase, but was denied by the final last word. "Nooooooo," she whined, her entire body at the whim of these two monsters.

Karen continued, "You're a bimbo cum buckaroo."

"Please," Sarah begged, as she began bouncing back on the nerd's cock, while rubbing herself frantically doing anything she could to come.

"You're a bimbo cum bucket," Brandon declared, as he shot his second load deep in the bitch's cunt.

"Yesssssss," Sarah screamed, as the most intense orgasm in her life ripped through her. Then she felt the bastard shoot his load inside her unprotected womb.

"You wanted to come," Brandon reminded her, as he kept spewing his seed in her.

"You made me," Sarah whined, even as the pleasure overwhelmed her.

Karen added, even as the first orgasm was still coursing through the bitch, she repeated, "Such a nasty slut. You're a bimbo cum bucket."

A second orgasm in a row, something she had never had before, sent shockwaves through Sarah as she screamed, "Holy fuck."

Brandon pulled out, and went to his phone. He texted the three male daytime janitors that they could come up now.

Sarah just laid bent over her desk, coated in piss, filled with cum, as the double orgasm seemed to never end.

Karen asked, "Now what?"

"You're coming home with me," Brandon said. "Be a good slut and I may give you the antidote."

"I'll do anything for you," Karen said, dropping to her knees and taking the cock that had just plowed both the bitch's holes in her mouth.

"Good to know," he nodded, just as there was a knock at the door. Obviously, the janitors were close. "Come in."

Sarah gasped, "No," just as she saw the door open and the janitors walk in.

"Go triple team the slut," Brandon said, as he pulled out of Karen's mouth and moved to a comfortable couch. Karen crawled back to him and resumed sucking as Sarah's eyes went wide.

"Please, Brandon, I'll do anything too," Sarah begged, even as the disgusting janitors of different races moved to her.

"Oh, yes you will," Brandon said. "Plus, you still need nine more loads in your cunt before you can leave your office."

"You can't be serious?" Sarah asked, even though she knew he was.

Soon she was on the floor with a Mexican cock in her cunt, a black cock in her mouth and an Asian cock in her ass, she couldn't tell if he was Japanese or Chinese.

Brandon enjoyed the lengthy blow job thinking that Karen would be perfect as a fuck toy, a family slave and also a girlfriend.

As he watched, he typed on his phone the speech she would read to the board where she was appointing Brandon as the new Vice-President of the company... he couldn't get rid of her yet... not until he had established himself as a worthy replacement.

If that failed, he could easily spray the entire boardroom and make the majority of the male board members faggots... he hated them all but Joe.

Either way, he was going to come out on top... literally.

THE END

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AnonymousAnonymous4 days ago

Some times confusing and a little over done, but still a good mind control fantasy.

AnonymousAnonymous17 days ago

Though I enjoyed the story it needed more variation. For instance I understand this is a smut site but there's no reason all the conditions were sexual. Also a glimpse into those broken by the drugs life of fearing to go outside. Consider how often people tell you to do things.. like 'go fuck yourself '.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

1/5 allow this fiction to annoying what brian order to sarah, easly brian can replaced position sarah and keep sarah bimbo cum basket for himself, its true uncle spiderman said With great power comes great responsibility, buf for brian nerd suck bastard not use the power wisely n common sense

maddictmaddict2 months ago

That's just plain mean.

Coochielover71Coochielover713 months ago

Awesome series!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Would like another chapter , like couple of years later mainly living situations, see the little sister who finally had to leave the corporate world after having her tits enlarged to f cups. Maybe the son finds the right chemicals to control bodies or emotions

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I gave it a 3 stars fantasy. Even thought it is a fantasy, at times the orders and conditions given were over the top.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Too much fluff at the start of each part. None of that was needed.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Well, this story finally came to a conclusion. It was over the top in many ways. There is something to be said for changing people's attitudes to be nicer to people but forcing them to destroy themselves is over the top. Yeah, it is a fantasy and some people need the rush to be in control. There are too many people in control that are not nice people. I have liked a lot of the stories by the author but at this point of writing, well, not this one.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Good complete mind control fantasy. Many people have fantasies such as this.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

