All Comments on 'Sister Tempts Brother'

i liked where you went with it but i think including a little more background and putting dialogue in would've helped out alot

Please continue.

Now continue their expanding relationship and life together!

needed a lot more background! background! background! its was Sis saying just check me out in bikini then next she nude and sucking dick

Mmmm - so damn HOT - Yes we have to have more info Plus what they obviously do next ..... what brought that on ?? Maybe, getting her brother to screw here many times Before leaving for college ??

Something to compare to etc. I wonder what her coming home for semester break will be like 6 months from now ! Please more and thank you.

A nice start if there's more to come I hope there is a good story to wrap around the sex.

We need a prologue! And i do hope you tell more at a time than just snippets. This entry is diary-like

Yes, a nice story -- his sister knew what she wanted and got it !! I am sure they both have many ideas and I'd like to hear what they do next !! maybe, her brother won't be so shy next time ??? Thank you.

so you two didn't do anal? well that sucks, but oh well i guess.

A good start, but just too vague and incomplete. Please give this another rewrite and give it a more indepth adaptation.

Did you get bored and finish it off before anything happened?

OK this was a great start to your story but we need more.