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It was interesting how you structured the story; it could easily have been sweet, but then it suddenly morphed into bitter and violent, and then ended up sort of sweet again. Loneliness is a powerful force, and you seemed to capture it in one of its darker incarnations. I liked the story. Five stars from me, JB Edwards
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