A little over the edge on the extent of mind control and making the "suggestions" life long. And with almost all the stories I read; Edit.

theVikingSailortheVikingSailor8 months ago

The story is entertaining and Silk S is a very good writer. However, I don't have no truck with incestors and mothers cannot fuck their children. Also, even if a woman is a rotten egg, you still can't rape her. Revenge has its place, but this story was kind of over the top. Nevertheless, it is a good read and the writer gets an A for originality as well as her excellent writing skills.

daiblo598daiblo5989 months ago

fantastic i loved the series

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

What about the other lady planning her revenge?

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

As much as I feel bad for people that are completely taken advantage of, like the women (and one guy) in this story exposed to the drug, it's admittedly very difficult to feel sympathy for them when you see how they treat others. As if they're some kind of superior being and everyone is beneath them, like they are somehow entitled to be able to use them as they see fit. I guess it's true what they say: power corrupts, and this story shows it well. Is Brandon justified in what he did? Perhaps a little, though I think we can all agree, he took it WAY too far. The drug is just too powerful and the consequences too far-reaching, but at least he realized that part and destroyed the research and most of the samples. Would like to see a few more chapters though.

rbloch66rbloch6610 months ago

The drug wasn’t that bad. It actually gave the women permission to do what they already, secretly wanted.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Lol is it me or was this story really fucked up???

blackknight314blackknight31412 months ago

Great job, thanks for sharing your work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Lots of potential, but needs a followup.

rickylaw01rickylaw01about 1 year ago

Wow! I loved this story. Could read another 10 chapters. Great work

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please write another story were he got all the women pregnant. Give us more to the saga its way to good just to stop now.

4chuckssite4chuckssiteover 1 year ago

442. Normally I don’t care much for revenge stories or forced sex, but I understand the gist of this story, and I allow that you did a marvelous job in the creation and revelation of it. Now that it went this far perhaps you could restote Sarah, Kathryn, Lisa, and sister and neighbors to a better life and actually be viewed as a not so bad fellow. At times he seems to have a kinder attitude.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I enjoyed this tale & had very lengthy jack off sessions while reading it.

It was fairly well written without many homophones.a solid 4 stars.

Bill S.

TwistedDaveAuthorTwistedDaveAuthorover 1 year ago

Someone needs to aquire his other doses and continue the story. Damn, but you are a fine author

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Wow. Loved the whole series. Don't pay attention to the complaints in the comments. They have no imagination and one of them is homophobic. I'm sorry this story is done. Great job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

If only he doesn't share to other men all those he mind control. This would be awesome. What a faggot mc. Disgusting. Can't jack of this shit because I always imagined the consequence. A.I.D.S L, SYPHILIS, WARTS AND ALL OTHER NASTY SHIT.

Ellienora35Ellienora35about 2 years ago

You started messing up by the end. Lisa lies to her sister, and he tells Sarah she can never order someone to do something again, but she is able to tell him to "pull it out." Otherwise, it was fantastic

C_frommnC_frommnabout 2 years ago

Excellent!! You should follow up and tell us who he adds and who he humiliates.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This story was excellent. Well conceived and written. My only complaint is that the last chapter ended a little abruptly. It felt like the climax of the revenge story was rushed and unsatisfying. Otherwise, excellent story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This is actually so good

HardnDiscreetHardnDiscreetabout 2 years ago

This would be something i would dream of. I am totally immersed in your stories.... well done

MaysCuckMaysCuckover 2 years ago

Wow amazing I literally read all 6 chapters over the course of a couple hours. I laughed, I came, I cheered! Great story!

Aussie1951Aussie1951over 2 years ago

Losing his job just turned him into crazy lunatic. His revenge was a little over the top. So was the storyline. ⭐️⭐️⭐️

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Absolutely great series! Loved every word of it!

Raysun08Raysun08almost 3 years ago

Loved it! Always gets a rise from me....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Love your stories; never fails to get a rise from me. Keep up your good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

great series but hoping there is more...maybe?

