All Comments on 'Romancing the Raptor'

Well written, interesting storyline. More please!

Mind.....blown.....

What can I saw. I'm a weirdo. But you're lying to yourself if you aren't thinking now what I thought, if you weren't already.

Excellent story. Would love a part two.

great!

I shall call it...Jurassic Pork.

Bad beyond words jokes aside, truly lovely. Though, I must admit, the description and the title doth lie, as the 'romance' so to speak starts late in the work, I feel no disgruntlement with what you hath wrought.

This is an excellent start and needs a second story or two on what happens after this. What does McMurtry have in mind, what does Chastity, perhaps with Thompson do to stop them.

wow, good take on several"classic" sifi themes, keep up the good work!

At first blush I thought the story would be ridiculous but it morphed into something pretty interesting. A sequel planned??

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Thanks, everyone! I'm still new to literotica, so I'm not sure if there's an easier way to message people. Any advice or guidance--I'm wide open to receive it! :)

To answer the question: Yes, Chastity Summers will be back and the story will continue!

The title made me have less than no expectations, but you did an awesome job building an interesting concept around it. Hell it was so fun to read, that for a few mins i forgot that it is supposed to be on this site (and thus involve eroticism). Keep up the good work!

Just put a message at the end of the story "to be continued" and that answers the readers questions when sequels are desired.

A nice long story with plot that has a confirmed future of additional chapters.

What a shame.

The fact that I can't simply skip forward in time until it's release, that is >_>

*its.

Freaking lack of an edit function.

Normally i pick a story for a good rub and i done but this one was so unexpected and unique i stayed for the whole ride and what a ride i was. Please tell me part two is in the works and on its way ?

Oh i see you have already commented that there will be a sequel i look forward to it.

I certainly didn't expect such an intriguing story development and amazing writing from the given title. Quite frankly, this is easily good enough to give everybody pause who's laughing about dino erotica. It's a prime example for a story that just takes you to somewhere you might not have felt comfortable going on your own in a very natural way. And it has awesome characters.

This should be for sale on Amazon as a novel.

Holey moley! Amazing sci-fi here on Lit! Truly remarkable and good stuff! Now I simply have to read everything you've posted here.

Aw, phooey, only one other story... and 5 years in between. Oh well, genius takes time, don'cha know?