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- Schoolies Week
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Click here"Okay," I said. Yeah, my knees were totally gone.
"Good girl," he said, and he still hadn't smiled and he was cracking a fat just standing there looking at me coz I looked down and there it was and I absolutely knew what he wanted and I thought about it real fast and it didn't exactly take more than a nanosecond to decide. Well, what'd I been doing all schoolies week? I knew Megan's Dad's name, which was more than I could say for half the guys we'd met over the last week.
"Mark," I breathed, and yeah, my heart was pounding like a drum coz this wasn't some schoolie like me. This was my bestie's Dad and we lived in the same house.
"Ching-Ching," he said, and his finger stroked my jawline and I just shivered. Shivered and my hand reached out and brushed him through his jeans, where he was big and hard and I was real glad him and Megan's mum were separated coz I was gonna do it with him. I knew I was and the look on his face when I touched him there, I knew what he wanted and that old fella of his was bloody rock hard.
"Forget the flat white," I said, and I wanted him to take me in his arms. "Why don't you just come to my room tonight." I couldn't smile. All I could do was look at him, cheeks flaming coz I was offering myself up to him on a plate, which was what I'd done with those guys at Surfers but this wasn't like schoolies week up north where Megan and I had picked guys up for a quickie. This wasn't like that at all.
"After Megan's asleep," I added, coz when she was out, she slept like a rock and nothing but nothing'd wake her up.
"Okay," he said, very slowly, and I knew I'd surprised him coz he was looking totally gobsmacked.
"If you want," I said, and now I wasn't sure of myself at all.
"Ching-Ching," he breathed, and that look said he wanted to kiss me and my look said yeah, kiss me good and somehow we were a lot closer to each other and my hand clasped him where he was hard. Big and hard and I wanted him so bad and if he came to my room tonight or anytime, I was gonna make myself look bloody attractive alright.
"Mark," I whispered, and I had no idea what else to say coz right then, there weren't any words for what I was feeling.
"Tonight," he said.
"Okay," I said, just about collapsing and I was a bit sore from last night but who cared. Not me.
"We can go now," Megan said, bouncing out of the washroom and we both stepped back and she was, like, totally oblivious and I just knew this was gonna turn into a dogs breakfast if I wasn't careful but I didn't care and I knew Schoolies Week had changed me coz last week, I'd never have done something like this. Not in my wildest daydreams.
I glanced sideways at Mark as I slid into the front passenger seat, my cheeks pink, 'n he glanced at me and smiled and that look said that things had changed alright, changed with just a few words between us and I knew Schoolies Week was history.
Coz there was Before Schoolies Week.
And there was Schoolies Week.
And now there was Mark.
So I do hope you enjoyed my little Australian story. I'd also like to thank all the other authors on Literotica who submitted story's for the In a Sunburned Country" story event.. It's been great to see so many participants, and I hope all you readers enjoy all the other Aussie-themed stories that're part of this event. It was fun to organize, altho to be honest my major contribution was the idea and the blurb that kicked it off and Laurel's done all the hard work getting all the stories together and on the Event Page.
All of that said, without all you readers, it wouldn't happen and I and the other author's on Literotica who write this stuff really appreciate each and every one of you, because ("coz" haha) without you it just wouldn't happen. You're our inspiration and your reading our stories is our reward. So a thank you to each and every reader whose read this and the other stories submitted for this Event. You're the people that make it happen just by reading and enjoying! Thanks again all of you ....... Chloe
- COMMENTS
Nobody in the North Sydney High catchment speaks like that and there’s never been a Maccas at Byron.
But you did a good job of an Aussie bogan.
Great story as always. You need to add an Aussie dictionary for the terms used though.
Is it just me or did Bryce become Lachlan in this story? I could swear the pair were Jase & Bryce in that scene.
Just about fell off my chair laughing over this one:
"at least I didn't stand out like a dog's balls"
5*
Have always loved or greatly liked all your stories. This one as well but couldn't keep withh the Aussie talk and slang so i found it a little difficult to keep going.
That was a fun read. Looking forward to what you have next for us.
I'm planning right not to finish "Shanghai Candy" in January and "The Final Night" in February but when they're available depends on the publisher. After that, I'm planning the first three novels in an erotic SF series ("Penetration Testing", "Protected Access" and "Insertion Force."). Hopefully it'll sell because I have a twelve book series mapped out. On LIT, I'm going to shoot for a story each month through next year, mostly followups on existing series that I've left hanging. Jeong Park, Chinese Takeout and Happy Birthday (2 chapters each in that order). Boiled down, I'm shooting for one 80-100k words novel and one 20-30k story on LIT each month right through next year. About 1.5 million words, writing part-time. Aim high and you might miss, but you'll be closer than if you aimed low. Anyhow, I'm on Facebook and I post a bit more on what I;m doing there, so search for ChloeTzang on FB and Friend me or follow me and you'll get the updates and you can ask away. And push me!!! :)
Good stuff! when can we expect the next instalments of Mistaken Identity? Really enjoyed it!
I was kind of hoping she'd like one well enough...that he'd earn a day or few!
Your research and language is phenomenal.
Now...howzabout the story of your adventures while researching this story? :+))
I'm salivating already! :+)))
And thanks also for still putting stories on Lit.
I hope we might see Ching Ching and Mark in parts 2-10.
You either have a very active imagination or a wonderful real life.l think the later and am so jealous. Your stories get better and better and I hope your book publishings go from strength to strength, you deserve it for adding so much pleasure to the world.
Good fun story, froth and bubble stuff - well told. Mebbe you could have cut one or two scenes but mebbe not. Well done.
This is the first of your stories I've read and I thoroughly enjoyed it. The lazy Susan scene was a classic. I don't like to nitpick but you may have gone overboard with the Australian vernacular. A lot of the stuff you used is hilarious but not really in common usage e.g. drongo, root rats etc. I also think you'd be hard pressed to find XXXX beer in Sydney. You almost lost me with the Ute. That would be illegal everywhere in Australia except in someone's paddock. Dux of North Sydney Girls High? Not impressed with their sex education. Birth Control? STDs? I hope she used a condom with Mark.
The Aussie theme just works, and the story is up to your usual standards. The voting system here is broken - I want to give it a ten and it only goes to five.
Great fun read, loved the simple joy throughout and thankful that it didn't turn nasty, thank you Chloë. 5*
Had to read your story since the sunburned country event was your idea. Great job with the Aussieness. I was waiting for the girls to spend the arvo sculling passion pop on the beach and playing a few rounds of goon of fortune! Fun times. You’ll probably give modern toolies high expectations of actually scoring though ;)
It's been way too long since I last read any ChloeTzang. I'd forgotten just how hot your stories are. Your stream of concious style is so detailed - like you're recording the firing of every single synapse in the narrator's brain. And just the authenticity in this one. It's hard to believe you're not actually Australian. I mean, maybe a native could pick it apart, but I felt totally emersed as a foreigner.
I imagine a lot of the research got done while you were writing "Dead Heart", but knowing you cranked this story out in less than a week (while organizing the last days of the anthology) just amazes me. I am in awe.
Really? That’s illegal? I saw that in the country outside of Adelaide so I went with it for the story. What about in the back of a panel van?