PapaGolf414PapaGolf414almost 3 years ago

A Truly Disgusting Story with no morally redeeming qualities.

Royse69Royse69about 3 years ago

I loved how Brandon took care of his friends too.

It was cool how every woman that they were going to manipulate him even after being sprayed.

you keep some good twists and fun

excellently written

thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Fun. Definitely revenge of the nerds. Agree with other, want an epilogue - Crystal? Becky? Tara?, Karen?, Aunt? Mom? Carrie? - Who cares about the bully and his mom?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

where can I get that spray 😂😂😂😂😂

Scottsgot14UScottsgot14Uover 3 years ago

Very good story. All of it and loved the humor

nyteramblernyteramblerover 3 years ago

I enjoyed the story Nd wish there was at least one more chapter but understand that you have to end it eventually.

cedarmancedarmanover 3 years ago

Have read this series several times and still want more please continue writing this story has so many places to go. Thanks for sharing your stories with us.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

He should have had her take his shitty cock in her mouth right from her ass. Maybe have Karen eat the anal cream pie out of Sarah's ass.

Anonymous91Anonymous91over 3 years ago

Add one more chapter making all your slaves with cure. And make you to top with luxury life with all workers under your thumb. Alpha Male.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

please do another chapter

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Faggot...

I agree with the other commenter. Your derogatory use of the term, "faggot" makes you sound like a homophobic adolescent.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Sehr geile Story

es ist eine sehr geile Story, schade, dass sie zu ende ist, hätte mich interessiert, was weiter aus Parker wird und lisa..aber alle Geschichten haben mal ein ende, leider

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Pretty good series, but...

Are you sure you used "faggot" often enough? I know you're not 14YO. You can do better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
more

please do 1 more chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Intrigued

To be honest I don't normally read the whole story that is submitted. Just the good parts if you know what I mean. Anyway, I found myself drown in with this series from start to finish. Thinking at times who I would like to use that spray on.

RodimusMikeRodimusMikeover 4 years ago
Brings New Meaning.

To Ultimate Humiliation,to have Sarah turned into the skankiest office whore in history and to add insult to injury he may have even conceived his child with the woman who fired him,talk about getting screwed both literally and figuritively,Sarah should have lost the bitchy attitude and treated Brandon and everybody with respect but because she didn't she is now paying the price for her crimes.

Maybe one day Sarah will learn from her mistakes and become a better person.

Subject117Subject117about 5 years ago
Fucking great

This series was fucking awesome, I loved every chapter, too bad it wasn't longer. But other than that, it was highly enjoyable. Again, it's a shame it couldn't be longer. Keep on writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
OMG! Epic stupidity

Even for a fictional story this was SO bad I'm STILL laughing! Unbelievable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great series

Thank you for the great work. I loved every chapter as you walked me along through each event with a hard cock and a very horny ass and watering mouth. Great job

Rwa4768Rwa4768almost 6 years ago
Good story

I really enjoyed this story and look forward to reading the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great series!

I'm not usually a fan of mind control stories because I can't see them happening in real life. However, in this series, I really liked the drug premise and Brandon's coming to realize the danger such a drug would create if it got into the wrong hands. I also liked the retribution for the mother who enabled her son's bullying. I think every nerd has the fantasy of retaliating against those who attacked, belittled, or otherwise harassed them, and it was nice to see that played out by someone who eventually developed some morals about how they did it.

sexymeupsexymeupover 6 years ago
your story answered

my question I left on a comment on an earlier part of the story about walking up and spraying people with the drug. I figured he would have to come up with another way to apply the drug as not to be caught, the air vent was good thinking.

Rapier875Rapier875over 6 years ago
That was wonderful !

But please don't stop now, we need to see him take over the firm, sort out the board, take the company to new heights - and then marry Karen.

Please continue, there is more to cum with this story, a lot more.

Rapier

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
really good

really good whens the next chapter

C_frommnC_frommnalmost 7 years ago
He has

To get the Boardroom and Turn all of them to his Way. He can have Karen be his Assistant using the Bitch to get Contracts. and Still have the Janitor's use her.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
KEEP GOING!!!

