All Comments on 'Running from Love Pt. 01 - Introduction'

This a fantastic story and only on chapter one cannot wait for the next few chapters you will write for us to read Billyslate I wonder where you get your ideas from for these stories please please do not stop writing your wonderful stories I am already looking forward to the next chapter please do not keep us waiting to long. xxxxx

Sorry. Do I only have the impression that this was some kind of strange to read? With all the repetitions? Isn't there a better way to write about her schools she attended then repeating the name like three times in three following sentences?

Hi tremonia,

Thanks for reading my story and your comment.

I'm a technical/scientific writer by profession, so am more attentive to detail. Some commenters to my earlier stories suggested I be more repetitive to detail in multicharacter stories, so the readers clearly understand who-where-when.

Writing Romance & Erotica is a fun hobby, so I've adjusted my writing style based on recommendations of a few LIT's best authors.

Everyone seems to have their style preference, so I try to avoid major pitfalls.

Again, many thanks for reading my stories! Billyslate