All Comments on 'Sarah'
by Lancerlott
- 17 Comments
Liked the story & the presentation.
Set the scene, with the understandable level of uncertainty/nervousness as to if Sarah would show, we’ve all gone through that.
Then presented just enough of the background to get the reader interested & established the characters before going onto the main story.
All in all quite enjoyable and hope the trio will have further adventures, there’s so much more that could do
5 stars 👍🏻
Good scenario and well written sex. Keeping the names straight can be tough, but it’s distracting for the reader to go back and check whose parts are on action.
Great story I miss the couple who trusted us enough to introduce these sort of hijinks.
Outstanding! The ending was to die for. Definitely 5 stars. Wish I could give you more. A few times the names got mixed up (Sarah should have been Kristen) but hey it happens
Brilliant story, well written, and sooo sexy. I do hope that there is a part 2 or 3? I cant wait
A really great, HOT story. Well done. Please add the next chapter soon,
Thanks for the feedback everyone. I'm glad you all liked the story. And profound apologies for the repeated mix-ups in the names. I'm normally not that sloppy with the proof reading. I'll see if I can fix it and repost. Cheers, Lancerlott
A little concerning that you don’t know what comes out of asses. Anal can be enjoyed but cleanliness is an issue and definitely immediately afterwards, a man would go straight for the shower to clean his dick
Good premise.
But sooooo automatic.
No trepidation at all.
They should have quizzed Sarah about her porn watching proclivities. What did she watch? What did she like the best?
Did her breasts really have to be DD's?
Three stars.
Great story, super hot. I so want that situation for myself. I would be very patient and gentle; if need be!