So many unanswered questions about Brandon position, Karen, Becky, and Sarah ect.

jmkuehnjmkuehnabout 7 years ago
Follow up?

Thus was one of my favorite story lines from you. While I understand that you may have moved on it would be great if you added to this again. Many unanswered questions about the characters. We never learned the fallout from the tasks given to the sister and her cheerleader friend or the bitch neighbor. Hope you will consider continuing thus in the future

cuckoo444cuckoo444about 7 years ago
GREAT!!!!

I enjoyed the series emensly and the ending was GREAT, if only to short. I was so happy you brought in the janitors, that was icing on the revenge cake!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Don't stop yet

I'm not sure if it is possible but please keep this going. I'm so wet right now. God. I loved this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Hilarious!

"You're a bimbo cum bitch"

"You're a bimbo cum buckaroo".....

Laughed out loud!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Just keep writing

GRYFANxGRYFANxover 7 years ago
LOVE, LOVE, LOVE!

I really hate to see this story line end, but I also recognize that there are only so many places you can take it. Another fantastic thread of stories. I absolutely love your writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Continue

You need to pick up again. You still need to get The cheerleading bitch Crystal for that guy. Maybe spray the cheerleaders

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Epilogue?

It seems there is a lot of potential for this story. The Board (maybe), his home life with Karen (definitely), and his newfound "job opportunity" would all be great ideas

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I enjoyed the story for a while,, but it went a little too far

Too much of a good thing is too much. Writing is excellent, just more than was needed

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Please do more of this one

Make Karen his girlfriend and have his mother sister and aunt pregnant by him

C_frommnC_frommnalmost 8 years ago
I Like

The Idea of Taking over the Board Room. Maybe by then Sarah will have had her Child and working on #2

bastarddogofhellbastarddogofhellalmost 8 years ago
My sides

"You're a bimbo cum buckaroo."

I almost died laughing. It still hurts. But it's a good pain.

manfred564manfred564almost 8 years ago
loved it

I truely always have enjoyedyour stories and this one is no exception

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Not the end

Keep going

C_frommnC_frommnalmost 8 years ago
So the Board Room

I know you are probably sick of writing about Brandon. But I like the way he gets his Revenge. Now he needs to Procreate maybe with the Board members Wifes or Daughters. And why not Mrs Leveen or Aunty .

zena99zena99almost 8 years ago
Oh yeah

Why oh why does it have to end??????

TSreaderTSreaderalmost 8 years ago
Love it!

It's just so good, wish there was more...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Great story as always hun

Cant wait to read what happens next hun and like everyone else I would love to read what happens to Sarah, Karen, his aunt, sister, mom, and the cheerleader.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Concludion

Brandon sells Sarah to a black dominatrix for 99 cents and gives Sarah final orders to breed black babies to atone for her race issues.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
I agree with some comments.

I think the ending could use some tweaking; showing Karen where she is in the hierarchy, Sarah getting pregnant with someone's baby, giving Karen the antidote as well as the more intense orgasms formula. Also, you wrote how he had another full mind-control potion. Who was that for?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Great chapter

But I think it deserves an epilogue set a few years after Brandon becomes vice president of this company so we can see what becomes of all of the people he took control over. Does he free any of them or keep them as they are forever? What happens to the now gay bully? Does Brandon eventually marry one of them, this new secretary character, his sister, his mother? And given what was introduced to her in this chapter I think we would all like to see what happens to the boss long term after this. I know you work on a lot of stories, but I think this one really deserves a little bit more.

dawg_of_wardawg_of_warabout 8 years ago
Good but not the best.

This series was great to read. Each chapter generally topping the next. However, this last installment left me wanting. Please understand, I love your writings, but was just hoping for more as you finished this series.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
its a fucking great story

It's fucking great and imagining is so easy with your skilled writing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
great series

what a great series this was sorry to see that you are finishing it though

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Thank you for this series, i liked these stories very much.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
turned off by the incest and no birth-control

but the rest made up for it

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